ISSUE38 【Aero小组】第4次作业 BY BIGYAN

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The speaker asserts that in the age of telebvision, reading book is not as important as it once was for the reason that people can learn as much by wantching television as they can by  reading book. There is no doubt that television stands out in the age of information, which can be passed faster and further via wire. However, i must think about the reason why reading book as a way of gaining information still is maintained, and why it has not been washed out for its own disadvantagement. I will show my viewpiont in the following paragraph.
Fistly, medium, specially the televion, has developede greatly in the past decade. with the price down, more and more family are afford to the televison. Compring with the book, the period of making program on the televion is much less, so peole receive much news as soon as possible. In addition, using the well-being facility, the picture and voice on the tv becomes more clear and real. Admittly, televiosn takes so important role in average days that people even can not live without it.
People prefer lying on the sofa to watch news all over the world to sitting in the library. To some extent, television unconciously change our lives, which used to get what we want to know through book. So it is normal to see in the shopping any kind of televison but not the best seller.
Though television give opptunity to learn more from outside, it is a mistake to ignore the importance of reading book. As far as i know, book as a record is popular dated from the acient. Since human being created character, they were seeking a way of recording everyting happened. Before inventing paper, they had to picture or write on the wall or stone, which was not taken easily. Thanks to the appearence of paper, we now is able to learn much history from the papyrus and many acient books. It is  a compromise that only watching televion cause missing much important history evens and times, which most of was recorded on the book.
On the other hand, book contains much more culture than material. From acient great philosephy to modern author, anyone of them pass their thoery through book they writed. As the television program is made in a short time, i am sure that people fail to get much culture and education owing to the limitions. Even after several minutes, a man has forgotten what he watch on it. Differently, a story on the book may impress one so long time that he will remember what he learn forever. A popular book , such as <Holmes> translated in different language may be favorite all over the world for a long time , but a televison program may not so.
In sum, no matter television or book, they have their own role in our daly lives. Absense of one of them lead to keeping a wrong way. Moreover, it is important to pursue a balance of them when we need to know more. In the final analysis, we can not overlook each of them, or knowledge may overlook us.

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The speaker asserts that in the age of telebvision（television）, reading book is not as important as it once was for the reason that people can learn as much by wantching(watching) television as they can by  reading book. There is no doubt that television stands out in the age of information, which can be passed faster and further via wire. However, i must think about the reason why reading book as a way of gaining information still is maintained, and why it has not been washed out for its own disadvantagement(disadvantage). I will show my viewpiont(viewpoint) in the following paragraph(as following更简洁一些).Fistly（Firstly）, medium, specially the television, has developed greatly in the past decade. With the price down, more and more family are afford to the television. Comparing with the book, the period of making program on the television is much less, so people receive much news as soon as possible. In addition, using the well-being facility, the picture and voice on the TV become more clear and real. Admittedly, television takes so important role in average days that people even cannot live without it. People prefer lying on the sofa to watch news all over the world to sitting in the library. To some extent, television unconsciously changes our lives, which used to get what we want to know through book. So it is normal to see in the shopping any kind of television but not the best seller.Though television gives opportunity to learn more from outside, it is a mistake to ignore the importance of reading book. As far as I know, book as a record is popular dated from the ancient. Since human being created character, they were seeking a way of recording everything happened. Before inventing paper, they had to picture or write on the wall or stone, which was not taken easily. Thanks to the appearance of paper, we now are able to learn much history from the papyrus and many ancient books. It is a compromise that only watching television cause missing much important history evens and times, which most of was recorded on the book.On the other hand, book contains much more culture than material. From ancient great philosophy to modern author, anyone of them passes their theory through books they wrote. As the television program is made in a short time, I am sure that people fail to get much culture and education owing to the limitations. Even after several minutes, a man has forgotten what he watches on it. Differently, a story on the book may impress one so long time that he will remember what he learn forever. A popular book , such as <Holmes> translated in different language may be favorite all over the world for a long time , but a television program may not so.In sum, no matter television or book, they have their own role in our daily lives. Absence of one of them lead to keeping a wrong way. Moreover, it is important to pursue a balance of them when we need to know more. In the final analysis, we cannot overlook each of them, or knowledge may overlook us.

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论证书籍重要性有些问题。一是书籍便携，二是书籍最大的特点是可以给人联想的空间，这是人区别于其他动物的特点，是人类精神生活的重要组成部分云云。而电视则只是反映了导演对某本书的理解。

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ISSUE38 【Aero小组】第4次作业 BY BIGYAN
The speaker asserts that in the age of telebvision, reading books(下同) is not as important as it once was for the reason that people can learn as much by wantching television as they can by  reading book. There is no doubt that television stands out in the age of information, which can be passed faster and further via wire. However, i must think about（有点难看。换个说法吧。） the reason why reading book as a way of gaining information still is maintained, and why it has not been washed out for its own disadvantagement. I will show my viewpiont in the following paragraph.（这句话。。有点多余。）
第一段思路很好。但是貌似一般都是要在第一段表明态度的。
Fistly, medium, specially the televion, has developede greatly in the past decade. with the price down, more and more family afford to buy  televison. Compring with books（下同）, the period of making programs on  televion is much less, so peole receive much news as soon as possible.（感觉这样表达很奇怪。。尽量用常用的方式把。） In addition, using the well-being facility, the picture and voice on the tv becomes more clear and real（vivid）. Admittly, televiosn takes（plays） so important role in average days that people even can not live without it.
People prefer lying on the sofa to watch news all over the world to sitting in the library.（这个作为论据。或者说分论点。不是很站得住脚哦。。） To some extent, television unconciously change our lives, which used to get what we want to know through book. So it is normal to see in the shopping any kind of televison but not the best seller.
Though television give opptunity to learn more from outside, it is a mistake to ignore the importance of reading book. As far as i know, book as a record is popular dated from the acient.（这句语法有点混乱） Since human being created character, they were seeking a way of recording everyting happened. Before inventing paper, they had to picture or write on the wall or stone, which was not taken easily.（这个。建议换种说法。反正我读着很奇怪。） Thanks to the appearence of paper, we now is able to learn much history from the papyrus and many acient books. It is  a compromise that only watching televion cause missing much important history evens （？）and times, which most of （？）was recorded on the book.（这段论证。。也不是很到位的感觉。）
On the other hand（on one hand 在哪里？firstly，后面好像就没有了。）, book contains much more culture than material（这两者有可比性吗？）. From acient great philosephy to modern author, anyone of them pass their thoery through book they writed. As the television program is made in a short time, i am sure that people fail to get much culture and education owing to the limitions. Even after several minutes, a man has forgotten what he watch on it. Differently（在下孤陋寡闻。好像比较少看这样用的on the contrary好些吧。）, a story on the book may impress one so long time that he will remember what he learn forever. A popular book , such as <Holmes> translated in different language may be favorite all over the world for a long time , but a televison program may not so.
论证的问题比较大。首先论证没有中心句。或者论证没有围绕中心句。第一点还好。后面的要改进。。然后就是。。是不是开头与论证有一个对应关系会比较容易被老美接受。。
In sum, no matter television or book, they have their own role in our daly lives.（这样作为结尾第一句是不是显得太随便了。） Absense of one of them lead to keeping a wrong way. Moreover, it is important to pursue a balance of them when we need to know more. In the final analysis, we can not overlook each of them, or knowledge may overlook us.

本文应该是平衡观点。但是没有深入讨论。
前一部分说电视得到了很大的发展。并且笼统地说了电视的优越性。后一部分主要从记录和传递历史。还有传播文化。但是传播文化后面大片在比较书和电视对人的教育的效果问题。论证的问题上面已经说了。
语言方面。要正视一点。但是要符合大多数人的表达习惯。
看这篇文章就像是捡一颗颗的珍珠。散落满地。却找不到一根线。。

不知道你是不是限时写的哦。反正我还不敢限时。那样子的话。肯定要限时写一篇。不限时写一篇。最近没有时间啊。。。

这个星期要连着考两门。特地上来拍文。把它放到word里一看。吓我一大跳。。全是红色和绿色的波浪线。。。
时间比较紧。那些拼写问题。自己改一下吧。不好意思。