历史高频前一百，分类，由高频到低频，貌似可以方便大家练习~共同进步！

jinliyun123UID: 2306368

我用的机经貌似是07年以前历史高频，我把前一百题分了类，由高频到低频

~偶发现很多题交叉的，我就按自己习惯性思维分吧，带引号的"xx"就是和作文大讲堂分类不一致的
教育类：
51、
艺术类：
144、131、218、176、243、
历史类：
48、"36"、103、"120"、221、54、110、"241"同36
教育类：
130、50、(47)、154、5、214、94、80、112、
学习：(科研)
4、"87"、177、59、"226"、138、"153"、"168"、183、28、"25"、"164"同87、"173"、73
社会类：(社会思潮、社会问题、领导者)
41、185、17、70、160、"121"、40、93、29、180、61、46、"170"、174、171、
文化类：(传统)
147、"26"、207、10、"72"、63、"203"、
行为类(行为-〉价值观)
208、"152"、141、136、212、99、31、157、127、184、138、235、95、210、186、64、175
政治类：(政府)
83、43、56、69、8、167、108、195、
国际类：(全球化)
11、13、197、
传媒类：
38、"74"、109、161、
科技类：(科技带-〉社会问题)
7、88、150、159、151、196、30、119、


我八月21号考，就写了1篇issue，还是不计时的，不行了，还有一个月，要冲刺了。。。我的目标是狂虐GRE

今天才归类好，为了以后自己练习，我想对大家也许有用把，贴出来晒晒，牛人们你们飘过就行~~那些和我一样迷惘，不在希望迷惘的一起加油吧。。。。。

jinliyun123UID: 2306368

呃，更正一下，教育类不小心写了两遍，51是最高频，后面不变

jinliyun123UID: 2306368

在此拜托大家一件事，有点不厚道色。。。。
基于我就要开始狂练作文了，我还不知道自己行文的问题，热心的大伙们帮我改下吧，最好一针见血，狗血淋头，好让我有痛改前非的决心。。。。可以留下你的链接，必回拍。。。。
e1TOPIC: ISSUE162 - "One often hears about the need for individuals to take responsibility for their own lives. However, the conditions in which people find themselves have been largely established long before people become aware of them. Thus, the concept of personal responsibility is much more complicated and unrealistic than is often assumed."
word 547    时间不好意思见人了，还回头改过  DATE: 2008-7-16 10:13:50
As cactus is created by the desert, is the concept of personal responsibility defined by the conditions?（我同学说太突兀了，我还自以为吸引人眼球，唉。。。。帮忙评判下，谢。。。）
                                                         
The statement asserts that the concept of personal responsibility varies with the conditions, which exist long before people become aware of them. In my view, individuals need to realize the the significance of taking responsibility for their own lives, as current wisdom says. Because our behavior is not only influenced by the culture but also determined by ourselves. So the final judgement should depend on a case-by-case analysis of two key factors, that is the society we live and our own principle.
Admittedly, as man is a product of society, to some extent, people are influenced by the coditions around them, and accept the culture and custom unconsciously. It's common sense that the culture of a particular society is instilled in a human being from infancy, which is often uncontrollable. People's behaviors are relevant to their cultures. For example, people from some Eastern Asian countries express their friendliness by asking your family or work, while people from America consider it offensive. The fuction of the culture on guiding people's actions is obvious.
In addition, the main moral standards of bahaviors are created by the society, such as abiding by rules of discipline and laws, and respecting for the old and loving for the young. Though reactions  will vary with different people, they obey the same social morality. In a sense, moral standards created by the society benefit the development of human; we choose to listen to the society voluntarily. As a member of a society, we are affected by the outside deep and wide.
However, environment is not the only factor in determining our behaviors; personal choice and thoughts decides our response to the social and physical environment too. Numerous psychological studies show that our instinct plays a vital role in our behaviors. When we are in danger, we fear, quiver, even cry by instinct; when we have benefits, we feel happy and laugh by instinct. These actions by instincts can't change with the conditions.
Some people even overcome the instinct, for they have a strong belief, which definitively determine people's behavior. Those people consider the ideal more precious than anything else, even life; so they are able to bear additional tribulations. For intance, Giordano Btuno, an Italian philosopher, using Copernican principles in formulating his cosmic theory of an infinite universe, chose to be burned at the stake to defend his theory. At that time, the effects of personal choice and ideal are   so significant that the influence of the conditions can be ignored.
As a free man, we can choose our faith freely. Despite that our thoughts come from the society, as we growing up, we can choose what we need and change our thoughts. Everyone has his own belief. Different ideologies can exsit in one country. So in the same condition, it's reasonable for people to act totally different. For example, someone considers money is the most important; others take care of the honor first. People make their decision according to their own social value.
In sum, both the outside and the inside react on people's behavior. By weighing environment and ability, or reality and ideal, we make ultimate choice, which is determined by the society and oursleves.

superjiang001UID: 2300426

不好意思，哥们，今天送人，上午一个，晚上一个，把时间耽误了，我现在改你的两篇文章，今天改不完的话明天肯定完成，我8月15日考，哈尔滨，现在很犯愁，呵呵，希望以后能互改，互相交流，共同进步！

jinliyun123UID: 2306368

好的，你给我发消息就行，把链接附上，一同努力

superjiang001UID: 2300426

The statement asserts that the concept of personal responsibility varies with the conditions, which exist long before people become aware of them. In my view, individuals need to realize the significance of taking responsibility for their own lives[感觉不光是realize就行了，直接说should take responsible for their lives好点], as current wisdom says. Because our behavior is not only influenced by the culture[ culture的出现感觉有点突兀 ]but also determined by ourselves. So the final judgement should depend on a case-by-case analysis of two key factors, that is the society we live and our own principle [复数principles. 最后一句话你用so开头，但感觉和前面好像没什么因果关系]

Admittedly, as man is a product of society, [人类是社会的产物，用human beings 好点]to some extent, people are influenced by the conditions around them, and accept the culture and custom unconsciously.[由于人们被周围社会环境影响，所以他们是社会的产物，你这个因果关系反了，而且你下面一句话说了it is common sense that人类从小就被周围文化影响，所以前一句话没什么作用，说了等于白说] It's common sense that the culture of a particular society is instilled in a human being from infancy, which is often uncontrollable. People's behaviors are relevant to their cultures. [感觉这句和上一句是反复说车轱辘话，而且没联系上people’s responsibility ]For example, people from some Eastern Asian countries express their friendliness by asking [什么叫ask啊，另外表示友好，用show这个单词好点]your family or work, while people from America consider it offensive. The function of the culture on guiding people's actions is obvious.[我感觉每段最好开头就给出主题句，表达你这段想表达的意思，要不readers读到最后也不知道你这段想说什么]

In addition, the main moral standards of behaviors are created by the society, such as abiding by rules of discipline and laws[不如说self-discipline，要不感觉像中国人说的英语，呵呵], and respecting for the old and loving for the young[这半句没太懂什么意思.] Though reactions will vary with different people[这句说法太中国化了，不如最简单的different people have variety kinds of reactions,] they obey the same social morality. In a sense, moral standards created by the society benefit the development of human [benefit用法也不对，说do great good to好点 ]; we choose to listen to the society [什么叫listen to society啊]voluntarily. As a member of a society, we are affected by the outside deep and wide [a member, 后面又说we. 我猜你这段还是想表达人们易受外界影响，但感觉突然扯到道德问题上了，不太合适
]
However, environment is not the only factor in determining our behaviors; personal choices and thoughts decides our response to the social and physical environment too [decide用的不好.] Numerous psychological studies show that our instinct plays a vital role in our behaviors.[这句论证感觉没有力度，光说了个study show怎么就能让人相信instinct对behavior有这么大的作用 ]When we are in danger, we fear, quiver, even cry by instinct; when we have benefits [benefit这个词不合适,] we feel happy and laugh by instinct. These actions by instincts can't change with the conditions.[ 这段感觉论证的不好，再想想怎么重新组织论证吧]

Some people even overcome the instinct, for they have a strong belief, which definitively determine people's behavior.[你怎么知道belief就能definitely 决定人们的行为？ ]Those people consider the ideal more precious than anything else, even life[太牵强了] so they are able to bear additional tribulations. For instance, Giordano Btuno, an Italian philosopher, using Copernican principles in formulating his cosmic theory of an infinite universe, chose to be burned at the stake to defend his theory. At that time, the effects of personal choice and ideal are   so significant that the influence of the conditions can be ignored. [例子还行，但你没说清楚]

As a free man, we can choose our faith freely. Despite that our thoughts come from the society, as we growing up, we can choose what we need and change our thoughts. [后半句和despite那半句不存在转折关系]Everyone has his own belief. Different ideologies can exsit in one country. So in the same condition, it's reasonable for people to act totally different. For example, someone considers money is the most important; others take care of the honor first. People make their decision according to their own social value.

In sum, both the outside and the inside react on people's behavior. By weighing environment and ability, or reality and ideal, we make ultimate choice, which is determined by the society and oursleves.
[总体感觉你语法还有待提高，用词不够准确，论证手法也不太好，最重要的是感觉你写跑题了，我也没想好具体怎么写，等我写完这篇再和你交流，呵呵，我的想法兄弟辨证接受吧]

superjiang001UID: 2300426

那作文修改工具怎么用啊？方括号括起来的东西变不了颜色
哪里有“完成”那个键？

jinliyun123UID: 2306368

我都是粘贴在回复里，然后重新编辑的

jinliyun123UID: 2306368

respecting for the old and loving for the young尊老爱幼，金山上查的，不知道对不对。。。。

还是谢啦。。。我两年没碰过英语了，写起来好手生，语法基本忘了，很中国式，一定改正，好好努力！

jinliyun123UID: 2306368

恩，我重新审了下题，感觉自己可能确实想偏了。我理解成人类行为受社会环境的影响，现在觉得论述重点应放在自己的责任是否随环境而改变。对生活负责和人类行为不等同，（对生活负责通过人类的行为来实现的），重点在责任上，责任的可实现性。

修改后的：
The statement asserts that the concept of personal responsibility varies with the conditions, which exist long before people become aware of them. In my view, individuals should take responsibility for their own lives, as current wisdom says. Because our behavior is not only influenced by the environment we live, where value judgements are ruled by social morality or culture，but also determined by ourselves. In a word, the final judgement of personal responsibility should depend on a case-by-case analysis of two key factors, that is the society we live and our own principles.

Admittedly, personal responsibility is restricted by pre-exsiting conditions. Human beings is a product of society; to some extent, people are influenced by the conditions around them, and accept the culture and custom unconsciously, especially in the days of our juvenility, which is often uncontrollable. Considering that people's behavior is prelimited by the conditions, the function of personal reponsibity on people's behavior is unimportant. For example, when Van Gogh was alive, his art style was not appreciated by the mainstream. And the cotemporary  people whose thoughts are limited by pre-exsiting conditions, can't accept his pictures. While nowadays we realize the merit of Van Gogh's pictures, we can't assert that people in that times didn't take responsibility for their bahavior. Sometimes people's behavior is determined by the society they live,  and even their own principles is limited by the environment. As a member of a society, we are affected by the outside deep and wide.

However, sometimes the situation that the conditions limit personal responsibility can be changed; personal choices and thoughts can provide feedback for the social and physical environment, and we can't overlook the function of personal responsibility. Personal responsibility is important to their own life and the stabilization even the progress of the society. Each of us should work hard, care family members, and obey laws,then the world will become more and more prosperous, otherwise chaotic. And each of us should persist in searching for the truth, and have critical ideas towards the authority, then the society will be given an impetus to develop, otherwise be stagnant. For instance, Giordano Btuno, an Italian philosopher, when he found the world is a sun-centered universe, instead of earth-centered, he insisted on his cosmic theory, and chose to be burned at the stake. He knew the significance of personal responsibility, and tired his best to defen the truth, evoke people, and result in the Scientific Revolution. All in all, personal responsibility for their own life is extremely important.

Finally, it's our duty to take responsibity for our lives. Though the pre-established conditions may place limits on personal responsibility, and can't be changed by people's minds; Personal responsibility can exist with the conditions side by side. In order to live more comfortable, and achieve the harmony and advancement of the society, we all need to take responsibility for our lives.

caifuUID: 2423900

辛苦了，谢谢！

liyuqincUID: 2558601

前一百太多了吧 我想精练30篇左右 怎样选择