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TOPIC: ARGUMENT200 - Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients.
WORDS: 413 TIME: 00:29:50 DATE: 2007-8-8 上午 10:29:31
In this argument, the arguer draws the conclusion that the dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous of suffering patients. However, I find this argument has many logical errors.
To begin with, the arguer advises that the advertisement only focuses on the male is not conceiving. Why we only focus on the male? Can we lose the profit from the woman patients? Although three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist, there is no information to support that the number of women is not larger. It is possible that the number of the woman is 1,000 and the man only 600, but there are 300 men faint due to their more sensitive to the pain, compared with only 100 women. Even if the number of the woman is very small, we can get no evidence that the number will not increasing in the next year. It is possible that, with improvement of the life, women have more candies, without washing the teeth before going to bed, which causes many women going to the hospital. If so, it is not wise for the dentist to make this decision.
Second, even if the advertisement should focus on the men, we still can not get the conclusion that we should emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients. Do all the people only care for the anesthetic techniques? In fact, whether the patients choose the hospital contains many factors, such as the doctors, environment, traffic and the price, which are all important for a hospital. It may be possible that the patient will choose another hospital, because this hospital’s price is very high. Perhaps the patient will go to the hospital, because the traffic is very bad. In addition, maybe the hospital’s sanitation is bad, so people are willing to go there. So we can not only focus on the anesthetic techniques.
In summary, I think the arguer has little evidence to support his conclusion, through the discussion mentioned above. If the arguer wants to make this argument conceiving, he has to provide that whether the number of the woman is larger and will increase in the next few years, what the other factors to influence the people going to the hospital. If so, we can get a more conceiving answer. |
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