“even my parent's salary can not completely cover my expense in US, my family have enough deposit to supoport my two year study and living in US. so I think that my financial support is strong”——和美国人交流的时候,除非他问到,否则永远不要尝试去解释你的弱项,别让他注意到,你越解释,他就越认为你心虚,把话题引到你的强项上。
“After graduation form Drexel University, I wil come back to china and find a job in chinese large financial organizations such as industrial and commercial bank of china or China International Trust and Investment Corporation. Finance industry is a booming industry in china and With the background of US enducation and high financial technology, I have absolute advantages over other competitors in company. ”
——对中国目前金融形势你再分析一下,你的oppptunity不仅仅是因为大形势好,而且US background也不能保证你有"absolute advantage"。你想进大型金融公司,能否提供一些信息来证明他们有比较大的probability来要你。