impluse周五作业大家狠批!~

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

agree or disagree 同时做多件事情时，一次做完一个，再做下一个的方法比较好（周五作业）。

People may good at something while bad at a list of many other things. I am such a person that good at focus on one thing at a time, and bad at handle a bundle of stuff simultaneously. I also have my reasons for this  “One-by-One” perference.

First of all, by finishing things in such arrangement, I could be more concentrated on single stuff. We all have confronted some issue that require our full attention, especially those academic researches. Because the procedure involves several detailed and trivial steps, like observation, data collection, ingredient analysis, calculation that all need extreme meticulosity, we could not be distracted by other stuff. Otherwise, mistakes in scientific researches are inevitable. In this situation, the authority and the objectivity alike, are therefore being undermined.

Secondly, to do one task at a time could largely save your time. Some may hold that to embark on several stuff simultaneously would be more efficient, and thus find my contention ridiculous. However, the truth is once you get involved in several projects, you get to start time and time again after continuously being abstracted by one another. That is, you have to commite a mount of time reviewing. You have to figure out where you stop and where to start. And by doing this repeated work , you have your precious time slipped away and your workload overburdened.

Thirdly, it makes me feel relaxed by doing work in turn. I like to keep everything in order in my daily life. If things getting amassed and disordered I will absolutely blow up. For example, suppose I have to do laundries, call a friend and watch videoes on Sunday. I will definitely not call my friend when I watch am watching videoes. Nor would I watch while doing my laundry. Doing things without planning only cotributes to disturbing the peace of heart. Meanwhile, the strain of mental effort was aggravated.

To sum up, although I would occasionally listen music while jogging. In most cases, I prefer to do things one after another because it helps me fix my attention, save time, and makes me feel relaxed.

lemon1kgUID: 2309820

LZ的词汇量真是没话说。。我会摘抄下来，不知道考试能用到多少，呵呵。

说三点哈，1第二个point中间，一会you啊，一会my啊，有点晕了看得。
               2第三个point的例子感觉不够有力。
               3用I的例子太多是不是不太好啊。这篇从开头到结尾都是I~

我的水平比你低很多，说的不对多包涵：）

迷茫者UID: 2514662

9BPeople may (be) good at something while bad at a list of many other things. I am such a person that good at focus on one thing at a time, and bad at handle a bundle of stuff simultaneously. I also have my reasons for this  “One-by-One” preference.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE7y(f{ i9B
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First of all, by finishing(operating) things in such (a) arrangement, I could be more concentrated on single stuff. We all have (been) confronted (with) some issue(s) that require our full attention, especially (for) those academic researches. Because the procedure involves several detailed and trivial steps, like observation, data collection, ingredient analysis, calculation that all need extreme（extreme删去修饰累赘) meticulosity（the spirit of meticulosity）,  we could not be distracted by other stuff(s). Otherwise, mistakes in scientific researches are (will be) inevitable. In this situation, the authority and the objectivity alike are therefore being undermined(这句话表达有点怪，可能是我自己语言的问题：  出了错误怎么导致这些东西被破坏思维上有些跳跃).Secondly, to do one task at a time could largely save your time. Some may hold that to embark on several stuff(s) simultaneously would be more efficient, and thus find(consider) my contention ridiculous. However, the truth is (that) once you get involved in several projects, you get to start(get to含又start意思，你要表达的可能是have to start) time and time again after continuously being abstracted by one another. That is, you have to commite(commit) a mount of time (in) reviewing. You have to figure out where you stop and where to(删去) start. And by doing this repeated work , you have your precious time slipped(slip) away and your workload overburdened(overburdening).8q#K
Thirdly, it makes me feel relaxed by doing work in turn. I like to keep everything in order in my daily life. If things getting(get) amassed and disordered I will absolutely blow up. For example, suppose(supposing,不过还是用if好) I have to do laundries, call a friend and watch videoes(videos) on Sunday. I will definitely not call my friend when I am watching videoes(videos). Nor would I watch while doing my laundry (laundries前后一致). Doing things without planning only co(n)tributes to disturbing the peace(pace) of heart(working). Meanwhile, the strain of mental effort was(will be) aggravated.To sum up, although I would occasionally listen music while jogging, In most cases, I prefer to do things one after another（这个短语强调连续不断的意思，这里用one by one最好因为还可以跟第一段有个照应） because it helps me fix my attention, save time, and makes me feel relaxed.

第一篇30分钟内完成的作文吧~~~写成这里不错了~~~
我第一次的时候也是错误百出 呵呵~~~
指正一下：
由于限时的关系：错误比较多~~事态要注意~动词不要漏~打字要看着屏幕盲打否则 拼写错误会很多
这篇文章跟上面两篇 差很多~~你的特别没SHOW出来~~词用的不够好
比如（be good at用了很多次~~~感觉不好~~~~类似的经常用的平时要特意积累下 如 be skillful with,  be excelled in ,be proficient in等等）基本上 没次都得用到
例子也可以了~~~不够还有进步空间
结构没问题了~~~不过建议自己综合个万能开头和结尾 可以省很多时间 又可以亮一下你的词汇，~在中间部分很难SHOW因为是想到什么写什么了，没时间分析哪个好 哪个合理！

哈哈 见谅~~~有点挑剔了~~~~~~~~~~~帮你更好的进步~~~~~~~~~~~~~多限时写几篇就会好起来的
我在拼口语了~~~~作文了半个月先停下，不过我会继续帮你改的，口语感觉有点郁闷~~~~~~~~可以的话，想请教下

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People may be good at something while bad at a list of many other things. I am such a person that is good at focusing on one thing at a time, and bad at handling a bundle of stuff simultaneously. I also have my reasons for this  “One-by-One” perference.

First of all, by finishing things in such arrangement, I could be more concentrated on single stuff. We all have confronted some issue that require our full attention, especially those academic researches. Because the procedure involves several detailed and trivial steps, like observation, data collection, ingredient analysis, calculation that all need extreme meticulosity, we could not be distracted by other stuff. Otherwise, mistakes in scientific researches are inevitable. In this situation, the authority and the objectivity alike, are therefore being undermined.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE7mR0X!gT"T

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To sum up, although I would occasionally listen music while jogging. In most cases, I prefer to do things one after another because it helps me fix my attention, save time, and makes me(delete) feel relaxed.

不错。
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gabby19832004UID: 2461820

谢谢修改！~我会继续努力的。
另外，更正一点。stuff是泛指，没有复数形式。

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

谢谢修改！~我会继续努力的。
另外，更正一点。stuff是泛指，没有复数形式。

迷茫者UID: 2514662

哦~~~~~~~~~~学习了~~~~~~~~~我以前没注意

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

恩。这个I 和U的问题是应该统一一下。谢谢帮助！~
关于这个举自己的例子的问题，之前也有同学提过。 我个人觉得没什么关系，毕竟题目问的是你个人会怎么选择。可是既然大家都提出来这个问题的话，最好就探讨一下。改天跟组长申请一下，看是否大家讨论。
总之，谢谢帮忙！~

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

刚查了一下confront也可以不加with.基本上是及物动词用得比较多。
恩一个早上在看小说，趁网页打不开的时候一会研究一点。
口语的话我上次是24，没有准备过，并且有一道题听力没听懂所以空在那里。这次想冲28的。目标有点高了呵呵。所以狂练听力。我觉得听力是最主要的。口语，作文的重点都在听力。而且因为听力不能听第二遍，所以需要重点突击。
不知道你有什么好办法准备听力？

迷茫者UID: 2514662

看来~~~我们的口语有点差距啊~~~
没准备就能上24 ~~呵呵 属于牛人了~~~~~你每天听力能听多少时间~~~~我一天 听了一个半 小时后 就感到有点恶性了~~~~3个小时 是极限了~~~太难熬了~~~~~

gabby19832004UID: 2461820

我觉得口语语音标准很重要。之前在寄托上看见很多牛牛都说过了。我也下了他们的录音确实都很native的。
听力我也很头疼，之前都觉得自己最强的就是听力了。结果一战考下来17分，晕死。我也在狂练，不过貌似还是不得要领。2个小时差不多了。本来我还看看friends，后来我一打开我妹妹立马过来，这家伙本来就不要学习，现在刚好找到借口。结果弄得我也不准看了。可怜。。。。
不过据说牛人都听写scientific america， 我是能听懂就不错了。听写根本不奢望。