【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】 1月5日作业

45678amUID: 2530095

As the colleges and universities are developing at a high speed nowadays,more and more students are entering them to acquire higher education,which also increases the expectation of a college.In my opinion,I definitely support the point that it's quite reasonable to open more difficult and challenging courses in our college and university.

        Firstly,in our modern society,the demand for the graduate students becomes much higher than before.A student has to have a deep understanding of his own major and grasp much useful skills to find a job and start his career life.While the main responsibility of colleges and universities is to enhancee the students' capacity,they should think out method to cultivate their students in a much efficient way.It's quite useful to open harder and chellenging courses in the universities because to pass all these courses,our students have to pay even more time on researching which can help us to have a deep understanding of our own major.During the process of overcoming all the difficulties in the courses,our ability will be uplifted and we become much more competitive.

          Moreover,students could be stimulated by studying much more harder courses.There are plenty of students in the colleges who thought the coures are so easy that they don't have to work hard,and just spend a small part of their time on study.Even though some of them are really smart,this action is too time-cosuming.But if we increase the difficulties of our courses,then these students could easily be motivated to work hard,and pay more attention on the courses that they used to think were so boring.They can also feel proud when they pass these courses by doing well on their assignments.

         Finally,not surpriseing,it can encourage the teachers as well.Because of the easy courses in our universities,some of our teachers don't need to make effort to learn new knowledge in their major,since they can easily deal with all the questions raised by their students.On the contrary,if the difficult courses are enact,teacher may feel pressure to enhance their own capacity of teaching,because before their students can understand these difficult courses,they must first handle all the problems of these courses so that they could perform well in the class.

xlwxxyUID: 2568970

As the colleges and universities are developing at a high speed nowadays,more and more students are entering them to acquire higher education,which also increases the expectation of a college.In my opinion,I definitely support the point that it's quite reasonable to open more difficult and challenging courses in our college and university.  (好像前因太泛,不能得出后面的结论.)

        Firstly,in our modern society,the demand for the graduate students becomes much higher than before.A student has to have a deep understanding of his own major and grasp much useful skills to find a job and start his career life.While the main responsibility of colleges and universities is to enhancee the students' capacity,they should think out method to cultivate their students in a much efficient way.It's quite useful to open harder and chellenging courses in the universities because to pass all these courses,our students have to pay even more time on researching which can help us to have a deep understanding of our own major.During the process of overcoming all the difficulties in the courses,our ability will be uplifted and we become much more competitive.(理由不错)

          Moreover,students could be stimulated by studying much more harder courses.There are plenty of students in the colleges who thought the coures are so easy that they don't have to work hard,and just spend a small part of their time on study.Even though some of them are really smart,this action is too time-cosuming.But if we increase the difficulties of our courses,then these students could easily be motivated to work hard,and pay more attention on the courses that they used to think were so boring.They can also feel proud when they pass these courses by doing well on their assignments.

         Finally,not surpriseing,it can encourage the teachers as well.Because of the easy courses in our universities,some of our teachers don't need to make effort to learn new knowledge in their major,since they can easily deal with all the questions raised by their students.On the contrary,if the difficult courses are enact,teacher may feel pressure to enhance their own capacity of teaching,because before their students can understand these difficult courses,they must first handle all the problems of these courses so that they could perform well in the class.
理由挺好的.
加强措辞.
总结段到哪去了?

james011137UID: 2280989

As the colleges and universities are developing at a high speed nowadays,more and more students are entering them to acquire higher education,which also increases the expectation of a college.increase expectation搭配不太对吧In my opinion,I definitely support the point that it's quite reasonable to open more difficult and challenging courses in our college and university.

Firstly,in our modern society,the demand for the graduate students一般指研究生 becomes much higher than before.A student has to have a deep understanding of his own major and grasp much useful skills to find a job and start his career life.While the main responsibility of colleges and universities is to enhancee the students' capacity,they should think out method to cultivate their students in a much efficient way.It's quite useful to open harder and chellenging courses in the universities because to pass all these courses,our students have to pay even more time on researching which can help us to have a deep understanding of our own major.During the process of overcoming all the difficulties in the courses,our ability will be uplifted and we become much more competitive.A&r!d^F}
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Moreover,students could be stimulated by studying much more harder courses.There are plenty of students in the colleges who thought the coures are so easy that they don't have to work hard,and just spend a small part of their time on study.Even though some of them are really smart,this action is too time-cosuming.But if we increase the difficulties of our courses,then these students could easily be motivated to work hard,and pay more attention on the courses that they used to think were so boring.They can also feel proud when they pass these courses by doing well on their assignments.

Finally,not surpriseing,it can encourage the teachers as well.Because of the easy courses in our universities,some of our teachers don't need to make effort to learn new knowledge in their major,since they can easily deal with all the questions raised by their students.On the contrary,if the difficult courses are enact,teacher may feel pressure to enhance their own capacity of teaching,because before their students can understand these difficult courses,they must first handle all the problems of these courses so that they could perform well in the class。

最后2个理由似乎有些牵强，不过也算自圆其说了，但是怎么没有最后的总结呢？
另外 标点符号后面要空格，每段之后最好也要空行。注意词汇的积累！:)