dark-tournament 第二次作业 liurui8802

liurui8802UID: 2595045

A friend of humour or the friend smart


We all like to make friends with two kinds of people: a humourous guy with lots of jokes to tell; an intelligent one with insights.I myself would like to choose the guy with homour if we can only choose one between them.They are my guides through darkness as well as a source of joy.

Life would be less colorful without those friends who can take an insightful and interesting view of distress,and hail about happiness.It is through them that we see those failure, distress, sorrow differently,thus we wear a pair of optimistic glasses which leads us out of darkness of disappointment and clouds of sadness.My break up with my ex-boyfriend shadowed me for 3 months until one day my friend Lily, said that there would not be any withered flower in the world that is worth a tear, since tomorrow sprout hundreds of new ones."No need to cry over split milk". She gazed into my eyes and smiled at me.Finally I walked out of my sorrow and begin my whole new life .Alone,but with confidence and optimism.

Further more, humourous friends can never bored you, there lies in their heart an unfailing appetite for new things:the most enjoyable cartoons, the newest films hit with laughters,the funny cute guy on campus.You feel the world with their eyes, drawing in the most interesting scenes.You hear the world with their ears, taking in the most astonishing jokes.You live in them, and they in you, as one great individual,experience the joyful adventure together.（这句是"companion of books"散文中的原文)Unconsciously, you yourself become the one who is never out of humour,and you find yourself adored by people, young and old, male and female.Because you are the one, as your friend, brings happiness and ease to them.

I am grateful to my friends, those friends who care for me with their jokes of intelligence , and stand with me through  the trip of life.We will never apart, because we are a family never short of laughter!
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格式从word贴过来就成这样了 见谅

rockzongliUID: 2597666

We all like to make friends with two kinds of people: a humours（humorous） guy with lots of jokes to tell; anintelligent one with insights. I myself would like tochoose the guy with jokes if we can only choose one between them. They are myguides through darkness as well as a sourse(source)of joy

Life would be lesscolorful without those friends who can joke about distress, and heil（？） about happiness. It is through them that we see those failure,distress, sorrow differently, thus we wear a pair of optimistic glasses which lead（leads） us out of darkness of disappointment and clouds of sadness. My breakup with my ex-boyfriend shadowed me for 3 monthes(months)until one day my friend Lily, joked that there would not be any witherd（withered） flower in the world that is worth a tear, since tomorrow sprouthundreds of new ones. "No need to cry over spoilt milk（cry over spilt milk，洒翻的牛奶，不是嗖掉的牛奶）". She gazed into my eyes and smiled at me. Finally I walked outof my sorrow and begin my whole new life. Alone, but with confidence andoptimism（这句并到前面，表示自己的状态）.

Furthermore, humourous friends can never bored you, there lies in their heart anunfailing appetite for new things: the funest（“凶恶的，致命的”）
cartoons, the newest films hitwith laughters, the funny cute guy on campus. You feel the world with theireyes, drawing in the most interesting scenes. You hear the world with theirears, taking in the most astonishing jokes. You live in them, and they inyou, as one great individual, experience the joyful advanture(adventure) together（这句话翻成中文是个很漂亮的抒情句，可是英语的话这样表达显得句子太散了）. Unconciously（Unconsciously）, you yourself become the one who is neverout of jokes, and you find yourself adored by people, young and old, male andfemale. Because you are the one, as your friend, brings happiness and ease tothem.

I am grateful to my friends, thosefriends who care for me with jokes（好奇怪）, and stand with me through  the trip of life. We will neverapart, because we are a family of humour(这句作为结尾虽然气势磅礴，但是family of humour这个表达也太奇怪了点)!


拼写错误较多，建议写完word检查一遍
在表达humourous方面，joke这个词出现的太频繁了点，这个词意思局限，也不能表示调侃之类的意思，会给人一种误解：幽默=开玩笑+说笑话。
另外，原题是“你同意不同意，聪明的朋友比幽默的朋友更重要”，所以就有必要稍微提一下聪明的朋友，并且作一个比较说明幽默的朋友更重要的原因

liurui8802UID: 2595045

谢谢你这次精心的修改，下次注意拼错的单词检查。你的建议也很好，我对一些句子和用词已做修改。谢谢支持！ 2# rockzongli

mimicaUID: 2457275

We all like to make friends with two kinds of people: a humourous(humorous) guy with lots of jokes to tell; an intelligent one with insights. I myself would like to choose the guy with homour if we can only choose one between them. They are my guides through darkness as well as a source of joy.

Life would be less colorful without those friends who can take an insightful and interesting view of distress,and hail(heal) about happiness.It is through them that we see those failure, distress, sorrow differently, thus we wear a pair of optimistic glasses which leads us out of darkness of disappointment and clouds of sadness. My break up with my ex-boyfriend shadowed me for 3 months until one day my friend Lily, said that there would not be any withered flower in the world that is worth a tear, since tomorrow sprout hundreds of new ones. "No need to cry over split milk". She gazed into my eyes and smiled at me. Finally I walked out of my sorrow and begin my whole new life . Alone, but with confidence and optimism.

Further more, humourous friends can never bored(bore) you, there lies in their heart an unfailing appetite for new things:the most enjoyable cartoons, the newest films hit with laughters,the funny cute guy on campus.You feel the world with their eyes, drawing in the most interesting scenes.You hear the world with their ears, taking in the most astonishing jokes.You live in them, and they in you, as one great individual,experience the joyful adventure together.（这句是"companion of books"散文中的原文)Unconsciously, you yourself become the one who is never out of humour,and you find yourself adored by people, young and old, male and female.Because you are the one, as your friend, brings happiness and ease to them.

I am grateful to my friends, those friends who care for me with their jokes of intelligence , (who care for me in their special ways—talking jokes which contains philosophic theory)and stand with me through  the trip of life.We will never (be)apart, because we are a family never short of laughter!
(注意人称变化，第二段是we，第三段成了you)

mimicaUID: 2457275

红字都变了