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lemon1kgUID: 2309820

agree or disagree 同时做多件事情时，一次做完一个，再做下一个的方法比较好

（不知道题目到底是问选择还是同意不同意~）

When it comes to the issue that whether it is good to deal with all the things at the same time or do one after another? Diffenrent people hold different views. Personally, i prefer complete matter one by one and my reasons listed as follows.

First of all, the way of one by one will be more effective than do them together. Efficiency is the most important point when we are working. We try every best to improve efficiency such as preparing fully before the execution, finding out the best method to work out the problem, and so on. However, it is easy, even the easiest, for us to neglect the rest. If we always deal with all the problems together, there will not enough time for us to rest, sometimes just taking a break. The regulative rest is the foundation of high effeciency. Therefore we should complete one and have a rest first,then devote ourselves to another, or we will be too exhausted with all the problems around.

Another reason for my preference is concerned about the fruit of work. We almost have these kind of experience that, when we are school students, the most hard time is the exam period. We are deeply in troubles because of the massive matters, including exams of diffrent subjects, the final papers and numerous homeworks. If we delay all the work to the deadline, it is very likely that we do nothing well, even if we work day and night at the end of term. While if we had reviewed earlier before the test and finish the homework everytime with the teacher's schedual, it will be denifitly easy to face these so called "troubles" and get a great ending. Work goes as the same way as in school, thus doing one after another surely guarantee the good result of any task.

Nevertheless, some question that will taking everying together save a lot time, which is kind of advantages when we regard the time as money today? Actually the answer is NO. from the surface it is right, but from the angle of experience it is totally unpraticle. Suppose that if we make a samll mistake in any part of the whole, we have to revise it and that will effect the rest part. It is rather saving time but waste more unneccesary energy.

To sum up, considering all the aspects(efficicency, result, and time saving ) i discussed above, it is sagacious to draw the conclusion that doing one thing after another is better than doing everything together.

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

When it comes to the issue that whether it is good to deal with all the things at the same time or do one after another? (, different句子并未结束)Diffenrent people hold different views. Personally, i prefer complete matter(tasks) one by one and my reasons (are)listed as follows. First of all, the way of (finishing tasks) one by one will be more effective than do (doing) them together. Efficiency is the most important point when we are working. We try every best to improve efficiency such as preparing fully before the execution, finding out the best method to work out the problem, and so on. However, it is easy, even the easiest, for us to neglect the rest. If we always deal with all the problems together, there will not enough time for us to rest, sometimes just taking a break. (这点好像不太有说服力，讲效率的话不代表没有时间去做别的事情)The regulative rest is the foundation of high effeciency（这句没看懂啊）. Therefore we should complete one and have a rest first,then devote ourselves to another, or we will be too exhausted with all the problems around.;q"] [1 L2A!]x bbs.gter.net!m]EO o Another reason for my preference is concerned about（with） the fruit(consequence/result) of work. We almost have these kind of experience that, when we are(as) school students, the most hard(去掉most改为hardest) time is the exam period. We are deeply in troubles because of the massive matters, including exams of diffrent subjects, the final papers and numerous homeworks. If we delay all the work to the deadline, it is very likely that we (could) do nothing well, even if we work day and night at the end of term. While if we had reviewed earlier before the test and finish the homework everytime with (according to the schedual) the teacher's schedual, it will be denifitly easy to face these so called "troubles" and get a great ending. Work goes as (不用as) the same way as in school, thus doing one after another surely guarantee the good result of any task.      z%i Neverthelesssome question that will taking everying together save a lot time, which is kind of advantages when we regard the time as money today?,(for some, nagging question remains. Isn't it a way of saving time by doing things together, especially in the days that we valued time match up to money?)  Actually the answer is NO. from the surface it is right, but from the angle of experience it is totally unpraticle. Suppose that if we make a samll mistake in any part of the whole, we have to revise it and that will effect the rest part. It is rather saving time but waste more unneccesary energy. 这段我写得跟你很像。可以互相借鉴一下。https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1 @ }bCH To sum up, considering all the aspects(efficicency, result, and time saving )(that is, efficiency, result and time saving) i discussed above, it is sagacious to draw the conclusion that doing one thing after another is better than doing everything together. 文章整体感觉不错。只是觉得第三段部分展开要更充分一些。就像之前迷茫者同学指出我的问题，大话说太多。我们都需要把文章写得更加specific一点。 共同进步！~

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lemon1kgUID: 2309820

开心哦~ 崇拜的gabby19832004 同学帮我改。
不过我语言水平还真的是很。。。加油加油~

19811010316UID: 2220703

When it comes to the issue that whether it is good to deal with all the things at the same time or do one after another? Diffenrent people hold different views. Personally, i prefer complete matter one by one and my reasons listed as follows(my reasons are listed as follows, i will list following reasons; i have a couple of reasons as follows).

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First of all, the way of one by one will be more effective than do them together. Efficiency is the most important point when we are working. We try every(our) best to improve efficiency such as preparing fully before the execution, finding out the best method to work out the problem, and so on. However, it is easy, even the easiest, for us to neglect the rest. If we always deal with all the problems together, there will not(there hardly is) enough time for us to rest, sometimes(even) just taking a break. The regulative(regular) rest is the foundation of high effeciency. Therefore we should complete one and have a rest first,then devote ourselves to another, or we will be too exhausted with all the problems around(to deal with all problem at once).

Another reason for my preference is concerned about the fruit of work. We almost have these kind of experience that, when we are school students, the most hard time is the exam period. We are deeply in troubles because of the massive matters, including exams of diffrent subjects, the final papers and numerous homeworks. If we delay all the work to the deadline, it is very likely that we do nothing well, even if we work day and night at the end of term. While if we had reviewed earlier before the test and finish the homework everytime with the teacher's schedual, it will be denifitly easy to face these so called "troubles" and get a great ending(achieve great attainment). Work goes as the same way as in school, thus doing one after another surely guarantee the good result of any task.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE
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Nevertheless, some questions that will taking everying together save a lot time(elusive, coping with some questions all together will save a lot of time), which is kind of advantages when we regard the time as money today? Actually the answer is NO. from the surface it is right, but from the angle of experience it is totally unpraticle. Suppose that if we make a samll mistake in any part of the whole, we have to revise it and that will effect the rest part. It is rather saving time but waste more unneccesary energy(elusive, it wastes more unnecessary time rather than saves time/it not saves precious but wastes more unnecessary energy.).

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To sum up, considering all the aspects(efficicency, result, and time saving ) i discussed above (considering all the aspects, that is, efficiency, results and time saving), it is sagacious for us to draw the conclusion that doing one thing after another is better than doing everything together.

其实写得还是不错的。

多看范文，把结尾的开头结尾的frame搞好。

然后套着，练几篇肯定有用。。。。

加油。。。。

[ 本帖最后由 19811010316 于 2008-8-1 23:49 编辑 ]

JaneclubUID: 2418771

我按照你的意思又写了一遍。希望有所帮助，共同进步。

Me: When it comes to the issue that whether it is good to deal with all the things at the same time or do one after another, diffenrent people hold different views. Personally, I prefer to finish the tasks one by one.

You: First of all, the way of one by one will be more effective than do themtogether. Efficiency is the most important point when we are working.We try every best to improve efficiency such as preparing fully beforethe execution, finding out the best method to work out the problem, andso on. However, it is easy, even the easiest, for us to neglect therest. If we always deal with all the problems together, there will notenough time for us to rest, sometimes just taking a break. Theregulative rest is the foundation of high effeciency. Therefore weshould complete one and have a rest first,then devote ourselves toanother, or we will be too exhausted with all the problems around. (我明白你想说休息是为了更好的工作。可是在不能handle的情况下，你用了许多长句，或许有些你自己都觉得读起来不舒服，意思不清楚的话，只会对你自己不利。我试着又写了一遍，虽然写的不是非常好，但避免了长句和表达不清晰的问题。短句子要写明主谓宾对我们来说要容易得多，所以应该先练好用简单句，或者一层的复杂句，明确自己句子的主谓宾)(_
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Me: First of all, doing things one by one is more effecitve than treating them as a whole. Since our goal is to work efficiently, we always try our best to solve the problems by having a nice plan, or looking for a better solution to work them out. However, we do not have time to rest ourselves if we tend to deal with all the work in a rash. (It is alwasy better to have a personal example to support your ideas) Practically, we should have some rests inbetween two tasks, otherwise we may feel tired or get bored. What we need is just a short break so that we may refresh our mind. And eventually we end up with a doing better job.

You: Another reason for my preference is concerned about the fruit of work(好像没有这种说法，而且被动语态用得不好). We almost（almost晦涩） have these kind of experience that, when we are school students, the most hard time is the exam period（不要滥用comma，因为它非常tricky，用不好反而影响句子的流畅性）. We are deeply in troubles because of the massive matters, including exams of diffrent subjects, the final papers and numerous homeworks. If we delay all the work to the deadline, it is very likely that we do nothing well, even if we work day and night at the end of term. While if we had reviewed earlier before the test and finish the homework everytime with the teacher's schedual, it will be denifitly easy to face these so called "troubles" and get a great ending. Work goes as the same way as in school, thus doing one after another surely guarantee the good result of any task.（这句话似乎有些武断，把每件事情都做好（any task）让人觉得不可信。 可以反过来说，如果全部一起做，恐怕哪个都完成不了）

Me: Another reason why I prefer to work one by one is that I care about the results. Basicaly, we may have some experiences like working with a lot of work at the end of each semester. In this hard time period, we are probably in trouble with satisfy all the deadlines. I hate to delay all of my work until the last day. But how can I treat everything well? How can I get everything done with excellent results. Due to my personal experiences, I always assign a priority to each task and finish one after another, meaning that I treat them sequentially before the finals such as the homework assignments, the final project reports and then the final exam papers. Conversely, if I try to finish them all at one time, there would be definitely a big mess.

To sum up ...

[ 本帖最后由 Janeclub 于 2008-8-2 05:39 编辑 ]

JaneclubUID: 2418771

By the way, 你写的已经很不错了，继续加油

lemon1kgUID: 2309820

受益匪浅~~
非常感谢LS的，你改的很好，看起来舒服很多了，而且语言也很准确。
我会尽量克服长句的问题，虽然只有几天了。