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[i习作temp] issue56 【mettle作文小组】第八次作业 by imagic80 [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-7-13 19:26:25 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
56"Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."
当前问题因其紧迫性必须马上解决,长远问题因其长远性更不容忽视。正确的态度是寻求二者的平衡。即解决当前问题又能兼顾长远问题。
1、当前问题顾名思义就是不得不立即解决的大问题。为了社会的稳定和经济的发展,政府必须立即解决这些问题。
2、长远问题虽然不会马上发生,但是总有一天会发生的。而且后果会很严重,破坏性也很强。更重要的是,发生以后就无法解决了,只能补救,但是花的代价会很大。
3、政府可以合理的分配人力、物力和精力在当前问题和长远问题上。当前问题立即寻求解决知道,长远问题讲求循序渐进,重在预防。
总之,即能解决当前问题又能预防长远问题的政府才是一个负责、有远见、有能力的政府。人们在这样的政府领导下才能相信今天,期待明天。
There is much controversy over the issue of the attitude of government toward immediate problems of today and anticipated problems of the future. Some people claim that government should focus on the immediate problems which are more urgent, while others advocate that anticipated problems also should not be ignored. On balance, I would argue that why do not we find a better approach to settle down both of them without overlooking the other.
Immediate problems, namely the problems that agonize and afflict people mostly, actually need to be addressed by government as soon as possible. Without solving these problems, the normal living of publid will be in danger. Undoubtely, modern society teems with this kind of problems, such as crimes, wars, drag abuse, unemployment and so on. If the policeman could not put murderers into prison, how can its residents have a good sleep without worrying about being murdered. If the army could not expel aggressors out of their land, how can its people live peacefully? If the government could not take some measures to prevent drag abuse, how can its people lead a healthy life? If the government could not solve the problem of unemployment, how can they ensure the stability of the society? The existence of these immediate problems extremely threaten people’s normal living. So the government must try their best to solve these problems as soon as possible.
Anticipated problems, namely the problems that will happen in the future, are easily ignored by the government deliberately or unintendedly for the following reasons. Firstly, solving this problems requires time. In democratic societies where election for new government is held once every a few years, under pressure to produce immediate and tangible achievements, government often eschew the inconvienience of dealing with long-term problems, expecting their successors to take over the responsibility. Secondly, chronic problems are often harder to solve. These problems develop little by little, often going unnoticed for a very long time until they pass the threshold and start to exert their negative influence. Many new leaders who try to solve this problems handed down from their predecessors give up at last for its difficulty. As a result, long –term problems are often overlooked and therefor aggravate the situation. Consequently, more attention should be called upon on long-term anticipated problems as seriously as they do to immediate problems.
Therefore, the last question is how should the government allocate their attention, money and jobs to immediate problems and anticipated ones. As far as immediate problems are concerned, the government should take immediate action to tackle them with most of their effort at that time while when it comes to the anticipated problems, the best way to handle them is to prevent them from happening. It is the duty of the government to find a delicate balance of the two kinds of problems.
In summary, a responsible, foresighting and competent government can not only get rid of the immediate problem they faced, but also take effective measures to combat or prevent the anticipated ones.



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There is much controversy over the issue of the attitude of government toward immediate problems of today and anticipated problems of the future. Some people claim that government should focus on the immediate problems which are more urgent, while others advocate that anticipated problems also should not be ignored. On balance, I would argue that why do not we 这句写得有点别扭find a better approach to settle down both of them without overlooking the otherwithout overlooking either one.这里说要找到新出路,结果后文没有再提及
Immediate problems, namely the problems that agonize and afflict people mostly, actually need to be addressed by government as soon as possible. Without solving these problems, the normal living of publidpeople? will be in danger. Undoubtelyundoubtedly, modern society teems with this kind of problems, such as crimes, wars, drag abuse, unemployment and so on. If the policeman could not put murderers into prison, how can its residents have a good sleep without worrying about being murdered. If the army could not expel aggressors out of their land, how can its people live peacefully? If the government could not take some measures to prevent drag abuse, how can its people lead a healthy life? If the government could not solve the problem of unemployment, how can they ensure the stability of the society? The existence of these immediate problems extremely threaten people’s normal living. So the government must try their best to solve these problems as soon as possible.
Anticipated problems, namely the problems that will happen in the future, are easily ignored by the government deliberately or unintendedly for the following reasons. Firstly, solving thisthese problems requires time. In democratic societies where election for new government is held once every a few years, under pressure to produce immediate and tangible achievements, government often eschew the inconvienienceinconvenience of dealing with long-term problems, expecting their successors to take over the responsibility. Secondly, chronic problems are often harder to solve和chronic problems有什么关系?. These problems develop little by little, often going unnoticed for a very long time until they pass the threshold and start to exert their negative influence. Many new leaders who try to solve thisthese problems handed down from their predecessors give up at last for its difficulty. As a result, long –term problems are often overlooked and therefore aggravate the situation. Consequently, more attention should be called upon on long-term anticipated problems as seriously as they do to immediate problems.firstly分析得不错,chronic其实也可以理解,但是分析得不清楚
Therefore, the last question is how should the government allocate their attention, money and jobs to immediate problems and anticipated ones. As far as immediate problems are concerned, the government should take immediate action to tackle them with most of their effort at that time while when it comes to the anticipated problems, the best way to handle them is to prevent them from happening. It is the duty of the government to find a delicate balance of the two kinds of problems.和第一段呼应,但是没有新方法,只是分别应对
In summary, a responsible, fore sighting and competent government can not only get rid of the immediate problem they faced, but also take effective measures to combat or prevent the anticipated ones.

总体还不错,就事论事,要说缺点就是似乎找不到出彩的地方。

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发表于 2007-7-22 16:36:10 |只看该作者
路过,路过

感觉提纲的第2点和段落第2段不太一样

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