【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】12月16日作文 by 小网VS香蕉

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12.16日作业：电视应该是 educate还是entertain

新人额 第一次交作业 多多指教 （感觉分段 和 例子 都有问题）
语言上的问题貌似也很多 额

Nowadays television is becoming more and more important in every day life. Some people belive that television is educating.
Other people take the view that television is entertaining.

Of course, we can see many entertainments in the television. For example, soap operas, musical shows, amusements ,even shoppings.

However,in my personal view, television is educating. A particular example for this is a lot of television programs
intrduce people to things they have never thought or heard of before.

Moreover, television provides special broadcasts for those in TV university or open university. It also offers specialized
subjects like language teaching,sewing,cooking, painting, consmetology,etc.

To take the example above to an extreme, school programs via closed-circuit television.

Taking into account of all these factors,we may reach the conclusion that television is not only a convenient source of entertainment, but also an invaluable tool for educating.


every day life 我是想表达日常生活
还有最后一个例子是不是过分极端啊？
字数貌似也不够 因为实在写不出来了~

鞠躬致谢

[ 本帖最后由 小网VS香蕉 于 2008-12-16 02:12 编辑 ]

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多练练吧，可不能拿这个文章去考试哦

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日常生活可以用daily life

字数不够啊，托应该300+，LZ加油，多背多练吧