5月就考了....作文求拍啊

hyangzhUID: 2435494

五月就考了,实在找不到高手帮看一下作文,请各位帮忙看看, 提点建议.万分感谢!!
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0 r& l. h3 K) }+ aAssignment: Do you think that teaching something to another person can help you to learn or master a subject or process?
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/ `" {% |1 x$ U6 f" B) M9 jMy essay:
Some may claim that teaching others is just a process of repeating, repeating the knowledge one has already mastered. Or some may state that as for teaching, one may just do so in order to make a living or to get some excitement though teaching others, but not relevant to himself learning. However, teaching is a way presenting the very knowledge gradually and clearly to another persons, during which provides a chance for the teacher to think it over logically as well as to get some further research.
# X* Q  `9 ~6 ]4 ^& l$ t    I am an excellent mathematic olympic competitor in our school, therefore other students often ask me to help them with the solutions, Although it seems quite waste of time for me to spend large amounts of time explaining an abstruse problem to someone else, yet I find it of great beneficial for me to do so. Maybe “teaching” cannot properly portray the process, for it is rather a process of discussing, in which provides a stage for the glorious ideas to converge. Usually during I answering others questions, other students may present their ideas when mine is not so perfect, or point out some faults when I make a mistake. Moreover, the discussing process allows us to inspire each other, so that I can learn from others’ inspiration and new methods. Then I make great processes and can better master the solution.
  Meanwhile, teaching is a chance to get some further research. My father, a machinery professor in the college often searches on the Internet or in the library for some further information. At first I was confused by his behavior, as in my mind, he is always a knowledgeable professor. ‘Learning while teaching, then I can meet the students’ need, in addition to enhance myself.’ my father explained. Indeed, it is his students’ eccentric questions and longing for knowing more that stimulate my father to go on for further research. In another word, my father learns a lot at the same time when teaching his students. ‘Learning keeps my knowledge fresh, so that I can stay as a qualified professor.’ Being a teacher, my father never ends learning.
  Teaching, while learning; learning, and then teaching. It seems to be a circle, but it occurs simultaneously. Teaching is not simply repeating, but discussing various opinions, searching for more creative ideas and researching updated information. Teaching something to another person contributes one on endlessly learning and better mastering and progressing.

深海lavenderUID: 2350207

LZ是先考T的吧?感觉简直就是一篇TOEFL作文.
TOEFL和SAT对作文的要求是不一样的.T的作文太模式化了.
4 r8 ]) L% W/ N5 z建议LZ多看看SAT范文,版内就有豆豆上传的范文.多揣摩下范文,才能把SAT作文写好.
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BTW,还有不少语法错误.要细心一点亚.
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加油加油咯:)

一步一杀UID: 2368111

多去找点其他的例子去支持你的论点:handshake 祝你成功！

hyangzhUID: 2435494

谢谢各位的谆谆教导...想问一下,如果多写点例子的话那就会泛泛而谈,点不透,没有critical thinking, 那会不会更糟糕?
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* G+ |( }0 I9 f! {$ ~还有,不那么格式话具体应该怎样比较好啊? 我读过一些Kaplan上的范文, 好象都是 论点---例子一----例子二---结论......
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深海lavenderUID: 2350207

不是的.SAT作文对于例子的描述详尽一点比较好.
SAT和T的作文不一样的.看OG上的范文最好.
" D. s6 y$ q  l  TSAT作文不一定要有个具体的格式,不少5分6分范文都是以写一个故事为主的.形式可以多样化,不用那么死板,根据自己的实际情况,擅长写哪种就写哪种,没有绝对的优劣之分的.写的好都一样.
先去看看豆豆上传的那些范文吧.不只是看框架,要细心揣摩每一句的写法.作文不是一天两天能写好的东西,要耐下心来看,多看多领悟,有个几个星期,也就有感觉了.:)

豆豆～UID: 2378384

??妹妹?臀彝其N～呼呼～