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Issue 48
"The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."
Words : 872
Time :1小时30分左右,因为晚了,后来就直接修改和增加了一些东西才交.
有点写过头了,麻烦了。
提纲:
Para 1. 开头,陈述问题,提出观点:同意普通人是创造历史的主要力量,但不同意把历史研究的重点转向普通人。
Para 2 . 说明普通人对历史发展的重要性。
Para 3 . 指出历史研究的目标不应该是论功劳,避免重蹈覆辙。
Para 4 . 指出研究普通人群不是科学的研究方法,而研究名人才是最有效的。
Para 5-6 . 说明名人对历史研究来说更有价值的原因。
Para 7 . 结论。
The speaker claimed that most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few , but by groups of people , and that the study of history should emphasize latter instead of former(借用) . I concede that the statement’s premise is on the right philosophical direction .However, the speaker easily draw the conclusion without considering the fundamental aim and measures in the study of history, which would be involved in my points of contention, and be discussed below.
Briefly, in the theories of philosophy, society is described as the sum of ALL the social members’ activities, so the crucial impetus of social development would be the power of ALL the ordinary people rather than those few hero’s, whose efforts can only influence the procedure of this development: to accelerate it or to decelerate it, but can not change the main direction. In short, the human history is made by groups of people. This ought to be easily understood . Let us take a smaller event as example , such as a war or a battle . Although a eminent general is indispensable for a troop , who can give wonderful tactics that indicate how to defeat the enemy , he will never get any victory unless having excellent soldiers . On the battlefield , those loyal soldiers enforce the general’s commands , using their blood even life to exchange win of the war . Yet it is just the same condition as the procedure of human history . “Famous few” is to be the general , ordinary people are the soldiers .
On the other hand , when we talk about the study of history , we can not draw the pivot on groups of people any more , and there are two arguments to sustain my point . The first has to do with the fundamental objective of historical study . Although in the process of studying history , people will gain the image that those famous individuals are more important , while ignoring ordinary groups , in my opinion the main purpose of historical research is not to attribute credit to certain groups of people or individuals , but to reveal the origin and to evaluate the consequence or impact of historical events . With this history knowledge , we can avoid making the same mistakes as our forerunners , and find a more effective way to develop ourselves, while those famous individuals are just the resources and examples in the study . So that whether it is equitable for groups of people to gain less credit is not important here .
The second argument is about the measures of study . Since the huge amount of the ordinary people , it is too difficult for historians to investigate each person in every significant event in history . Besides , little of their accurate information can be preserved after such a long period . Any study depended on such kind of measure will eventually get into the troubles of endless finding and debating . A most efficient way of doing research which is generally accepted in nearly every subject is to study the most representative models in the field . Consider the works of Vinci in art field . Despite he has countless painting throughout his lifetime , artists usually only study and discuss several ones of them , for these pieces can essentially express the skills and characteristics of the composer . Similarly , famous individuals are more valuable in researches of history .
One of the reasons is that those famous individuals’ power or prominent talent may usually influence the historical events greatly . For examples , those leads of important events , such as Churchill and Roosevelt in World War two , and those engineers and scientists , such as Watt , Edison and Newton . Through investigating these people’s effect and their products , historian can more easily get a broader and clearer view of the origin , consequence and impacts of the events which they participated .
Another reason is that famous people can generally represent the characteristics of the public in their era . By studying the Plato’s philosophy , we can basically get the view of ideology of ancient Greek , and by studying speech , activities and attitudes of Martin Luther King , we can also understand the black’s status and both attitudes about ethnic problems in America of that time . Moreover , their relatively integral information will greatly ease historians’ work , helping them to save much time for collecting messages , and with the extra time they can do more meaningful researches .
In sum , although we can not ignore the ordinary people’s contribution for our society , we need have a scientific attitude toward the study of history . We can not risk to scarify the whole historical study only because of our sympathy . Since the advantages of the famous few for the research , they will always be one of the most important parts of the study of history .
[ 本帖最后由 xsr6064 于 2007-8-2 16:35 编辑 ] |
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