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TASK 2  Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.


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As for the claim that these non-stream areas of inquiry will satisfy the human needs, we already have sufficient empirical evidence that this will simply not be correct. For nearly fifty centuries we have been pursuit the various human needs and requirement through research in both non-stream areas and traditional sciences. Yet the majority apparent and equipment, even the way of thinking are the benefits from orthodox science. In fact, as non-stream areas of inquiry, astrology, fortune and psychics and paranormal pursuits are lasting in thousands years, which has been the advent of methods catering exclusively to human inborn curiosities in various aspects. The more reasonable conclusions that compare with mainstream science; non-stream area of inquiry has actually served to satisfy more human inborn curiosities than the human needs.

More over, in my view non-stream area of inquiry will continue to thrive for same reason that people still go out for the expedition of unknown fields: we all need to "get away" from our familiar routine and surroundings from time to time. Will mainstream alter this inborn desire? Certainly not. In short, non-stream area of inquiry is a manifestation of edge-side approach for variety and for exploration. This edge-side approach is why humans have come to use constellation for defining their characteristics, and will just surely make a decision on whether these couples are suitable and whether they have a fate that they will have a boy in the certain year.


However, the speaker unfairly assumes that these areas are therefore vital to society. Were these the case, I would entirely agree that people should treat this kind of inquiry as one of important fields like mainstream science. But, non-stream areas of inquiry are not primarily about reasoning and logical approach. Instead, It is about self-deception and false hope, even fantastic ideas and delusion. Could anyone honestly claim that these fantastic ideas and delusion serves as a suitable substitute for reasonable planning and imaging on their work and life? Surely not.  The physical world is laden with a host of such delight that we humans are compelling to experience down-to-earth.

In fact, non-stream areas of inquiry might actually harm society due to its irrational and unreasonable actions. Even more significantly, to the extant on a personal level, stubborn adherence to irrational belief in the face of reason and empirical evidence can lead to self -righteous arrogance, intolerance, anti-society behavior, and even hatred. As a result, many people who previously would not have the courage to present the abnormal behavior will soon conduct the strange action under the Instigation from these areas.


Admittedly, not mainstream science but astrology, fortune and psychics and paranormal pursuits might eventually satisfy human inborn curiosities other than basic needs, as the wanted information could be collected without any science process. The happiness oriented from lucky fate and fortune that can be decided by one's strive of whole life can now be hypothesized without any efforts. And the despaired people will insight his new life through a good word from man-made forecast system based on astrology. To the extent that the pressure keep rise accompany with increased development of industrializing in the modern society, more and more people will seek console from non-stream areas of inquiry as a result. Yet it would be absurd to claim that only satisfying the curiosities alone will be the reason why this kind of inquiry could be vital for society.

In sum, non-stream areas of inquiry might be legitimate insofar as they afford many people psychological solace in life.  However, due to the feature of irrational and unreasoning, it would not be a vital role in our society.

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发表于 2007-8-26 23:11:22 |只看该作者
too many words....607....faint.....;d:
成功就在坚持一下的努力之中
Never never never give up!!!

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发表于 2007-8-26 23:13:06 |只看该作者
晕倒!这是GRE OR GMAT的作文阿:funk:

还是老班自己的例文哈;d:

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为啥你有这么多的积分阿?羡慕。。。;d:
成功就在坚持一下的努力之中
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千万别水了:funk:

水啊水啊~~我比67兄的纯水少多了哈~~;d:

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都是我给加的 :o

你经常过来帮忙我也多给你点 :handshake

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以前写的一个GRE作文,很滥的。。。

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原帖由 forbeck 于 2007-8-26 23:19 发表
千万别水了:funk:

水啊水啊~~我比67兄的纯水少多了哈~~;d:

:funk: :funk: :funk:

meng niu MM  ni ju rang zhe yang dui wo  ?
朋友总说我笑得很放肆!
三日不读书就面目可憎!

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djconan换头像了?
呵呵,挺可爱的啊!:loveliness:

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发表于 2007-8-27 02:13:59 |只看该作者
Ielts的作文会出这么难的题目吗?
噢。。。。

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sorry:confused: :( ;) ;d:

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发表于 2007-8-27 11:07:00 |只看该作者
HK你身体力行的实践规则啊
赞一个啊~~~!!
大家都顶我也顶啊

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很好玩的头像 ;)

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不会的,这是GRE考试的作文题目

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给大家做个例子吧,要不菠萝兄也顺便帮我改了? ;d:

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昨天差点给改了..
还纳闷怎么IELTS和AW都有非主流科学的题目..

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