【Dark_Tournament 小组第二次作业】---beyondarchi.

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Do you agree or disagree,一个聪明的朋友比一个幽默的朋友重要



In my opinion, various aspects could determine a friend's importance in a friendship: his/her honesty, loyalty to this friendship, openess and willingness to offer help, so on and so forth. However when it comes to comparing the importance of brilliance and sense of humor, I do think the former is a more important fact that I will take into consideration in choosing a friend.

I concede that a friend with a strong sense of humor could bring great joys to our lives: their subtle jokes add a lot of sweet and happy experience in our everyday life. However, I think the reason why we all need friends goes far beyond our desires of laughs in life. Maybe just as the old saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. We need friend not only because we want to share our happiness, we need them also in times of bitterness, in our every struggle to overcome obstacles. Knowing this, it will be obvious why a more brilliant friend could be more important than a friend only with sense of humor.

First of all, a more brilliant friend could use their wisdom to teach us important lessons in our study, work, relationship, etc. In fact, the lessons that our brilliant friend teaches us are so important that the way we perceive and understand the world is in some way determined by these lessons. So it will not come as a surprise that we need friend brilliant enough to offer us the right instructions. Actually, brilliant friend do much more than just offering us good suggestions, they also make use of their rich life experience to prevent us from making the same mistakes that they made before. In this way, we could more easily walk in the right direction in our life endeavors.

Besides, brilliant friends are more likely to become our partner in work if we happen to be sharing the same interest. There are many such examples in history: if we look at the success of the great companys like Microsoft and Apple, we will find that their successes do not lie in the genius of an individual, but in the cooperation and team work of a group of talents .All these examples indicate that a bound a brilliant friends are a good embryo of success, thus the importance of a brilliant friend would be obvious in our choice of friend.

Moreover, a more brilliant friend could more easily to notice our shift of mood.They are more likely to notice if we are happy or sad even if we do not show our internal feelings. More than this, they are more likely to make proper feedback to our different moods. I think this is quite important in a friendship because it indicates great understanding of two people in a friendship.

To conclude, i believe a more brilliant friend is more important than a friend only with sense of humor because the former, the more brilliant friend, is more capable of guiding us in our life endeavor under different circumstances ,and is more likely to offer understanding in the friendship. Still I want to point out that, a brilliant friend and a humorous friend do not exclude each other, they could sometimes be the same person! If this happens, cherish him/her because he/she is a great life treasure we have.

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In my opinion, various aspects could determine a friend's importance in a friendship: his/her honesty, loyalty to this friendship, openness(openness) and willingness to offer help, so on and so forth. However when it comes to comparing the importance of brilliance and sense of humor, I do think the former is a more important fact that I will take into consideration in choosing a friend
I concede that a friend with a strong sense of humor could bring great joys to our lives: their subtle jokes add a lot of sweet and happy experience in our everyday life. However, I think the reason why we all need friends goes far beyond our desires of  (for)laughs in life. Maybe just as the old saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. We need friend not only because we want to share our happiness, we need them also in times of bitterness, in our every struggle to overcome obstacles. Knowing this, it will be obvious why (that )a more brilliant friend could be more important than a friend only with sense of humor.
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First of all, a more brilliant friend could use their wisdom to teach us important lessons in our study, work, relationship, etc. In fact, the lessons that our brilliant friend teaches us are so important that the way we perceive and understand the world is in some way determined by these lessons. (teach lessons是否太过严肃，我更倾向于give advice)So it will not come as a surprise that we need friend（s） brilliant enough to offer us（ the去掉） right instructions. Actually, brilliant friend（s） do much more than just offering us good suggestions, they also make use of their rich life experience to prevent us from making the same mistakes that they made before. In this way, we could more easily walk in the right direction in our life endeavors.

Besides, brilliant friends are more likely to become our partner(s) in work if we happen to be sharing the same interest. There are many such examples in history: if we look at the success of the great companys (companies) like Microsoft and Apple, we will find that their successes do not lie in the genius of an individual, but in the cooperation and team work of a group of talents .All these examples indicate that a bound a (of )brilliant friends are(is) a good embryo of success, thus the importance of a brilliant friend would be obvious in our choice of friend(to friends).
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Moreover, a more brilliant friend could more easily to notice our shift of mood.(mood changes)They are more likely to notice if (whether)we are happy or sad even if we do not show our internal feelings. More than this, they are more likely to make proper feedback to our different moods. I think this is quite important in a friendship because it indicates great understanding of two people in a friendship.3 y0 [: u( k/ o# H- z

To conclude, i believe a more(可去掉) brilliant friend is more important than a friend only with sense of humor because the former, the more brilliant friend,（可删） is more capable of guiding us in our life endeavor under different circumstances ,and is more likely to offer understanding in the friendship. Still I want to point out that, a brilliant friend and a humorous friend do not exclude each other, they could sometimes be the same person! If this happens, cherish him/her because he/she is a great life treasure we have.3