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With the development of technology and science, globalization is an ineluctable trend to permeate all over the world. Despite of the more convenience what(改为it) would bring about, it also presents to us severe global problems such as air pollution, global warming, acid rain and so on what demand of global cooperation（这句话是什么意思？）. Therefore, I agree with the statement that a global university should be designed to solve the world’s most persistent social problems.To begin with, a global university could be necessary for solving severe problems which are relevant to the whole destinies of human beings by alleging the every effect that(去掉that) provided by the nations from worldwide（这句话有点复杂，不是很明白，why通过allege the every effect就解决问题了？再弱问下这个allege the every effect是什么意思啊？是通过各国努力的意思么？）. With the advent of industry revolution, human beings have been stepped（人类被step？应该是stepping吧~） into a high developed and modernized（这里用modern就可以了吧） society. Although we carve（carve不是雕刻，表面切割的意思么？这里cut就可以了吧~）a piece of economic pie as their offspring, meanwhile we have to take a responsibility of ravages of environment.（有责任去ravage environment？另外这句话用虽然但是的结构逻辑上似乎不是很恰当，您看这样改可以么？As their offspring to share the economic benefit, people nowadays are using resource wastefully）Similar problems also continually occur on the global level. How can merely a separated country or nation deal with the difficulties like: global warming, climate change, ozone depletion, air pollution and so forth? If there was an global university designed to engage students from all worldwide （all 和worldwide意思重复，建议删一个）nations, at that time, （用了if 这个at that time就免了吧）a global university it could provide us with a high platform to tolerant differing（建议用different） viewpoints from various of people with different nationalities, to accept a large amount pieces of creative advice and suggestions from all over the world and to cooperate across cultural and national boundaries. Although there are distinguish conditions in various countries, the foundations of the hot issues are having（用have就可以了吧）the common characters. Thereafter（建议用therefore或者in short）, the global university can help to establish a common ground or（to？） reach a consensus.A global university stimulates(建议用encourage) every nation to communicate on the basis of variety culture, civilization and race with each other as well. In this condition, people get an access to realize the most difficult social problems and find out an essential method to solve those matters. A simple example can illustrate this assertion--- Princeton University, one of the most excellent colleges in worldwide, set up a curriculum to discuss the function media plays in terrorism all over the world in spring of 2003. This course mainly provides a discussion on the matter “9.11” and gives comment on such reports about how to affect the policy of American government and international society. In this way, students can know foreign culture, race and countries profoundly. Undoubtedly, professors and students can work out society issues in the most efficient ways.(这句话太绝对了！感情太强烈了。。) In a word, this kind of university would contribute to the understanding between each other and help solve the persistent social problems.（this example is ZZed）呵呵，其实看的不是很明白这个例子要说明什么囧~Furthermore, it is no denying that a global university provides individuals from different countries a fair and equal opportunity to study together, in turn, individuals in the global university would benefit from that kind of experience and contribute to their motherland. Every student and faculty would like to represent their motherland and carry their own measures and means（本文用了很多这种类似的相同单词的连用，尽量意思有所区别吧~） to deal with problems according to different backgrounds.其实个人感觉全球性大学不一定可以确保fair，我的一个观点就是如果没有一个合理的system的话，发达国家仍会control这个大学，起不到真正的作用；建议说明一下为什么这个大学可以fair？只是个人意见哦~However, putting this creative suggestion of establishing a global university into practice （缺少主语）also confronts certain difficulties. Who is able to lead the global university regardless of individual interest? What kind of administration system could be adopted? Could a nation neglect its own benefits or parochial problems to totally support the program in economic and material respects? Whether a global university is indeed feasible in the politics? Hardly can one assure these potential problems could be solved well. But I believe that the brilliant human beings （弱问形容人可以用brilliant咩？）could find the counterbalance （建议find a way to strike a balance ）in the coming future.To sum up, global communication and cooperation are in urgent needed urgently confronting(这个又缺主语了，谁confront？) so many problems. A global university, what is more, is a precious opportunity for all nations to participate into this global cooperation. There are also some other aspects related to the issue. Nevertheless, I think those factors mentioned above could adequately demonstrate my view. From what has been discussed above, I can come to the conclusion (建议the conclusion is clear )that "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems" （恩，把题目copy了，改写下吧）and the realization of the global university is not a remote dream. 以上纯属个人观点~请表介意~我的拙作还请猛拍~ | 
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