前辈们帮忙想一下询问申请进度的email该怎么写

KeiYangUID: 2342061

我现在在美国读11年级，明年打算转到另一所学校去读12年级  4.0的GPA & Top 5
4 {; [( V" ^) G$ d4 \; v
  n! z( ^: f8 {  ^申请材料已经寄到3周了，并且也跟学校老师打电话确认过材料全部到达了
$ f3 P8 Y" F. y5 M9 x+ U. a学校网站上说材料一经到达就开始审理，并且3周内结束
可是到现在我还没有收到任何邮件。或许是因为中间有一周春假的缘故。。。。

最近如坐针毡啊。。。。。因为我就申请了这么一所学校。。。。。
3 t. G% e3 N% t# I; \- t+ R% S9 ^2 `
' a5 T8 N0 N% G& }8 M. P0 Y2 P
这方面没有经验，措辞也不太能把握
% n: V! C4 ?& k% J& _3 C希望前辈们能帮忙一下询问结果的信。。。。或者说是询问申请进度。。。。。

' D) p% u. B* ]/ Q- u, T
, q0 E0 x1 g6 z# s  C* }2 f先谢谢了。。。。。
谢谢大家的帮助。。。。！
1 N3 N* f6 V8 S3 N4 w' z9 i
, k  P5 s6 D" x) M: m+ }7 V
( W& r' B4 Q/ \( j" a1 B, u
=============================================
1 [, w; r0 N% r' h=============================================
. J1 ]* O1 Q9 B, B7 i=============================================
  o5 }" X* B# }( b( C# W1 \

  Y0 J* i$ d1 U

$ A; X+ [% U: M呵呵。。。。刚刚在一个做过很多年外企翻译的室友帮助下写完了。。。。。。
5 i$ K8 M+ _& A2 t- F. `发出来给后人参考用。。。。。

- s9 `  a4 B3 \0 D1 k+ T+ d( n: D==========================
1 Y5 j3 g# K6 Z4 MDear Sir/Madam,
' J6 S, Y7 ?$ K# J3 J1 H( o. G  D
% u1 Q4 k+ d& c7 S; MThis is **** who applied for your school at the end of February. I called and confirmed that you have already received my application package. The school website says that the applicant would be contact within 3 weeks after the school receives the application form. I’m just writing to check on the status of my application. Thank you for your help and time ahead of time.
" a) q: l; F+ @7 B1 ]8 u* l1 q# j$ r
Sincerely yours,
***
3 M; O2 _& C2 o. z==========================
/ [2 U5 s1 X1 ]
[ 本帖最后由 KeiYang 于 2008-3-19 10:29 编辑 ]

tolkien_SUID: 2130759

正常写就可以啦~~

stfreezeUID: 2229135

正常写，语气好些，别做做就好

KeiYangUID: 2342061

呵呵。。。。刚刚在一个做过很多年外企翻译的室友帮助下写完了。。。。。。
发出来给后人参考用。。。。。
9 w8 I% D$ P6 p2 [
% O1 f  m# S6 \! t: k==========================
7 Z4 p" {# {1 R/ L* xDear Sir/Madam,
" s/ p; g8 q- h2 J$ R
/ g. J5 ?3 i3 }, c7 A0 J% mThis is **** who applied for your school at the end of February. I called and confirmed that you have already received my application package. The school website says that the applicant would be contact within 3 weeks after the school receives the application form. I’m just writing to check on the status of my application. Thank you for your help and time ahead of time.
3 j+ [) P% D( |9 O; u
9 Y+ d( K2 b/ `8 e6 _! DSincerely yours,
1 C: {6 z1 ~9 x8 x% I***
3 C' z: T3 Q& c5 n6 b- ]==========================