issue225 [0806G-奋斗小组]第九次作业（真诚求拍，有拍必回）

breathUID: 2417355

225"People often look for similarities, even between very different things, and even when it is unhelpful or harmful to do so. Instead, a thing should be considered on its own terms; we should avoid the tendency to compare it to something else."
提纲：
头段：世上没有完全相同的两片叶子，因此事物之间存在差异，同时这些事物之间又都有或多或少的联系，这是世界的客观规律。为了很好的认识事物，改造事物，将事物之间作比较很重要。
理由：
1：事物之间的区别普遍存在，深入地认识事物之间的区别有助于改进我们的知识结构，促进社会进步。
2：事物之间也存在联系，很好的找出它们之间的相同点，有助于我们更好抓住事物的本质。
3：然而，我们不能盲目的将一切事物进行对比。
尾段：我们因该进行有助于促进知识结构改进，促使社会进步的有意义的比较，避免那些庸俗的毫无意义的比较。

As the old saying goes: “exactly, there are not the same two leaves in this world”, everything, mostly, is different from other things. Whereas, the philosopher has said: “every thing, more or less, collects with each other”, which means things also have the similarities. The differences and similarities are the inevitabilities of things, it is, therefore, very important to rule out differences, such as the distinctive characters of each, and similarities of things.
   
Everything has interconnection with others to some extent. The fact that even two quite independent objects have subtle connection or similar regulation makes comparison of similarities essential for people to utilize the interconnection and intersection to develop new ideas and explore novel discoveries. For instance, without calculus, economics would never have seen the booming growth of its last thirty years. Mathematics converted economics from a qualitative, speculative field to a quantitative, definitive one, which enables economists gain more in-depth views about the regulation of economy and even construct modeling to give prospect of the future. Also, without supporting advances in calculus, neither classical physics nor quantum physics could reach today’s resplendence, let alone quantum cosmology, which will lead us to solve the mystery of the cosmos.

Besides the intersection of every subject, there is another side of things called difference that every field has its own objective disciplines, internal regulation, potential rules and established logic frame. As we know, difference exists in all the things and comparisons of difference make possible improvement in our intelligence, social advancement and endless other areas. Ever since primitive ages, people have ceaselessly and enthusiastically made comparisons with each other.
An outstanding instance occurred in 1869,Dmitry Mendeleyev, a Russian chemist, put sixty three chemical elements which had been discovered at that time together and carefully compared, finding differences among them, finally, drew up a periodic table of the elements arranged to illustrate patterns of recurring chemical and physical properties. Mendeleyev used this table to predict the existence and describe the properties of several elements unknown in his day, and when the elements were discovered several years later, his predictions proved to be correct. And it is through this process that human beings have become rational and intelligent, with the highly refined technology and sciences as this process’s by-products.
   
However, we should avoid compare things blindly. On one hand, insisting on finding similarities between things can result in unfair comparisons. For example, by focusing on similarities among universities, we may overlook their distinctive characters, architectures, and cultures. Without analyzing the prerequisite and difference of a discipline from another field before using it directly, one will probably find it false or inefficient. On the other hand, blindly finding differences among thing leads to ignore some valuable similarities which may contribute to a breakthrough.

To sum up, there are always differences and similarities among things, which is an objective regulation of the world. Only through that we figure out the differences and similarities of things insightfully, avoiding the meaningless and blind comparison, can one make breakthrough and the society progress.

[ 本帖最后由 breath 于 2007-10-30 22:08 编辑 ]

yuzhongwumeiUID: 2155222

As the old saying goes: “exactly,(这个词还是可以省掉的） there are not the same two leaves in this world”, everything, mostly, is different from other things. (almost everything in the world is different from each other.) Whereas, the philosopher has said(a philosopher once said,但最好能指出是哪个人说得): “every thing, more or less, collects？ with each other”,（哪天见面你得跟我解释一下，这两句名言是真的名言还是怎的？） which means things also have the similarities. The differences and similarities are the inevitabilities（这个词恐怕不能这么用） of things, it is（英语句子不能随便断句，还不加连词）, therefore, very important to rule out differences, such as the distinctive characters of each, and similarities of things.(这句话说得还是很有问题的，我也不知道怎么改，建议换个说法。而且我不太明白什么意思。rule out 是排除的意思啊。而且别老用things这个词。整句可以改成：Everything has the sides which can be the same as or different from that of the others. Therefore, it is of significance to seek out the interconnection among there diffenrences and similarities involved. ）
   
Everything has interconnection with others to some extent. The fact that even two quite independent objects have subtle connection or similar regulation makes comparison of similarities essential for people to utilize the interconnection and intersection to develop new ideas and explore novel discoveries.(这句话该不会是我写的吧，气都上不来了，短句式可以接受的，不要一味追求长句，简洁是很重要的。写长句要注意语法的正确。） For instance, without calculus, economics would never have seen the booming growth of its last thirty years. Mathematics converted economics from a qualitative, speculative field to a quantitative, definitive one, which enables economists gain more in-depth views about the regulation of economy and even construct modeling to give prospect of the future.（抄袭;d: ） Also, without supporting advances in calculus, neither classical physics nor quantum physics could reach today’s resplendence, let alone quantum cosmology, which will lead us to solve the mystery of the cosmos.（鉴于这段是我写的，也没什么好改的了，拜托你用自己的语言说一下，才能提高你的水平啊）

Besides the intersection of every subject, there is another side of things去掉 called difference (that这句话有语法错误 可以改成because) every field has its own objective disciplines, internal regulation, potential rules and established logic frame. As we know(后面说得不是一个事实，而是个道理，是需要论证的，怎么可能众所周知）, difference exists in all the things（杜绝这个词） and comparisons of difference make possible improvement in our intelligence, social advancement and endless other areas.（how?也没讲出道理啊） Ever since primitive ages, people have ceaselessly and enthusiastically made comparisons with each other.（以下的例子是很不错的，就是太长，哪有例子这么长的，两句话就行了）An outstanding instance occurred in 1869,Dmitry Mendeleye（孟德尔不是奥地利遗传学家吗，莫非不是一个人，不是门捷列夫发明的元素周期表吗:confused: ）v, a Russian chemist, put sixty three chemical elements which had been discovered at that time together and carefully compared（把这串词放在put后面）, finding（find强调结果，应该用look for或seek out) differences among them, (句号）finally, drew up a periodic table of the elements arranged to illustrate patterns of recurring chemical and physical properties. Mendeleyev used this table to predict the existence and describe the properties of several elements unknown in his day, and when the elements were discovered several years later, his predictions （were） proved to be correct. And it is through this process that human beings have become rational and intelligent,（这句话说得没根据啊） with the highly refined technology and sciences as this process’s by-products.(as the by-product of this process)
   
However, we should avoid compare(ing) things blindly. On one hand, insisting on finding similarities between things can result in unfair comparisons. For example, by focusing on similarities among universities, we may overlook their distinctive characters, architectures, and cultures. Without analyzing the prerequisite and difference of a discipline from another field before using it directly, one will probably find it false or inefficient. On the other hand, blindly finding differences among thing leads to ignore some valuable similarities which may contribute to a breakthrough.(老大这是我的提纲，你不再添点内容进去！）

To sum up, there are always differences and similarities among things, which is an objective regulation of the world. Only through that（代词不能随便用，它指代什么啊？？） we figure out the differences and similarities of things insightfully, avoiding the meaningless and blind comparison, can one make breakthrough and the society progress.（这句话有严重的语法错误，而且语言也太绝对，难道只有这样社会才能进步吗？不是吧。）

睡了，不早了，明天还要上课呢~~
写的还是很不错的，比我想象的好多了;) ，别那么没信心啊，有潜力，相信我~~


[ 本帖最后由 yuzhongwumei 于 2007-10-31 00:09 编辑 ]

breathUID: 2417355

谢谢啊，熬这么晚，改的好仔细呀，感动！不好意思，有你的资料，我一着急就哐哐的给Ctrl+c,Ctrl+v了.以后的改改了呵呵。
文中:
0：rule out的却是错了，找出应该figure out
1: Dmitry Mendeleye 这就是门捷列夫呀
2:最后一段的That我指的是紧接他的句子呀，是不是不能这么写了？
感谢鼓励，会努力的。