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Agree or disagree: Getting advice from the older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age.

In my mind, I don't agree with the argument at all. On the contrary, I believe that advice from our peers is more valuable than that from the old friends and the reasons are following.

First of all, older friends usually represent their advice more conservatively according to their rich experience. However, this advice may seem not as proper as the advice from my peers. Due to the rapid development of our society, the style and tendency could change a lot compared with the past, thus the old experience may out of date and no longer suitable to us now. Take myself as an example, when I graduated from the college, some of my older friends suggested me find a job instead of further the study. They thought that a good job was more important than high degree. But I insisted to continue my graduate study, which was proved optimally at last. So it is necessary to consider whether the older friends' advice is suitable to us.

What's more, the peers' advice is somewhat more precious than the older friends' one. It is more likely that we would experience the similar encounters with our peers, thus their advice is more useful and valuable. According to their suggestion, we may avoid making mistakes as they have met. For instance, when we graduate from the university, our fellows' advice about what we ought to care towards job hunting may help us a lot to avert unnecessary mistakes. Because their experience is so related to our condition that it could exert an important role in guiding us to make a rational choice. Therefore, advice from our peers could contribute a lot to our development.

In sum, due to the reasons above, advice from our peers is more useful and valuable than that from our older friends.

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In my mind, I don't agree with the argument at all. On the contrary, I believe that advice from our peers is more valuable than that from the old friends and the reasons are following.

First of all, older friends usually represent their advice more conservatively according to their rich experience. However, this advice may seem(用一个seem就可以了吧) not as proper as the advice from my peers. Due to the rapid development of our society, the style and tendency could change a lot compared with the past, thus the old experience may (be) out of date and no longer suitable to us now. Take myself as an example, when I graduated from the college, some of my older friends suggested me find a job instead of further the study. They thought that a good job was more important than high degree. But I insisted to continue my graduate study, which was proved optimally at last(为啥optimal应该有个解释). So it is necessary to consider whether the older friends' advice is suitable to us.（最后一句应该复述观点吧，别写的这么两可）|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE;XF3_x3r

What's(What is书面表达要分开来)more, the peers' advice is somewhat more precious than the older friends' one. It is more likely that we would experience the similar encounters with our peers, thus their advice is more useful and valuable. According to their suggestion, we may avoid making mistakes as they have met. For instance, when we graduate from the university, our fellows' advice about what we ought to care towards job hunting may help us a lot to avert unnecessary mistakes. Because their experience is so related to our condition that it could exert an important role in guiding us to make a rational choice. Therefore, advice from our peers could contribute a lot to our development.（感觉说理的句子总是在换句型，而意思却是一样的）

In sum, due to the reasons above, advice from our peers is more useful and valuable than that from our older friends.

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[ 本帖最后由 macross_36 于 2008-9-11 22:50 编辑 ]