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In the issue, the speaker considers that scandals are useful methods to focus our attention on problems in politics, academia, or other areas. However, it is too absolute to draw such a conclusion because of different conditions of different areas.

In politics areas, scandals are sensitive news whether about government or leaders. They could attract people to notice and think about problems which are reflected by scandals. But political scandals include two primary kinds. One is about policy, such as Water Gate Affairs. In this scandal, people begin to think about political disiplines of the United States in ways that no speaker or reformer ever metioned before, and push the evolution of politicy. The other is about leaders' private livings, such as Bill Cliton's sex scandal. This kind of scandals could not help people focus on thinking problems better. They just become political technology to push political revolution and people's chatting articles for funny, which could not focus human's attention on problem as the speaker says.

In academic areas, scandals always are serious problems about education, researching projects, famous scientists and so on. Academic scandals could focus people's attention on problems which have never been mentioned before. For example, the scandal on human clone of South Korea scientists attracts a lot of people to talk extensively and freely about cloning problem which has no professional conclusion. Some academic problems have not been noticed before a certain scandal happens. To some extent, scandals in academia help scientists find new problems and fresh projects which have not been pointed out before. It is a useful way to push academia develop that no speaker or reformer ever could.

In other areas, such as art and gym field, scandals become ways to amuse people and society more than fosus on social problems. Many famous art and gym stars have once involved in scandals. For example, Michel Jackson, the most famous popular singer, has so many scandals about his private life, such as cosmetic surgery and criminal lawsuits. These kinds of scandals could not be useful for people to facus on problems at all. Such private problems would happen everday and everywhere. The reason why people focus on them is for amusements other than finding problems.

这篇Issue实在是进行不下去。
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In the issue, the speaker considers that scandals are useful methods to focus our attention on problems in politics, academia, or other areas(可以换照种表达方式,不要照搬题目比较好). However, it is too absolute to draw such a conclusion because of different conditions of different areas.

In politics areas, scandals are sensitive news
whether about government or leaders(由语法错误). They could attractattract已经有notice的意思了)people to notice and think about problems which are reflected by scandals. But political scandals include two primary kinds. One is about policy, such as Water Gate Affairs. In this scandal, people begin to think about political disiplines of the United States in ways that no speaker or reformer ever metioned before, and push the evolution of politicy. The other is about leaders' private livings, such as Bill Cliton's sex scandal. This kind of scandals could not help people focus on thinking problems better. They just become political technology to push political revolution and people's chatting articles for funny, which could not focus human's attention on problem as the speaker says.我觉得没必要再分类了,因为他们的作用都是一样,主要说丑闻有什么作用就好了。即使生活上的丑闻也是起着监督作用的
In academic areas, scandals always are serious problems about education, researching projects, famous scientists and so on. Academic scandals could focus people's attention on problems which have never been mentioned before. For example, the scandal on human clone of South Korea scientists attracts a lot of people to talk extensively and freely about cloning problem which has no professional conclusion.
这个例子挺好的,再展开一下,揭露了那些问题,对社会有什么影响之类的,写一些)Some academic problems have not been noticed before a certain scandal happens. To some extent, scandals in academia help scientists find new problems and fresh projects which have not been pointed out before. It is a useful way to push academia develop that no speaker or reformer ever could.

In other areas, such as art and gym field, scandals become ways to amuse people and society more than fosus on social problems. Many famous art and gym stars have once involved in scandals. For example, Michel Jackson, the most famous popular singer, has so many scandals about his private life, such as cosmetic surgery and criminal lawsuits. These kinds of scandals could not be useful for people to facus on problems at all. Such private problems would happen everday and everywhere. The reason why people focus on them is for amusements other than finding problems.

其实我觉得分领域来很难写的,因为在每个领域,丑闻都有着相同的作用

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发表于 2007-8-8 22:24:08 |只看该作者
不知道什么 变不成红色了

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In theissue, the speaker considers that scandals are useful methods to focus ourattention on problems in politics, academia, or other areas. However, it is tooabsolute to draw such a conclusion because of different conditions of differentareas. 最好是用一句话引入主题

Inpolitics areas, scandals are sensitive news whether about government orleaders. They could attract people to notice and think about problems which arereflected by scandals. But political scandals include two primary kinds. One isabout policy, such as Water Gate Affairs. In this scandal, people begin tothink about political disciplines of the United States in ways that nospeaker or reformer ever mentioned before, and push the evolution of politicy.The other is about leaders' private livings, such as Bill Cliton's sex scandal.This kind of scandals could not help people focus on thinking problems better.They just become political technology to push political revolution and people'schatting articles for funny, which could not focus human's attention on problemas the speaker says.这个分类值得商榷,因为你不能说克林顿那个就没有用,它也引发人们思考一些问题

Inacademic areas, scandals always are serious problems about education,researching projects, famous scientists and so on. Academic scandals couldfocus people's attention on problems which have never been mentioned before.For example, the scandal on human clone of South Korea (具体是什么,要让人看明白)scientistsattracts a lot of people to talk extensively and freely about cloning problemwhich has no professional conclusion. Some academic problems have not beennoticed before a certain scandal happens. To some extent, scandals in academiahelp scientists find new problems and fresh projects which have not beenpointed out before. It is a useful way to push academia develop that no speakeror reformer ever could.写得有点浮于表面了,如果只是引起人们注意到这些问题,没有什么更进一步的举措,意义也不大。

Inother areas, such as art and gym field, scandals become ways to amuse peopleand society more than fosus on social problems. Many famous art and gym starshave once involved in scandals. For example, Michel Jackson, the most famouspopular singer, has so many scandals about his private life, such as cosmeticsurgery and criminal lawsuits. These kinds of scandals could not be useful forpeople to facus on problems at all. Such private problems would happen everdayand everywhere. The reason why people focus on them is for amusements otherthan finding problems.
没写完啊,不建议分领域来写,一是有很多重合的地方,二来把笔墨分散到各个领域难以保证深度,与其泛泛,不如写得深入一点。

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