超越自我小组8月17日主题帖

hermituforestUID: 2354296

组员请注意：
介于本小组最近作业完成情况及互改率下降的情况，为使大家能够更好的进行AW的复习，我们努力根据大家实际情况调整作业的量，不过请大家为了自己的成绩，不再留有遗憾，请按时完成作业！
现将作业调整如下：
1、  每天一半的同学写ISSUE，一半的同学写ARGUMENT不变
2、  互改规则不变，每人改两个人的外加一个主题贴中给出的集体修改的第三人的。
3、  取消提纲，改为每人写关于当天ISSUE的一个例子，要将该例子的背景知识介绍清楚，贴于主题帖中，这样我们每个题目大家就享有12个例子。
4、  每天一个自然段的新概念4翻译，贴于翻译贴中，翻译贴地址在主题贴中给出。要求将自己和原文对应不一致的地方用不同颜色标出
5、 为保证所有写作业的人都得到2人以上修改，第二日会让写作业但是没人改的组员互改，若是单数，剩下一人由组长改。
（3、4每天最多用半小时，而且收获会很大。）
小组成员吸收和被T原则变更如下：
1、  以上作业每天用时不到3小时，如果有不能完成者请向组长请假，如果擅自不请假且不完成者，一次警告，第二次被T。
2、  本小组将动态的保留12人名额，有退出者，再招新人。
3、  当小组成员完成AW考试后，圆满退休，不被T，位置让给新人，新人绰号继承退休者，但是要在后面加上角标，比如牛退休，新人叫牛2.
4、  组长退休后由小组成员选出新组长带领大家继续奋斗。
5、  退休者组成新的笔试小组，还是基于资源共享的原则布置作业。

今天题目：
issue48
"The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."
argument51

“Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment.”

写issue的有：牛兔蛇羊鸡猪
写argument的有：鼠虎龙马猴狗

互改顺序

鼠--狗猪
牛--狗猪
虎--猴鸡
兔--猴鸡
龙--马羊
蛇--马羊
马--龙蛇
羊--龙蛇
猴--虎兔
鸡--虎兔
狗--鼠牛
猪--鼠牛


翻译贴 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=870060&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1771972637

参考

issue48同主题写作 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=618074&highlight=

argument51同主题写作 https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=419002

[ 本帖最后由 hermituforest 于 2008-8-17 16:39 编辑 ]

hermituforestUID: 2354296

Fernando Alonso， Formula1两届世界冠军，两次打败车王Michael Shumacher，当时所有的光环都在他的头上，最多说还有他们Renault车队的经理Flavio Briatore和Executive Director of Engineering Pat Symonds。 但是当Alonso转会到Mclaren一年后又回到Renault时，Flavio Briatore和Pat Symonds还在，不过他整整一赛季连一次前三名都没有拿到过。原因就是在Alonso离开一年里，有很多车队里的identities have long been forgotten也离开了，但是没有和Alonso一起回来，再加上一年里面被其他车队逐渐拉开的距离，使得车子不再有竞争力。纵使Alonso再厉害，光凭他一个人是什么也干不了的

sccdcdUID: 2289393

issue例子 反面
认为历史是关键人物的作用。
例子一直我的弱项，不过我觉得这篇文章里面反面的例子可以这样想。
一提到历史，我首先想到的是政治人物。
但是我认为在其他领域也存在个人影响历史的情况。比如说在科学上，一群人在一起工作容易互相牵制妥协，而真正的创新和有影响力的成就是一个人的成就。
这样的例子就太多。这样可以么？

apjackUID: 2381599

Take the Beijing Olympic Game opening ceremony as an example. Many foreigners also applauded that this opening was the most fantastic ceremony ever before. Is the successful only belong to filmmaker Zhang Yimou, or choreographer Zhang Jigang, or even gymnast Li Ning? In my observation, the contribution should share by over 15,000 performers and myriad of workers.

[ 本帖最后由 apjack 于 2008-8-18 18:14 编辑 ]

apjackUID: 2381599

This is a difficult example.
Appreciation and acknowledgement!

dslovesljUID: 2451598

:)

sccdcdUID: 2289393

很赞的例子呀。谢谢

apjackUID: 2381599

I think your samples should be more specific as your direction is correct.