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Issue 50
“In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.”




Whether faculty in college or university should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professional works related to their fields, must firstly be addressed on the certain academic areas. With respect to some of the outside-academic fields which are desirable, I strongly agree with this statement that students and faculty all should turn their attention partly to something out of their academia.

At the beginning of the statement, We have two points to clear. First, in some academic areas, there are few scholars to talk about problems outside the academia such as the humanities, thereby hardly working outside academia. Secondly, the statement neglect that in some other academic areas professor’s responsibility is taken account in a certain work outside the academia. This is especially true in the performing arts, in which the faculty has to actively show techniques and styles to their students.

Aside from the two points, I strongly agree that students and faculty will be the dear beneficiary of college or university faculty’s working outside academia in a related professional position. There are three benefits of doing so.

First, it seems to me that faculty who engaged in the field teach us not only the knowledge filled the academia but also with new discovery and thoughts or hot liver about the subject at hand. At the same time, they also can bring some experiment in some other fields related to the academic area to their students, thereby extending more important interesting discuss, even encouraging to some students to devote all his or her life in this field.

Secondly, in order to keeping up with the changing state of professional work, professor can give the latest information to the students who are determined to make a career in the field. In my experience, the advices from professor are most considerable, even thinking of the current of the job market. After all, for so many years the professors have been working in the field and thus every word from them could be very a valuable reference for students’ future decisions.

The third benefit for faculty has to do with their research and discovery in their academic areas. “If I have seen further than certain other men it is by standing upon the shoulders of giants.” said by Newton. Surely, he made a lot, but as he said that the foundation of his research or discovery is that “standing upon the shoulders of giants”. The same is true for a certain group of people such as college and university faculty who sometimes directly seek truths outside academia related to their subject.

In sun, at the college and university level, it is unwise for either professors or students to narrowing their eyes only to what the books wrote. Both of them should be the dear beneficiary when faculty achieves their academic research or discovery by standing outside the academia sometimes.

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Whether faculty in college or university should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professional works related to their fields,[最好加个主语] must firstly be addressed on the certain academic areas. With respect to some of the outside-academic[什么意思？这词用得不太好] fields which are desirable, I strongly agree with this statement that students[题目没要求吧] and faculty all should turn their attention partly to something out of their academia.

At the beginning of the statement, We have two points to clear. First, in some academic areas, there are few scholars to talk[few scholars who would talk] about problems outside the academia such as the humanities, thereby hardly working outside academia. Secondly, the statement neglect that in some other academic areas professor’s responsibility is taken account in a certain work outside the academia. This is especially true in the performing arts, in which the faculty has to actively show techniques and styles to their students.

Aside from the[these] two points, I strongly agree that students and faculty will be the dear beneficiary of college or university faculty’s working outside academia in a related professional position. There are three benefits of doing so.

First, it seems to me that faculty who engaged in the field teach us not only the knowledge filled the academia but also with new discovery and thoughts or hot liver[liver肝脏live news] about the subject at hand. At the same time, they also can bring some experiment in some other fields related to the academic area to their students, thereby extending more important interesting discuss, even encouraging to[去掉] some students to devote all his or her life in this field.

Secondly, in order to keeping[in order to keep] up with the changing state of professional work, professor can give the latest information to the students who are determined to make a career in the field. In my experience, the advices from professor are most considerable, even thinking of the current of the job market. After all, for so many years the professors have been working in the field and thus every word from them could be very a[a very] valuable reference for[to] students’ future decisions.

The third benefit for faculty[to work outside最好说完整] has to do with their research and discovery in their academic areas. “If I have seen further than certain other men it is by standing upon the shoulders of giants.” said by Newton. Surely, he made a lot, but as he said that the foundation of his research or discovery is that “standing upon the shoulders of giants”. The same is true for a certain group of people such as college and university faculty who sometimes directly seek truths outside academia related to their subject.[例子和结论不太相关吧，在外面工作不容易找到巨人的肩膀吧]

In sun, at the college and university level, it is unwise for either professors or students to narrowing their eyes only to what the books wrote. Both of them should be the dear beneficiary when faculty achieves their academic research or discovery by standing outside the academia sometimes.

[构思结构好熟悉。。。仿佛是北美范文。。。不过考试时候能写成这样便不错了呀
有些用词和语法有问题，句子读起来还是比较中国化]

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