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If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
WORDS: 325 TIME: 00:40:09 DATE: 2007-7-25 21:14:06
Which kind of employee would be hired more possible, an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Different people may have respective answers. In my opinion, the experienced worker has more merits than new hands, here are following three reasons.(开头清晰,不错)
First and foremost, even salary of senior worker is higher than (that of)the freshman, the former can make far more profits than the later. Take the computer programer(programmer) for example, a sophisticated programer is familiar(familiar) with data structure, arithmatics(arithmetics), and means of debugging(debugging) that always be used. However, the new comer may need refer to his book for grammer(grammar), or taking a long time for examining minor flaws in program. That's why some software companies such as Microsoft, Oracle, hunt for experienced programmers(prgrammars) with high price, just because this kind of workers are worth more than what they are payed.(这两项怎么能比,人当然比钱重要,你是不是想说人创造的价值比工资多?改一下吧)
Apart from that point I made above, there is still a significent(significant) cause for my choosing the experienced worker. With the experiences abtained(obtained) from their work place, these employees can improve working efficency(efficiency) directly or incline to provide reasonable advice for company's productive. (想一个例子)
last but not least, experienced worker(s) with creative mind can invent new tools or means of production which will obviously benefit not only the company they work for, but the whole industry. A fitting example of GE can shed some light on this point. As we known, Adson(Addison) is regarded as one of the most creative person all over the world. In fact, some of his inventions were first proposed by his adept workers.
All in all, even new hands have lower salary which do good to company(company) to cut down human resource costs. But they still can not parallel with those veterans in special aspects such as advancing efficiency, sensitive vocation awareness, and so firth(forth). Based on those reasons above, I prefer to hire the seasoned employee even(什么意思) their salary is not a piece of cake.
文章小错误太多,某些地方再展开谈一下,用一些例子会更有说服力,但总体还是不错的,我写这篇文章花了好长时间,想不起些什么来~
口语:What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why isthis room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examplesto support your opinion.
I think living room is more(most) important in my house. First of all, it is a place where I lie down burden which I have to shoulder and have a great sleep. When I come to my living room, a sense of relaxing(relaxation) fill with my body.
Second, it is also a place to improve emotion. Every night, before sleeping, My wife and I will talk about things we experienced whole day, exchange our opinions, soothe each other, and dream our future, that is really a sweet time.
So living room is indispensable for my life, it is the paramount part of my house.(最后一句话,赞!) |
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