IMPULSE小组周三作业--技术与进步类--技术让生活复杂,简单?

Jas2008UID: 2509577

Do you agree or disagree,technology make people's lives simpler in turn to make people's lives more complicated.
题目不是很明白,技术先让生活变的简单,继而变得复杂?

Technology impacts on our lifes in every espact of the modern life.Can you imagine the life without refrigeratories,televisions,washing machines and computers? Technology does make people’s life simpler by providing convenient accesses to communication,transportation and so on.In fact, We depend on the technology so much that we might even start to get annoyed if e-mail can not be checked once a day. However, this technological dependency sometimes leads us to a more complicated life.

Thanks to the development of communication technology,we now can make a telephone or send an e-mail within a minute to get in touch with our friends or relatives instead of writing a letter then waiting a couple of days for the replay.I bound to say that it is simpler than before to communicate.But is it easier to select a top-quality cell phone from all these congener products?Is it easier to operate a piece of equipment with so many functions that the instruction manual ran on for pages and was at times incomprehensible?Definitely not.Life turns to be complicated when the technology can satisfy all people’s needs at one time.Then you may find that there are four remote controls on your TV table with more than 30 bottons each,which confuses you much to operate the sound system properly.

The other thing I want to talk about the technology is the information explosion.With the help of internet,we can get all kinds of information we want in time. Unfortunately, the amount of information is so huge that we can not even tell which is the real.Technology makes things more complicated ,which can also extend to the business world.Ecommerce is flourishing these years,but the network security is worried about by the majority.Cheating in the virtual world is more common than in a real world.Everybody doing business on line should keep an keen eye on the net security to prevent from cheaters or hackers.

From what we have discussed above,the technology brings us conveniences to make our life simpler.On the other hand, to get these conveniences,we must pay much attention learning to operate the high-tech devices,defense ourselves from hackers’ attack and deal with the complex relationships resulted from the technology.Life becomes more complicated to some extent after the emergence of high techology.

双手的温柔UID: 173110

Jas2008

Technology impacts on our lifes in every espact[aspect] of the modern life.Can you imagine the life without refrigeratories,televisions,washing machines and computers? Technology does make people’s life simpler by providing convenient accesses to communication,transportation and so on.In fact, We depend on the technology so much that we might even start to get annoyed if e-mail can not be checked [at] once a day. However, this technological dependency sometimes leads us to a more complicated life.

Thanks to the development of communication technology,we now can make a telephone or send an e-mail within a minute to get in touch with our friends or relatives instead of writing a letter then waiting a couple of days for the replay [reply].I bound to say that it is simpler than before to communicate.But is it easier to select a top-quality cell phone from all these congener products?Is it easier to operate a piece of equipment with so many functions that the instruction manual ran on for pages and was at times incomprehensible? [这句两个过去时是为什么要用？有点糊涂。]Definitely not.Life turns to be complicated when the technology can satisfy all people’s needs at one time.Then you may find that there are four remote controls on your TV table with more than 30 bottons each,which confuses you much to operate the sound system properly. [with which you will even get confused about how to adjust the TV volume]

The other thing I want to talk about the technology is the information explosion.With the help of internet,we can get all kinds of information we want in time. Unfortunately, the amount of information is so huge that we can not even tell which is the real.Technology makes things more complicated ,which can also extend to the business world.Ecommerce [E-commerce] is flourishing these years,but the network security is worried about by the majority.Cheating in the virtual world is more common than in a real world.Everybody doing business on line should keep an keen eye on the net security to prevent from cheaters or hackers.

From what we have discussed above,the technology brings us conveniences to make our life simpler.On the other hand, to get these conveniences,we must pay much attention learning to operate the high-tech devices,defense ourselves from hackers’ attack and deal with the complex relationships resulted from the technology.Life becomes more complicated to some extent after the emergence of high techology.

不错，不过第一个论点表述上应该还可以加强，有些地方有点confuse。加油^^

Jas2008UID: 2509577

非常感谢，:handshake
越来越发现我作文怎么看怎么没出彩的地方，看来要好好下功夫修练一下啦！
加油加油:)

双手的温柔UID: 173110

我觉得是题目的问题。。。。按你这个理解，写起来就很痛苦，感觉要写得很长才能充分论述。
所以俺当时坚决的认为，不会是这个意思的～～
加油加油～～你其他的文章还是很精彩