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发表于 2007-7-31 14:35:45
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7.30第十二次作业(请于7.30晚22:30之前交,在7.31晚22:00前完成批改)
写作:Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking
for a better job, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of
another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
口语: delta p306 quiz2 Q2
Delta p307 quiz3 Q1,Q2
开头
不同的好吃的食物
提升生活,如工资高职位好
不同的人,说不定能找到一英俊潇洒风流倜傥玉树临风的帅哥做男朋友。
让步并总结
With the development of society, increasingly (increased number of)people spend different periods of time in different citys, which is (删) because of the alternation of career, the choice of school, the comfort of weather, or just because of some special one. (这句话单复数混乱,建议修改)Personally speaking, I prefer this kind of life more than to stay in one place for a whole life.
First of all, moving to different citys can make people taste various kind of delicious food. (觉得这个用主动语态不合适)For myself, eating good meal is the most essential purpose in my whole life. Although distinct flavor of dish can be eaten in one restaurant now, the food which cooked in the place of origin is still more tasty. For example, the pizza in Italy, the steak in Amarican, the goose liver paste in French, and what's more, the Kongpao chicken and Mapo tofu in China are all well tasted. But if you are not at the place where they were famous at, you will never know the authentic flavor of each food. Because of such delicious meal I could have, I will no hesitation in choose to move more citys. (例子很棒的!很PERSONAL,老外最欣赏的风格)
The well tasted food is not the only reason for me to choose moving (choose后面不加动名词) a lot of place. It is obversely that every transfer is always (also) a kind of elevation, no matter for wage or for the position. Image that if there is an oppotunity in another city to offer you a well-paid job, but you denied it only because you donot want to leave your city. What a foolish decide it is! (…这个。。。不能人身攻击阿) In this kind of condition, move to another place is the same meaning of high salary and good position. So this is the second reason I hold the view that we should try to live in different places.
Thirldly, living in different places also makes you to be familiar with different kind of peoples. When stayed in a certen place, people always live a similiar life. In contrast, when come out to a new place which is totally different from the city you have lived in, you will find people live in various place will have various thought, and communicate with such different kind of person will always make your life more interesting. What's more, maybe I could acquainted with a handsome boy in a strange city, and he will become my boyfriend.
I can (删) admit that live in one place for a whole life has its own merit, such as a steady job, home and a circle of friends. But compared with the delicious food, the elevation of life quality, and a probabily boyfriend, I will still reinforce my standpoint that I prefer to moving in search of another place.
单复数请注意,二、四段不错,语法问题时而出现,可能是计时紧张的原因,平时练习多注意吧,总体来说不错的,加油! |
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