【09年1月-4月】TOEFL作文互改小组-之【TWE作文】1月20号作业 by xlwxxy

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays eating meals with families regularly is not important any more. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As the rapid speech of economic, people’s devote towards jobs is increasing as well, but I do not  hold the assertion that people should put the communication with families, like eating meals regularly for example, at the subordinate position.

As I see, there is three fundamental arguments for keeping the habit of eating meals with families regularly. The first has to do with base satisfaction. According to the value of human being is well-being, families which is one of the most significant refuge for one to obtain understanding and affections, it definitely need to spend time on. Imagine one will say cut eating time with families regularly is mostly because of the stress of job. Nevertheless, doing job is making one to earn his/her livings, which make one feel fulfilled of life. After all, the world has numeral other things like spending time with family members that also make one fell happy. One living in the world the value is feel felicity, if one has a billion dollar but he/she do not feel blissful, that dollar will lose its value. One can engage in huge amount of pleasing activities like playing with kids, sharing pleasure time with families for example, without mass money.

The second argument has to do with capability. After all, the time with families is limited as the qualities of work for modern human being is witnessed a speedy increase, and as a mingled of international diversity and mix of different cultures. The fact is, instead of tremendous of work, is the stress cause one to reflect that slack the time with families for meal will increase the ability to focus on other major things like job. However, tempting as this claim might be, but it is not true. The fact is, whether or not one engross and engulf in work can let job to be effective and efficient, the answer is definitely no. Imagin that if one exceeds his/her limit of engergy, little effective of work he/she will get. Does work is the cause of necessary for one to reduce their time with families, Answer is also negative. Consequently, if one has capacity to deal with work, it is unnecessary to subtract the meal times with families, if one does not have that capacity, whatever he/she reduce the meal times with family will not work for anything. Having meals with families is just one of the bases activities with families, because one needs to have meal to keep working which is fundamental satisfy for human, if one has no time for eating meal with families, I cannot imaging one can have time with families to do what.

On the other hand are two compelling arguments against placing a duty on having regular meal with families is that it is the one of most significant way to communicate with each other and exchange emotions. One should ponder the opinions and feelings of the people who will be impacted by his/her work. For example, husbands and wife should support each other before making up their mind to pursue another achievement of work. Communicate with boss or other friends have dinner should be the best way, why not with families? As a result, one is able to obtain more caring and motivation towards work. Therefore, I can hardly agree that eating meals with families regularly is not important any more.

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由于同学晚交了很久。。所以只能大概帮看一下了。。
第一句的speed 和devoting。等等语言错误。。可以拉去word 检查下先

总的文章结构很好~很辨证~很有G作文的影子。。

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谢谢，就是语法问题。哎！ 2# ddcmj519