issue144 [OB小组]第9次作业_stonescj-艺术而不是评论家永久的价值

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144"It isthe artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lastingvalue."
*a person whoevaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
1. 解释value。artist的originality是lasting value的最主要成因。没有artist的originality，就不会有artistic work
2. artist的uniqueness也是lasting value另外一个主要成因。
3. ritic对于社会对artistic的理解起了较为重要的作用，

I fundamentally in support to the assertion that the artist has bring the lasting value of arts to society. Nevertheless, we can not ignore the critic who also plays an irreplaceable role between artist and society.

To begin with, no one can deny that artist has created significant art works, which are seems as monumental works inherited from generations to generations. Generally, lasting value usually contains a certainly value that can impact the society for a long time. It is Leonardo da Vinci who create the eternal smile of Mona Lisa. It is Shakespeare who cast life to Romeo and Julie. It is Van Gogh who painted the most brilliant "sun flower" that show people the sense hope. Without those classical innovations of artists, it is impossible for us to possess so many treasures and human culture will not so flourishing. In fact, as a result of the originality and emotion of the artist, their works could be favored by so many people. Without the artist, there is not artist work, let alone lasting value.

Furthermore, except originality of artist, there exists another paramount ingredient uniqueness that holds the lasting value. It is incontestable that uniqueness is one of the important factors to evaluate an art work. Even though the works possess excellent merits, it would not be well-loved by ordinary people if there are some similar works exist. There is only one Sistine Chapel in the world, whose pictures on the ceiling is unique. There is only one Aifeier Tower in the world, which is the symbol of France. Moreover, it is also unique that art works impact to federal culture. So uniqueness is the essential characteristic that included in the art works, which also influence the lasting value. Without artist, art die.

However, artist and critic are seems as twins and critique usually based on artist. That is to say, only critic can discover the potential significant of art work after artist created. The correlation between artist and critic is the same as advertisement and commodity. Although most works are created to serve the public, their knowledge ken is not so wide that to appreciate the essential of the works. According to the critics' extensive olfaction, they have exploited and uncovered the lighting point of art works, and then exhibit them to the society. Moreover, artist should possess their individual space, for instance, the restriction and censorship of Russia had severely influence the creation of artists at that time. Under the help of critics, artist could get rid of the control and of government and have more freedom to create more significant art works. In a word, critic plays an irreplaceable role in the society and its important functions could not be effaced.

To sum up, it is unquestionable that the artist creates the lasting value of art works. Meanwhile critics showed us the potential value of these works and help public to understand it .Besides, both artist and critic are indispensably roles in the development of human society.

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issue144 [OB小组]第9次作业_stonescj-艺术而不是评论家永久的价值

144"It isthe artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lastingvalue."
*a person whoevaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
1. 解释value。artist的originality是lasting value的最主要成因。没有artist的originality，就不会有artistic work
2. artist的uniqueness也是lasting value另外一个主要成因。
3. ritic对于社会对artistic的理解起了较为重要的作用，

I fundamentally in support to the assertion that the artist has bring the lasting value of arts to society. Nevertheless, we can not ignore the critic who also plays an irreplaceable role between artist and society.

To begin with, no one can deny that artist has created significant art works, which are seems as monumental works inherited from generations to generations. Generally, lasting value usually contains a certainly value that can impact the society for a long time. It is Leonardo da Vinci who create the eternal smile of Mona Lisa. It is Shakespeare who cast life to Romeo and Julie. It is Van Gogh who painted the most brilliant "sun flower" that show people the sense hope. Without those classical innovations of artists, it is impossible for us to possess so many treasures and human culture will not so flourishing. In fact, as a result of the originality and emotion of the artist, their works could be favored by so many people. Without the artist, there is not artist work, let alone lasting value.

Furthermore, except originality of artist, there exists(这个表达好奇怪,there're吧) another paramount ingredient uniqueness that holds the lasting value. It is incontestable that uniqueness is one of the important factors to evaluate an art work. Even though the works possess excellent merits, it would not be well-loved by ordinary people if there are some similar works exist. There is only one Sistine Chapel in the world, whose pictures on the ceiling is unique. There is only one Eiffel Tower in the world, which is the symbol of France. Moreover, it is also unique that art works impact to federal culture. So uniqueness is the essential characteristic that included in the art works, which also influence the lasting value. Without artist, art dies.

However, artist and critic are seems as twins and critique usually based on artist. That is to say, only critic can discover the potential significant of art work after artist created. The correlation between artist and critic is the same as advertisement and commodity. Although most works are created to serve the public, their knowledge ken is not so wide that to appreciate the essential of the works. According to the critics' extensive olfaction, they have exploited and uncovered the lighting point of art works, and then exhibit them to the society. Moreover, artist should possess their individual space, for instance, the restriction and censorship of Russia had severely influence the creation of artists at that time. Under the help of critics, artist could get rid of the control and of government and have more freedom to create more significant art works. In a word, critic plays an irreplaceable role in the society and its important functions could not be effaced.

To sum up, it is unquestionable that the artist creates the lasting value of art works(artists create the lasting value不会questionable,questionable的地方是critics,所以这句话应该加上个only the artists creates the lasting...). Meanwhile critics showed us the potential value of these works and help public to understand it .Besides, both artist and critic are indispensably roles in the development of human society.(用besides结尾不好,感觉像还没有写完一样)

总体上说理还是很到位的,例子也得当,加油!

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144"It isthe artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lastingvalue."
*a person whoevaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
1. 解释value。artist的originality是lasting value的最主要成因。没有artist的originality，就不会有artistic work
2. artist的uniqueness也是lasting value另外一个主要成因。
3. ritic对于社会对artistic的理解起了较为重要的作用，

I fundamentally in support to the assertion (谓语)that the artist has bring the lasting value of arts to society. Nevertheless, we can not ignore the critic who also plays an irreplaceable role between artist and society.不错的句子

To begin with, no one can deny that artist has created significant art works, which are seems as monumental works inherited from generations to generations. Generally, lasting value usually contains a certainly value that can impact the society for a long time. It is Leonardo da Vinci who create the eternal smile of Mona Lisa. It is Shakespeare who cast life to Romeo and Julie. It is Van Gogh who painted the most brilliant "sun flower" that show people the sense hope.排比句总是气势强大 Without those classical innovations of artists, it is impossible for us to possess so many treasures and human culture will not so flourishing. In fact, as a result of the originality and emotion of the artist, their works could be favored by so many people. Without the artist, there is not artist work, let alone lasting value.

Furthermore, except originality of artist, there exists another paramount ingredient uniqueness that holds the lasting value. It is incontestable that uniqueness is one of the important factors to evaluate an art work. Even though the works possess excellent merits, it would not be well-loved by ordinary people if there are some similar works exist. There is only one Sistine Chapel in the world, whose pictures on the ceiling is unique. There is only one Aifeier Tower in the world, which is the symbol of France气势壮烈的排比句，再次致敬~~~. Moreover, it is also unique that art works impact to federal culture. So uniqueness is the essential characteristic that included in the art works, which also influence the lasting value. Without artist, art die.

However, artist and critic are seems as twins and critique usually based on artist. That is to say, only critic can discover the potential significant of art work after artist created. The correlation between artist and critic is the same as advertisement and commodity. Although most works are created to serve the public, their knowledge ken is not so wide that to appreciate the essential of the works. According to the critics' extensive olfaction, they have exploited and uncovered the lighting point of art works, and then exhibit them to the society. Moreover, artist should possess their individual space（我觉得这个ts可以改改，和critic扯上关系，比如改成，critic可以帮助艺术家posses个人空间）, for instance, the restriction and censorship of Russia had severely influence the creation of artists at that time. Under the help of critics, artist could get rid of the control and of government and have more freedom to create more significant art works. In a word, critic plays an irreplaceable role in the society and its important functions could not be effaced.

To sum up, it is unquestionable that the artist creates the lasting value of art works. Meanwhile critics showed us the potential value of these works and help public to understand it .Besides, both artist and critic are indispensably roles in the development of human society.

层次结构都挺好的。

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I fundamentally in support to the assertion that the artist has bring the lasting value of arts to society. Nevertheless, we can not ignore the critic who also plays an irreplaceable role between artist and society.很简洁，赞！

To begin with, no one can deny that artist has created significant art works, which are seems as monumental works inherited from generations to generations. Generally, lasting value usually contains a certainly value that can impact the society for a long time.【里对last做了一个很好的解释】It is Leonardo da Vinci who create the eternal smile of Mona Lisa. It is Shakespeare who cast life to Romeo and Julie. It is Van Gogh who painted the most brilliant "sun flower" that show people the sense hope. 【这几个排比句用的很不错】 classical innovations of artists, it is impossible for us to possess so many treasures and human culture will not so flourishing. In fact, as a result of the originality and emotion of the artist, their works could be favored by so many people. Without the artist, there is not artist work, let alone lasting value.

Furthermore, except originality of artist, there exists another paramount ingredient uniqueness that holds the lasting value. 【开头第一句话就应该说明白段落的主要意思啊】is incontestable that uniqueness is one of the important factors to evaluate an art work. Even though the works possess excellent merits, it would not be well-loved by ordinary people if there are some similar works exist. There is only one Sistine Chapel in the world, whose pictures on the ceiling is unique. There is only one Aifeier Tower in the world, which is the symbol of France. Moreover, it is also unique that art works impact to federal culture. So uniqueness is the essential characteristic that included in the art works, which also influence the lasting value. Without artist, art die.

However, artist and critic are seems as twins and critique usually based on artist. 【这句话说的很形象】to say, only critic can discover the potential significant of art work after artist created. The correlation between artist and critic is the same as advertisement and commodity.【这个说的很好啊】 most works are created to serve the public, their knowledge ken is not so wide that to appreciate the essential of the works. According to the critics' extensive olfaction, they have exploited and uncovered the lighting point of art works, and then exhibit them to the society. Moreover, artist should possess their individual space, for instance, the restriction and censorship of Russia had severely influence the creation of artists at that time. Under the help of critics, artist could get rid of the control and of government and have more freedom to create more significant art works. In a word, critic plays an irreplaceable role in the society and its important functions could not be effaced.这一段论证的很出色，就是如果能举出真正的例子那就最好不过了

To sum up, it is unquestionable that the artist creates the lasting value of art works. Meanwhile critics showed us the potential value of these works and help public to understand it .Besides, both artist and critic are indispensably roles in the development of human society. 总结的也很好

一句话5.5分的作文，敢问仁兄用了多少时间写这篇issue啊，包括思考时间？

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呵呵，多谢夸奖！写了一个小时多，不过我修改了很久

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I fundamentally in support to the assertion that the artist has bring the lasting value of arts to society. Nevertheless, we can not ignore the critic who also plays an irreplaceable role between artist and society.

To begin with, no one can deny that artist has created significant art works, which are seems as monumental works inherited from generations to generations. Generally, lasting value usually contains a certainly value that can impact the society for a long time. It is Leonardo da Vinci who create the eternal smile of Mona Lisa. It is Shakespeare who cast life to Romeo and Julie. It is Van Gogh who painted the most brilliant "sun flower" that show people the sense hope. Without those classical innovations of artists, it is impossible for us to possess so many treasures and human culture will not so flourishing. In fact, as a result of the originality and emotion of the artist, their works could be favored by so many people. Without the artist, there is not artist work, let alone lasting value.

Furthermore, except originality of artist, there exists another paramount ingredient uniqueness that holds the lasting value. It is incontestable that uniqueness is one of the important factors to evaluate an art work. Even though the works possess excellent merits, it would not be well-loved by ordinary people if there are some similar works exist. There is only one Sistine Chapel in the world, whose pictures on the ceiling is unique. There is only one Aifeier Tower in the world, which is the symbol of France. Moreover, it is also unique that art works impact to federal culture. So uniqueness is the essential characteristic that included in the art works, which also influence the lasting value. Without artist, art die.(前面都是在论述 artist的uniqueness也是lasting value另外一个主要成因，突然以这句话结尾，有点不知所措)

However, artist and critic are seems as twins and critique usually based on artist. That is to say, only critic can discover the potential significant of art work after artist created. The correlation between artist and critic is the same as advertisement and commodity. Although most works are created to serve the public, their knowledge ken is not so wide that to appreciate the essential of the works. According to the critics' extensive olfaction, they have exploited and uncovered the lighting point of art works, and then exhibit them to the society. Moreover, artist should possess their individual space, for instance, the restriction and censorship of Russia had severely influence the creation of artists at that time. Under the help of critics, artist could get rid of the control and of government and have more freedom to create more significant art works. In a word, critic plays an irreplaceable role in the society and its important functions could not be effaced.

To sum up, it is unquestionable that the artist creates the lasting value of art works. Meanwhile critics showed us the potential value of these works and help public to understand it .Besides, both artist and critic are indispensably roles in the development of human society.

较好的文章，学习！看得出，石头写作前做了许多功课，学习中。