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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.For someone who wants to be successful in the society, knowledge gained from study is more important than the ability of being creative2006 10 15 日)

  Its widly knowledged that at the mercy of ever-accelerated updating of culture and civilization ,the appetite from achieved success in the society caused wide public concern over the recent years.Meanwhile,
the problem  of people should pay more attation to gain knowledge from study or the ability of being creative to gain the success is soaring by the day.When facing this dilemma,peoples idea is not cut from the same cloths.
Some people argue that knowledge of studay is the base/foundation within product eminent attainment in every area.They base their arguement on the ground that all the marvelous scientinst and inventor all possess the solid knowledge in special area.Yet other react to the point other way around and hold that creativity is more important to achieve sucess in this era.After take all the respect into deliberation,personal speaking,i believe that only preserve an reasonal balance with both side could trigger an positive force in success.
  To begin with,i should firmly admit that solid knowledge play a cruical part role in every peoples' attainment.No one can deny that the ratio of people who gain excellent achievement from high-education people  is higher than illiterate and with an obvious distant in the world.A last authentic research from the top 100 celebrity in economice and science has indicated that they all have the high-education background.People who gain the plantiful knowledge prone to display their idea and value with logical and speical manner,which may help them catch suceess in the society.

  Moreover,although the creativity play a positive role when a person gain the achievement,the master of knowledge is indispensible.People who only hold creativity but not knowledge may occur setback frequently.For example,entangle and annoy appear in under-class in common,as the lack of high-knowoledge,they could only do the serving work which inferior with high-educateion people and faraway the success in the society.. Foremost,as the lack of knowledge they may forfeit the ability to cast off handicape/counquer the barricade.
  On the other hand,creativity have a hard-earned and, in my experience, a much-deserved reputation for flameboant,boambastic and much tanlent compliment in numerious case.In some industry,such as movie,cartoon and literature,people can not gain splendid/glorious fruit without creativity.If picasso forfeit the merit of creativity,"Mona lisa" would be disappear.If inventor have no creativity,Edison can not creat electric light-a magnificent significance to mankind.All the artisit and inventor who want to realize his target should maintain both prolific knowledge and excellent creativity caliber.
  After all the following we discussed,we may draw an rational conclusion that only execute a expedient attitude with both study knowledge and being creative to obtain success in society.
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Its widly knowledged/ widely known that at the mercy of ever-accelerated updating of culture and civilization ,the appetite from/for achieved success in the society caused wide public concern over the recent years.Meanwhile,留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA$Mn5t3K2i`{2i$g
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Some people argue that knowledge of studay/study is the base/foundation within/of product/achieving eminent attainment in every area.They base their arguement on the ground that all the marvelous scientinsts and inventors all possess the solid knowledge in special area.Yet other react to the point other way around and hold that creativity is more important to achieve sucess in this era.After take all the respect into deliberation,personal speaking,i believe that only preserve an reasonal balance with both side could trigger an positive force in success.前面感觉有点太长了,缩成一段比较好寄托家园s"Z-N(W        Q+UE8H/?

To begin with,i should firmly admit that solid knowledge play a cruical part role in every peoples' attainment.No one can deny that the ratio of people who gain excellent achievement from high-education people is higher than illiterate and with an obvious distant in the world.A last authentic research from the top 100 celebrity in economics and science has indicated that they all have the high-educational background.People who gain the plantiful knowledge prone to display their idea and value with logical and speical manner,which may help them catch suceess in the society.

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  Moreover,although the creativity play a positive role when a person gain the achievement,the master of knowledge is indispensible.People who only hold creativity but not knowledge may occur setback frequently.For example,entangle and annoy appear in under-class in common,as the lack of high-knowoledge,they could only do the serving work which inferior with high-educateion people and far away the success in the society.. Foremost,as the lack of knowledge they may forfeit the ability to cast off handicape/counquer the barricade.寄托家园1q*vbM:n(Z
  
On the other hand,creativity have a hard-earned and, in my experience, a much-deserved reputation for flameboant,boambastic and much tanlent compliment in numerious case.In some industry,such as movie,cartoon and literature,people can not gain/bear splendid/glorious fruit without creativity.If picasso forfeit the merit of creativity,"Mona lisa" would be disappear.If inventor have no creativity,Edison can not creat electric light-a magnificent significance to mankind.All the artisit and inventor who want to realize his target should maintain both prolific knowledge and excellent creativity caliber.

After all the following we discussed,we may draw an rational conclusion that only execute a expedient attitude with both study knowledge and being creative to obtain success in society.

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