issue221 『APRIL 小组第二次作业』

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issue 221
The chief benefit of the study history is to break dowm the illusion that people in one period of time are significantly different from people who live at any other time in history.
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1 history has its continuance, A seriesof events come about over and over again let us feel the similarity of past and present.Changing of empire,war and the peace, justification and bias illustrate the objectivity is the basic of history.
2 History also has its stage. In different period of time, peopel have different customs, values and lifestyles, studying of the evolution helps us understand the enlightened values adn ideals.
3 There are equally important benefits of studying history.History can inspire us and bring us courage and tenacity, avoid repeating mistakes, most importantlyl, to acknowledge of humanity.Human's selfish and dignity,narrow and tolerant, greedy and self-restraint appear continually over the whole history.
4 History informs us the basic of human mtaure has not changed which strengh the understanding and tolerant of one another. In addition, history helps us formulate informed values and ideals.


Whether we human beings in this long historical process of development have maintained the constant nature of we human beings depends mostly on several aspects. However, I believe that not only people in different period of time share fundamental similarities but also are there many differences between them, which are undoubtedly significant.Furthermore, to discover whether people in history have significant differences is indeed one topic in the field of historic research ,but it is conspicuously not the chief one.
First of all, people no matter in which period of time they live are more or less alike. Take their emotions for example, people in ancient times despite of living comfortable as we do i modern times also share the feeling of love,hate , miss and regret to some others. Nowadays people like and even admire power, wealth, beauty and health and so forth, while these factors possess almost the same attraction to our ancestors. When people invent a new thing such as a wheel, as hoe, and a rocket, they are planning to reform the society which is the dream of human beings all the time.
On the other hand, I would like to point out that lots of differences do exist because people live in different times have different customs and lifestyles. Among them the most important one is due to education. People receive different education can certainly result in different characters in perspective, intelligence and  concept. Another significant reason for the point is the developing economy. The superstructure of a society, including thoughts, concepts, arts, politics, and of course education and so forth, is based on the economic base. People in the world drove by mechanical automation may concern the topic of European revolutions, Japanese new invitation, while people live in the time Internet and nuclear power may concentrate their attention on public's scandals, environment conservation and Korean atom bombs.
Finally, assumed it is true that people are all the same in different times, this is not the chief profit of history study. A historian's mission, in brief, is to reveal the laws for psychologists and literati to accomplish.
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, we can at last draw the conclusion as mentioned at the beginning ,that is, people of different times have no distinct differences or the opposite, that they share no basic similarities and the study of history can strengthen the understanding of each other.

[ 本帖最后由 brilliants 于 2008-3-26 23:43 编辑 ]

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Whether we human beings in this long historical process of development have maintained the constant nature of we human beings depends mostly on several aspects. However, I believe that not only people in different period（s） of time share fundamental similarities but also are there(应该是there are吧) many differences between them, which are undoubtedly significant.Furthermore, to discover whether people in history have significant differences is indeed one topic in the field of historic research ,but it is conspicuously not the chief one.
First of all, people no matter in which period of time they live are more or less alike(这句话结构有问题，可以改为no matter in which period of time ,people are more or less alike). Take their emotions for example, people in ancient times despite of living comfortable as we do i modern times(还是结构有问题) also share the feeling of love,hate , miss and regret to some others. Nowadays people like and even admire power, wealth, beauty and health and so forth, while these factors possess almost the same attraction to our ancestors. When people invent a new thing such as a wheel, as hoe, and a rocket, they are planning to reform the society which is the dream of human beings all the time.
On the other hand, I would like to point out that lots of differences do exist because people live in different times have different customs and lifestyles. Among them the most important one is due to education. People receive different education can certainly result in different characters in perspective, intelligence and  concept.（应该说详细一些） Another significant reason for the point is the developing economy. The superstructure of a society, including thoughts, concepts, arts, politics, and of course education and so forth, is based on the economic base. People in the world drove by mechanical automation may concern the topic of European revolutions, Japanese new invitation, while people live in the time Internet and nuclear power may concentrate their attention on public's scandals, environment conservation and Korean atom bombs（这些事例说明了现在的情况，和以前有什么样的区别没有体现）.
Finally, assumed it is true that people are all the same in different times, this is not the chief profit of history study. A historian's mission, in brief, is to reveal the laws for psychologists and literati to accomplish.（还是应该详细说明一下）
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, we can at last draw the conclusion as mentioned at the beginning ,that is, people of different times have no distinct differences or the opposite, that they share no basic similarities and the study of history can strengthen the understanding of each other
整个文章在说理性方面欠缺，很多地方个人觉得都应该展开去详述，还有就是建议写完长句后再读一遍，看看结构有没有问题。