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Do you  agree or disagree , technology makes people's lives simpler in turn to make people's lives more complicated


Nowdays , there is a phenomeano has caused wide public concern in many places of the world that weather technology make people's lives simpler in turn to make people's lives more compicated or not . When it comes to this issue , some people believe that technology complicate our lives , others , however disagree with it . As for me , i am in favor of the opinion that technology makes our lives  more  easier.I believe that the most making our lives simper 's development is the Internet.
  
Internet allows us to  access  any information our hearts direct. With the power of the World Wide Web ,one can receive information from any country in  the world allowing individuals the ability to locate and acquisite any imagible. Locally , computers via the internet allow us to search out a variety of  services that are necessary for day to day living in one of China's many big cities a much more comfortable experience .

From net games to online chating to viewing movies or websites , Internet has the ability to entertain us in a variety of ways . For example , many people join in forum where they can chat with their peers about any variety of topics .Many film tralers are first released on the Internet where enthusiastic fans can be the first catch a glimpse of the latest and greatest blockbusters. Computer  bring us the world of instant information , allowing us with a computer and an Internet connection to chat for free with their friends and colleagues anywhere in the world .

Internet has changed the very way business operate , bringing  efficience and convience to the worlk  place .The most development is the use of emails instead of surface mail . Email allows business to communicate large amounts  of information almost instant  , saving time , paper and patage fees . In instead of making long distance telephone calls ,some businesses have started using Web Conferencing . Web Conferencing not ongly eliminates long distance fees but also allows two parties to see each other in a real time and simultaneously work on projects through program sharing.

New products are being  consereved every minute of every day  , all of which impact our lives in some respect .Considerable though the disadvantages that the development of techology leads to  are , they can not compare with the benefits that the development of techology brings about .

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Nowdays(Nowadays) , there is a phenomeano(phenomenon) has caused wide public concern in many places of the world that weather technology make people's lives simpler in turn to make people's lives more compicated(complicated) or not . When it comes to this issue, some people believe that technology complicate our lives, others, however disagree with it . As for me, i(I) am in favor of the opinion that technology makes our lives
more
easier. I believe that the most making our lives simper 's development(这表达好象有问题，太中国化了) is the Internet.

Internet allows us to access any information our hearts direct. With the power of the World Wide Web, one can receive information from any country in the world allowing individuals the ability to locate and acquisite any imagible.(不明白，因为实在不知道你想说是什么意思，你再改改) Locally, computers via the internet allow us to search out a variety of services that are necessary for day to day(删) living in one of China's many big cities(a big city of china) a much more comfortable experience(are necessary for a much more comfortable experience in a big city of china 这样好象顺一点) .

From net games to online chating(chatting)(加), to viewing movies or websites , Internet has the ability to entertain us in a variety of ways . For example, many people join in forum where they can chat with their peers about any variety of topics. Many film tralers(trailers) are first released on the Internet where enthusiastic fans can be the first catch a glimpse of the latest and greatest blockbusters. Computer bring us the world of instant information, allowing us with a computer and an Internet connection to chat for free with their friends and colleagues anywhere in the world.

Internet has changed the very(various/every?) way (加)of business operate(operation/activity), bringing efficience(efficiency) and convience(convenience) to the worlk(world) place .The most development is the use of emails instead of surface mail(?) . Email allows business to communicate the large amounts of information almost instant, saving time, paper and patage fees(postage). In instead of making long distance telephone calls, some businesses have started using Web Conferencing. Web Conferencing not ongly(only) eliminates long distance fees but also allows two parties to see each other in a real time and simultaneously work on projects through program sharing.

New products are being consereved(?conserved) every minute of every day(删), all of which impact our lives in some respect .Considerable though the disadvantages that the development of technology leads to
are , they can not compare with the benefits that the development of technology(technology) brings about(删) .
建议：
１、     1、中国式的语句太多，很难看懂，多看看，多模仿
２、     2、主题句不太明显
３、     3、建议使用word文档来写，这样普通的拼写错误自己就可以发现
（PS. 以上纯熟个人意见，如有雷同纯属巧合，如有争议请私下沟通。）