请问关于如何消除大作文模版化的问题,

nbdxkfqUID: 2427134

我的大作文让别人修改之后,说我的作文模版味道太浓,可能会因为模版的味道使成绩不够6分,我还有10天考试了,请问有什么办法可以解决这个问题的,让考官不认为我是套模版了,谢谢

还有我想问问大家写大作文有没有用模版,用了的话成绩怎么样?谢谢

forbeckUID: 2297645

这个模板的定义很难确定阿。。。

自己的作文有可能会有一个定式，这也可以算是模吧。。。。

模板这个问题难说阿

nbdxkfqUID: 2427134

我写了的作文是这样的,有些好的句子,比如作文开头第一句是别的书上看来的,比较好我就套上去了,然后观点句的前面一半(观点还是自己的)是看来的,还有每段的开头连接是看来的,最后结尾的开始部分是看来的,但是这些看来的不是只从一篇文章里面看来的,而是看了很多文章之后从不同的文章里面挑选出来的,请问这样算是模版吗?我写的作文如下::

大作文,题目是这样的:

modern buildings have changing the appearance of cities and towns, some people argue we should build all buildings in traditional styles to protect the cultural identity,to what extent do you agree or disagree?

我写的作文是这样的:

At present, a critical issue that whether we should build constructions in modern styles or go on building the same as the old fashions to unify the culture. Though many argue that we should protect the identity of our culture which cannot be destroyed, I would like to say that we may build modern structures for modern human.

First and foremost, with the rising standard of our life, people who construct buildings not only want it to be a shelter, but also expect their buildings to be arts. According to statistics, more and more people would like to live and work in buildings with artistic atmosphere which may makes them feel relax and more efficient. As a result, a lot of structures are built in modern styles.

In addition, comparing with the increasing number of population, we only have one earth, so we have to seek methods to solve the aggravating problem. What we can do is build modern structures to concentrate more and more people in less and less place. What is more, we should build high building to ask the sky for live space. In that case, it is clear that buildings with traditional fashions cannot achieve the task.

Last but not least, some people hold the idea that we should protect our culture which may disappear for ever because of the modern buildings. Personally, I figure that this argument has its reason, however, we can construct the modern buildings without destroy the old ones, such as building the new buildings far from the old structures, as well as set some laws to prevent the cultural identify in certain place from being destroyed.

According to what has been discussed above, we can draw a conclusion that we should build modern buildings to solve some problems, at the same time, to give better life to people. Considering the culture, we do have many other ways to protect it as well as original.

safinazhuangUID: 2432942

可能是一些句子太冗长，所以有人这么说吧

forbeckUID: 2297645

可能是每段的转折上不够自然，让人觉得模板化了吧

不过，很难说什么是原创的什么是模仿的，要不教育的作用怎么体现呢

我觉得，楼主尽量放心，如果不是考官说你的作文模板化，那就尽量按照自己的路子来写吧

safinazhuangUID: 2432942

有时候强行打破习惯只能反面作用
现在应该想在考试的时候，怎么快速写出你最好的效果