生如夏花第十四次作业

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8.2 第十四次作业: (作业请于3日23点前交出,互改请于4日完成)
独立写作 环境，动物，植物，土地)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer

I do not agree with this opinion that the zoo is not completely useful. The zoo contains various animals and plants which come from different countries . It is not only a harvest of children, but also a classroom to learn more knowledge about the nature. Meanwhile, it is a perfect chance to cultivate good habit _  nature environment and animals. Why someone believes that the zoo is not  useful? I do not company with it.

First and the most, the zoo is a playground to children . In my memory, when I was a child, going to the zoo is a festival to me. There are different animal to be showed _ tigers, lions, bears, wolves and so on. Meanwhile, it is a good chance to learn more about wild animals_ their life habit, their food, their habitant, their growing cycle and so on. This is a interesting channel to get more information about our nature and surrounding animals.

Secondly, the more we get to know about wild animals, the more depth we realize that it is a responsibility for us to protect the environment . With the development and reformation of the world, the nature faces pollution of environment and distinction of wild animal. How to protect this blue star_ the mother-land of human beings, is become a problem to be solved to human being. To cultivate a good habit to protect environment and sympathy to wild animals in one's childhood, I think, it is a proper way to solve this problem. Thus, the zoo is a ground to cultivate our generations from now on.

Lastly, the zoo is not only a place to children, but also a resting place to adult.  To adult, it is a good choice to relax themselves and have a rest in a place without hard works and pressure of lives. With a heart of child, maybe, is a hope of modern people.

Depending on above of three reasons, I believe the zoo is useful for people, either to children or to adult.

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不好意思，怎么编辑都是这样，也不知是怎么回事，只好这样了:handshake

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I do not agree with this opinion that the zoo is not completely useful. The zoo contains(这个词总感觉和成分相关，换一个吧，想不出更好的建议用there be这种放之四海皆为准的句型) various animals and plants which come from different countries . It is not only a harvest of children, but also a classroom to learn more knowledge about the nature. Meanwhile, it is a perfect chance to cultivate good habit _ （怎么回事？漏写了？） nature environment and animals. Why someone believes that the zoo is not  useful? I do not company（company？你打错了字了？还是这是一个我没查到的词组？） with it.

First and the most, the zoo is a playground to（for） children . In my memory, when I was a child, going to the zoo is（was） a festival to（for） me. There are different （kinds of）animal（animals） to be showed _（such as？） tigers, lions, bears, wolves and so on. Meanwhile, it is a good chance to learn more about wild animals_（and？） their life habit, their food, their habitant, their growing cycle and so on. This is a（an） interesting channel to get more information about our nature and surrounding（觉得这个词不好，可去掉） animals.

Secondly, the more we get to know about wild animals, the more depth we realize that it is a responsibility for us to protect the environment . With the development and reformation（and reformation可去掉） of the world, the nature faces （the danger of）pollution of environment and distinction of wild animal. How to protect this blue star_（and？） the mother-land of human beings, is become a problem to be solved to human being（改成problem which should be solved right now，to human being不要了，前一句结尾就是这个词，显得重复）. To cultivate a good habit to protect environment and sympathy to wild animals（你这句话的语法错误太多了，protect动词，sympathy又是名词，中间怎么可以用and连接呢？就是中文思维在作怪。建议改成a good habit of protecting environment and caring for wild animals） in one's childhood, I think, it is a proper way to solve this problem. Thus, the zoo is a ground to cultivate(建议换成educate，前面已经好几句中有cultivate了) our generations from now on.

Lastly, the zoo is not only a place to（for） children, but also a resting（entertainment） place to（for） adult.  To adult, it is a good choice to relax themselves and have a rest in （such你不点题，别人怎么知道你说的是什么样的地方）a place without hard works and pressure of lives. With a heart of child, maybe, （什么是希望啊？这句话没有主语）is a hope of modern people.

Depending（based） on above of three reasons, I believe the zoo is useful for people, either to children or to adult.

思维比较中文化，这是咱们的通病，没什么说的。继续努力，共同勉励！
结构很清楚，各段主题也很清楚