【12月-1月IBT综合备考大帖】之【TWE作文】Chineselady12.12号作业

chineseladyUID: 2403976

12.12日作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People will spend less time in cooking or preparing food in twenty years than nowadays.
In China, there is a culture that cooking is one of arts. Therefore, learning how to cook is the same with learning an art. Even if the society will be more advanced in 20 years, I trust that people still need to spend time on cooking. This is also a basic living skill for anyone to master. And also, better cooking need more time to complete.

Presently, the world has more communication based on information and development. Everything is changing fast, arranged from living styles to environment. But cooking as one of main things people have to face every day, it will further develop and people will focus on a healthier and more convenient way to cook. This may bring a new revolution to cuisine. Many years ago, when food additive are not focused, people have never thought about it will lead to healthy problems. Industrial revolution pushed the society going on, but also develop new flavor in food. Even if there are many fast food and convenient noodle, with more consideration on health and ourselves, people trust better food will be from their kitchens. Especially when negatives happened to the food people have every day like Chinese milk with chemical additives.

Since people start being concerned themselves, cooking will be one of requirements every day face to. Better and delicious food need more time to be finished and prepared when a family member lived in hospital, he/she may prefer to eat food that his/her family cooked as it is not as rich as the ones from restaurant. More important is cooking for family is one of the ways to show care and love, which will be helpful for any patient. Before have a cuisine, people should do homework on how to prepare and cook. That will take time on consideration and shopping. It does not matter to cook for a family member who got sick or not. When anyone, husband or children could have nice meal with their families at homes, they will feel they really enjoy it.

In conclusion, although the advanced societies keep people busy and being stressful, having delicious home dinners can be a connection with families and receive consolation. And more significant is cooking for families could express people’s love in their hearts. Therefore, the view that people will spend less time on cooking cannot be proofed based on the reason above.

chineseladyUID: 2403976

偶是第一次参加 今天是交12号作业吧？没有交错吧！

amyyUID: 2332487

没错的

d596086UID: 2522476

写的很好啊！！你的观点我开始都没想到呢，喜欢

nickey0809UID: 2349468

Technology also help us save time in cooking. Several decades ago, an accidental finding in microwave leads to the great invention which offers a fast and brand new way to heat food. Nowadays, microwave oven is wildly employed by restaurants and cooks, symbolizing an efficient cooking era. Apart from the advance in heating food, other kitchen utensils also get improved more or less. Such enhancement will continue as companies rely on those new features to make profit and attract customers. There is great possibility that more advanced devices(看了难过忍不住改了) with higher efficiency will be invented in twenty years.

Therefore, I believe that people will spend less time in cooking or preparing food in twenty years.)A/d R yR-^!}

别人文章2
In China, cooking is not only a cultule but also an art. Therefore, learning how to cook equate to enjoying an art. Even if the society will be more advanced in 20 years, I would like to believe(even if 的从句啊，语法错误哦) that people still need to spend time on cooking. This is also a basic living skill for anyone to master. And also, better cooking need more time to complete.

Presently, the world has more communication based on information and development. Everything is changing fast, arranged from living styles to environment. But cooking as one of main tasks people have to face every day,  will further develop .(and 后改主语不太好)Moreover. People will focus on a healthier and more convenient way to cook. This may bring a new revolution to cuisine. Many years ago, when the problem of food additive was not focused, people had never thought about the healthy problems it may lead. Industrial revolution pushed the society going on(不地道哦), but also develop new flavor in food. Even if there are many fast food and convenient noodle, with more consideration on health and ourselves, people believe(你很喜欢用trust啊，总觉得在这些地方用重 了) better food will be from their kitchens. Especially when negatives happened to the food people have every day like Chinese milk with chemical additives.（这句换句表达或是具体写更好，不要用negatives happened to the food外国人可能不理解）bbs.gter.net };u2a;m j5p `

Since people start being concerned themselves, cooking becomes an integral part of people’s life . Healthier and delicious food need more time to be finished and prepared when a family member lived in hospital, he/she may prefer to eat food that his/her family cooked as it is not as rich as the ones from restaurant. More important!!!语病不少哦 is （Moreover，）cooking for family is one of the ways to show care and love, which will be helpful for any patient. Before have a cuisine, people should do homework？？？ on how to prepare and cook. That will take time on considering and shopping. It does not matter to cook for a family member who got sick or not. When anyone, husband or children could have nice meal with their families at homes, they will feel they really enjoy it.这段思路好乱啊
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In conclusion, although the advanced societies keep people busy and being stressful, having delicious home dinners can deeper connection with families and receive consolation. And more significant 不能这么表达啊is cooking for families could express people’s love in their hearts. Therefore, the view that people will spend less time on cooking cannot be proofed based on the reason above.

[ 本帖最后由 nickey0809 于 2008-12-12 22:39 编辑 ]

nickey0809UID: 2349468

你看food 借鉴吧，靠上去的乱其八糟的
继续努力哦

xiaojing1115UID: 2578357

观点很好，就是有些语法错误楼上的已经改了，继续努力，思路很重要的

chineseladyUID: 2403976

谢谢大家 一定努力奋斗！咱明年美国见！血拼了:handshake

走聪明UID: 2466192

观点 真的不错  我吸收了