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                  1 The diagram unfolds a clear comparison between
                  3 Obviously, in every aspect,
                  4 had a much higher growth rate than as a whole during that
                  period.
                  6 The most rapid increase of all the four aspects As to the
                  other three, though the growth rates were not so high , they
                  were indeed remarkable and impressive.
                  8 From the diagram it can be safely concluded that (in the
                  years)…
                  9 There were many significant changes (in modes of transport)
                  10 The following paragraphs will identify and discuss the
                  trends in the accompanying graph.
                  12 This bar chart displays the numbers of
                  13 The chart reflects several trends.
                  14 But……We see a different trend emerging.
                  16 This suggests increased educational opportunities for
                  women in higher education.
                  19 There was a slight recovery
                  20 ……has dropped dramatically
                  21 The general trend appears to be increases.
                  22 There were approximately
                  23 had jumped four fold to**
                  24 rose sharply from** to **
                  25 Remained constant at **
                  26 The overall trend for
                  27 The graph shows the percentage of
                  28 We can see thatswell during the hours ,peaking at**am.
                  29 Although the raw data does not provide an explanation for
                  these trends,
                  30 When coupled with the graphic information, leads to some
                  possible conclusions.
                  31 This may serve to explain, at least in part, the mirror
                  image of the two lines.
                  32 Perhaps the most telling feature of the chart is the
                  dominance of…
                  33 The graph relates the percentage of
                  34 Rise gradually to about 10%
                  35 After a slight drop around lunch time, audiences begin a
                  fairly steady climb towards the peak viewer ship in the hours
                  form 6pm to 10pm at some 40—45%.
                  36 A sharp decline follows to
                  37 drops steadily from this peak, crossing the line for
                  television views at around 2pm.
                  38 It continues to decline throughout the evening until
                  reaching a low point at 2am.
                  39 The graph proves the dominance of
                  40 During the peak period of, But during the peak period of
                  42 It reflects the great differences that exist between
                  43 These figures were overwhelmingly greater than the
                  corresponding figure of…
                  44 It can be seen from the chart that significantly~erthan
                  45 In all locations, A out numbered B
                  46 These two pie charts show the differences between two
                  groups of…
                  47 The first point to note is the huge increase (in the
                  number of)…
                  48 A is more than ***times(bigger) than B
                  49 The biggest loss was to A, which decreased from***to ***of
                  the whole.
                  50 The biggest gains(in graduate numbers) were made by A
                  which, as a group, have increased by over **%

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发表于 2007-7-31 21:34:57 |显示全部楼层

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第35,37,38条有些小错 ,其中的am和pm不能这样写 ,可以写成AM和PM或者a.m&p.m或者A.M&P.M
朋友总说我笑得很放肆!
三日不读书就面目可憎!

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