Issue131[gter三月机考小组第6次作业]

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题目：ISSUE131 - "The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
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In this statement, the speaker asserts that arts can reveal otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society. I agree with the board assertion that some elements of a society could be mix together with the works by artists. However, in my opinion, not all ideas of society could be delivered by art works and not all arts could reveal a society accurately.
Arts such as painting, music and literature, reflect ideas and impulses of a society as well as the personal feelings of artists. For artists are affected by the society, they will bring their feelings and experiences into their works. Society is the 去掉吧 normal but the most important resource to their ideas. For example, the kite runner, one of the best sellers, revealed the life and history of Afghans, from the invasion of Soviet Union to the savage domination by Taliban. The author Khaled Hosseini took his own experience as a 建议你用the background to reveal the misery of Afghans to the people all over world. Another example is the symphony of hero, Beethoven composed that symphony as a gift to napoleon, and this piece reveals the powerful of French empire as well as his appreciate to napoleon, in sprite of napoleon invaded to Germany. The Fu Er add the boat tracker of river revealed the tough condition and difficulties of people in that time of Russia. Therefore, arts could reveal many aspects of our society 这一段的例子很好 充分证明了论点
More importantly, arts also reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society. Sometimes, we must hide our thoughts in the society. There are two reasons, one is that a society may lack of democracy or have other flaws, the other is some ideas are so abstract and delicate express. Artists could use some special skills make their feelings or experience together with their works. For instance, Gao Xingjian, the winner of the Nobel Prize of literature 2000, revealed the misery which the Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution imposed on people in 1970s by his master pieces Soul Mountain and One man's Bible. The prize was for an oeuvre of universal validity, bitter insights and linguistic ingenuity, which has opened new paths for the Chinese novel and drama. Although the general position by the Chinese media and government towards Gao is science, the Chinese government officially regards Gao was an exiled dissident and all of his works are banned. There are too many works which reveals a society's flaws such as the Les Miserables by Hugo, the Uncle Tom' cabin by Harriet Beecher Stowe.可能我的看法有点偏激了 我觉得这一段可以不要 和上一段的论点就有一点相似 而且这个例子可以用到下一段中啊
However, we must realize that not every work of art could reveal the real feelings of artists, or the real aspect of a society. As the example of Gao mentioned above, under the such condition without freedom, he chose to express himself other than to meet the government's needs. But people like him are miner;. There are still have重复了啊 There be 后面不要have 了 some artists working for the government, in another word, some artists choose to be the governmental hack which speak highly of the autocracy, even if they do not think so. Therefore, sometimes the arts may be imposed on some politics or other elements, not all arts could reveal a society accurately, even if they could, the truths must have been twisted.
In addition, arts are just like one kind of languages which cloud deliver whatever这个太绝对了吧 artists want to present. May be maybe it could reveal the phenomenon of a society accurately or inaccurately. But it is entirely possible that it could not. Consider, how could a panting work concerning with an object or beautiful scenery reveal a society. I think those works reveal the definition of future or the pursuit of accurate or reality. That is to say, since the function of arts is not reveal a society, not all works could mix the elements of a society.
To sum up, since artists are one of the products of society, their works could reveal otherwise hidden ideas and impulse of a society. Yet, we must recognize, not all works could reveal a society or reveal a society accurately or objectively.
你的语言也还可以再好一点的 逻辑都比较好了

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