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Argument 51
The following appeared in a medical newsletter.
"Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment."
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提纲:
Para 1 .描述问题
Para 2 .问题1 :例子与要讨论的问题没有关系。
Para 3 .问题2 :没有提供病人的准确信息。
Para 4 .问题3 :数据问题。
Para 5 .结论。
In this medical newsletter, the author claim that the hypothesis which supposes that secondary infection may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain has been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. However, I find this argument suspicious in several respects.
The first, may be the most serious, problems is that the author may use an invalid evidence to sustain his argument. Consider the author’s aim at the beginning of the newsletter. We can see that what he wants to prove is that whether the secondary infections would influence some patients’ recovering after severe muscle strain. But in the successive statement, the evidence used by the author is two experiments of examining the function of antibiotics in the treatment of muscle injuries, which is an entirely irrelevant medical problem with what the author want to discuss. For this problem, the author can not draw any conclusion on the secondary infections’ influence on patients. Thus the whole passage seems to be meaningless.
Secondly, the author fails to rule out the possibility that factors other than antibiotics enabled the first group of patients to recover more quickly on average. It is possible that most of the first group of patients are stronger than the other group’s ones so that they can recover more quickly, or that the climate of the place where first group lived is more helpful for recovering. Therefore, unless the author can provide more detail information about all the patients, I can not be convinced that the antibiotic has actual function for the muscle injuries.
Thirdly, the data of the two experiments is not statistically reliable. The author does not give us the accurate number of the participated patients of these experiments, and a too small quantity of them may lead the consequence unreliable. Besides, if the process of selecting the patients is not random, the consequence would also be problematic. So we have reasons to doubt the author’s conclusion until he can provide clearer data.
In sum, the author’s conclusion is not convinced and even confused, because the author use an invalid evidence to support his argument, and in the process of discussing the two experiments he does not give accurate information of two groups of patients. He also does not give clear numbers of the participators.
[ 本帖最后由 xsr6064 于 2007-8-2 16:43 编辑 ] |
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