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In the argument above, the arguer concludes that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months, to make the deduction more clearly, conclusion could be divided into  following sub-ones.
1) Players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers   
2) An extensive advertising will be successes
3)  10 to 25 year’s old age-group represent all the customers
, after close scrutiny of the facts listed in the argument, little supports found existing  facts could lend to above sub-conclusions.

1）to illustrate the first sub-conclusion. The arguer cites the fact that a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed, to sustain players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers. However, imagine that player is not like this kind of video-game.
   

2）Even first sub-conclusion is founded , still , there is a weak connection between second sub-conclusion and an extensive advertising will be successes ,it is  possible that the advertising will not be successes. And the advertising will not enlarge the market and make profit.


3）finally, it is presumptuous to extrapolate 10 to 25 years old  age-group represent all the customers, perhaps the other age -group have no interest as the same as the 10 to 25 years old  age-group.


consequently ，the conclusion lacks of credibility ,only the arguer provides more evidence to resolve the fallacies above, the  argument could be persuasive.

39.The following appeared in a memorandum from the president of Humana
College.

"Last year the number of students who enrolled in long-distance degree
programs at Omni University increased by 50%. During the same year, Omni
showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for
dormitory and classroom space, most likely because instruction in the
long-distance programs takes place via interactive video computer
connections. In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana
College has diminished and costs of maintaining buildings have risen.
Thus, to increase enrollment and solve the problem of budget deficits at
Humana College, we should initiate and actively promote long-distance
degree programs like those at Omni."

去年报名参加Omni大学远程教学系统的学生人数上升了50％。同年，Omni用于宿舍和教室的开支比前一年显著下降，很可能是因为远程教学通过互动电脑录像授课。比较而言，在过去三年中，Humana学院的报名人数下降了，而且用于房屋维护的费用上升。因此，为增加报名数量并解决Humana学院财政赤字问题，我们也应该开展并积极推广与Omni一样的远程教学系统。
1 教室和宿舍开支下降代表他们使用远程教学
2 H报名人数减少，需要用房屋维护费用上升
3 应该学O的远程教学
217.The following appeared in a brochure promoting the purchase of local
franchises for a national chain of gyms.

"Now is the time to invest in a franchise so that you can profit from
opening one of our gyms in your town. Consider the current trends:
Power-Lift Gyms are already popular among customers in 500 locations, and
national surveys indicate increasing concern with weight loss and physical
fitness. Furthermore, last year's sales of books and magazines on personal
health totaled more than $50 million, and purchases of home exercise
equipment almost doubled. Investing now in a Power-Lift Gym franchise will
guarantee a quick profit."

现在是投资于Power-Lift Gym特许权的良好时机从而你可以在你们城市开设一家体育馆。考虑一下当前的潮流：Power-Lift
Gym已经在500个地点的消费者中相当流行，全国调查表明对于减肥和健身的关注越来越多。而且，去年关于个人健康的书籍和杂志销售总额超过了5千万元，家庭健身器具的购买量几乎翻了一番。现在投资Power-Lift
Gym特许权将保证快速致富
1PLG在500个地点相当流行
2 个人健康书籍和杂志销售表明人们关注健康和减肥
3PLG可以赚钱
160.As people grow older, an enzyme known as PEP increasingly breaks down
the neuropeptide chemicals involved in learning and memory. But now,
researchers have found compounds that prevent PEP from breaking
neuropeptides apart. In tests, these compounds almost completely restored
lost memory in rats. The use of these compounds should be extended to
students who have poor memory and difficulty in concentrating-and
therefore serious problems in school performance. Science finally has a
solution for problems neither parents nor teachers could solve.

随着人们的衰老，一种已知叫做PEP的酶不断地分解与学习和记忆有关的神经化学物质。但现在研究人员已经发现了一些阻止PEP分解神经化学键的化合物。在试验中，这些化合物几乎完全恢复了老鼠失去的记忆。这些化合物的使用可以扩展到那些记忆力较差和因注意力不能集中而在学习中存在严重问题的学生。科学最终能够解决家长和教师都无法解决的问题。
1 老鼠和人类比
2记忆力较差和因注意力不能集中而在学习中存在严重问题的学生代表群体
151.The following is a letter to the editor of the Atticus City newspaper.

"Former Mayor Durant owes an apology to the city of Atticus. Both the
damage to the River Bridge, which connects Atticus to Hartley, and the
traffic problems we have long experienced on the bridge were actually
caused 20 years ago by Durant. After all, he is the one who approved the
construction of the bridge. If he had approved a wider and better-designed
bridge, on which approximately the same amount of public money would have
been spent, none of the damage or problems would have occurred. Instead,
the River Bridge has deteriorated far more rapidly over the past 20 years
than has the much longer Derby Bridge up the river. Even though the
winters have been severe in the past several years, this is no excuse for
the negligence and wastefulness of Durant."

前任市长Durant应该向Atticus市道歉。连接着Atticus和Hartley两座城市的River
Bridge的损害和长期困扰着我们的桥上的交通问题实际上都是20年前因Durant而导致的。无论如何，是他批准了桥梁的建造。如果他能够批准一个差不多花同样的钱的设计更好的方案的话，桥梁的损坏和交通问题都不会出现。但现在，River
Bridge在过去20年间的损坏程度比上游另外一座更长的Derby
Bridge更加严重。尽管近几年的冬天气候确实比较恶劣，但这也不是为Durant的过失和浪费开脱的借口。
1R不好
2 是D批准的
3 天气原因不能成为借口

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观点倒是没什么问题，只是感觉你的那个开头和你写issue是一个风格啊。下次写全了再发，草稿很难提什么意见了，毕竟你写的不详细。