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发表于 2008-9-10 16:51:05 |只看该作者

COME ON 小组-------我现在能加入不?

那个更好,serious movie 还是 amusing movie?(2007.3.23 )

  In the modern society, the movies become the main important way for us to relax and inspire ourselves. Therefore there is not a simple word that could conclude whether the serious movie or amusing movie is better for the audience. In my opinion, answers to this question vary among the people.
  First of all, serious movie are more impressive and could inspire people to think of the social problems or relationship and interaction between people. For example, my favorite movie "Blood Diamond" acted by famous actor Leonardo DiCaprio tells a story about what diamonds bring the tragedy to the African people. The diamonds are exchanged for weapons and drugs to slave the poor African people. Through these scenes in the movie, we must be inspired and are not eager for that shining and beautiful stones than before. Also, we might pay more attentions to the situations in Africa and try our best to help them out of the war and disease threat.
  What's more, serious movie also could offer the audience amazing pictures on screen, for example, like art movies which get little attention from the mass. This form of movies always provides beautiful and conceptive scenes that may influence the modern movie industry a lot. You can not say this little attractive form of movies is not good enough but is just not fit to everyone's taste.
  Though serious movies are more inspirable and influential, amusing movies are more likely for audience to accept. The main purpose of the movies is to relax and entertain the people. That's why the amusing movie is so popular. In the society of fast pace, it is more important for us to relax ourselves. We can go to the theatre and see a amusing movie for fun on the weekend. That is incredible.
  From what has been discussed above, I may safely arrive at the conclusion that whether serious movie or amusing movie is better is always up to the audiences' tastes and their situations. We cannot solve this question by a simple word.

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发表于 2008-9-10 23:50:54 |只看该作者

回复 #256 mydtx 的帖子

请同志们不要直接把作文贴在这里哦,要发完帖子交上链接的。大家看看以前别的战友是怎么交的吧,欢迎你们的到来!

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发表于 2008-9-11 10:21:01 |只看该作者
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谢谢楼下的!
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-877119-1-1.html

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发表于 2008-9-11 13:35:42 |只看该作者

9.11 作业 ourtrans

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-877180-1-1.html
楼下请拍,辛苦了!

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发表于 2008-9-11 14:27:49 |只看该作者

common小组作文,layfolk,9月11日

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=877183&extra=page%3D2

里面错误很多,请批改的同学狠狠的批哦。

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发表于 2008-9-11 15:07:26 |只看该作者
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
不好意思,学校没让装宽带,好几天的作业都没交,现在网也是有一天没一天的,如果有作业没交,请多多包涵

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发表于 2008-9-11 16:49:38 |只看该作者
9.11号作业:Agree or disagree: Getting advice from the older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. (2007.8.11)

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=877198&extra=

麻烦楼下的同学了,有拍必回!

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发表于 2008-9-11 17:51:08 |只看该作者
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麻烦楼下的啦~谢谢啊,希望给出建议和意见~

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发表于 2008-9-11 18:03:54 |只看该作者
9.11啦!现在努力的目标是不要超时!
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-877212-1-1.html

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发表于 2008-9-11 20:28:56 |只看该作者
9.11作业
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文思匮乏,写的紧巴巴的,麻烦改的同学了.

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发表于 2008-9-11 22:47:40 |只看该作者

提个小建议

咱们大家是不是可以自己先初步修改再上传作业?至少把一些简单的语法、拼写错误改掉,很多Word都可以自动挑出来的。这样我想,后面修改的人既省些力,也可以改的稍微高级一点,对原作者的帮助也会更大。个人意见,仅供参考 :)

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发表于 2008-9-12 10:03:16 |只看该作者
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楼上的建议不错!支持支持!希望我们能够提高修改的效率和质量!

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