写了几个口语part1.希望有好心的大虾帮我改改~

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你远在他乡时的最想念的是什么？
Well, I miss the spicy food in our hometown.
To begin with, those foods are really delicious. They never fail to fascinate me and my friends to enjoy them together. Every time when we hang out for shopping or doing sports, we would like to take some snacks as well.
Besides, some of the snacks are my hometown’s special local product. An interesting story is that after Chairman Mao tasted Chou tofu and highly praised it in front of many journalists, Chou tofu became a famous snack and that’s one of the reasons why people visit here.
Therefore, I would yearn for those food most.


说说你的人生目标
Well, becoming a CFO in a big company is my ultimate goal.
To begin with, this goal will benefit me a lot. I could get considerable salaries and bonuses to support my family, say if my kid wants to have a piano, I can buy one for him without hesitation. At the same time it’s a mark of entering in high social class.
Besides, I believe I have the ability to take this position. Because I am majoring in finance, this would be a suitable job for me to use what I have learned in my school, also, good communication and organization skills would help me a lot.
Therefore, I want to be a CFO in the future.

描述一个你曾经得到的机会
Well, in last semester I got a chance to take part in a speech training class.
To begin with, it really broadened my horizon. Due to Miss Liang’s excellent teaching methods, now I could use critical thinking in my study. Say, now before I make any decision, I will think both positive and negative sides. Also she told us a lot of pure English expressions and I can use them when I chat with foreign friends.
Besides, through this course I learned how to control my nervous feelings. With a series of practices, now I could stand on a stage with full confidence in myself.
Therefore, it’s really a precious chance I’ve got.


本人12月初就要考试了。。。口语还才开始练。
这是我想了很久才写好的，自己光说的时候结结巴巴，而且都是及其弱智的句型加上语法错误。。。
都不知道怎么练了。