issue48【0906G背水一战三月小组】第三次作业 by kl1130

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ISSUE48 - "The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."


第一，历史学家关注那些个人，是因为他们有非常有趣和吸引人的经历
第二，历史事件和趋势，大部分被遗忘的群体引起的,历史上的出名的个人，只是在历史事件的领导者而已


History researchers universally pay much attention on the famous individuals in the history, because the majority like their unusual experiences, so as to enjoy the story and learn a lot from them. Though, I think, the most significant events and trends in history are originally created by groups of people, who is the true creator of history. The famous individuals are just the the typical ones in the groups.

The study of specific history people is usually an alternative phrase for the study of history, as history people is more attractive for their unusual experiences. For example, a very interesting and famous history people in China, Bang Liu, the originator of four hundred Han dynasty, draw many historians' attention in modern times. For his interesting, he can not read book, even do not know how to write down his name, and he could not fight and will run away if he is fail in the war, which is the most shameless thing in chinese history. But he know how to use people who can read and fight to win the final war just because he know he can do nothing. For his famous, every younger generations will appreciate his creation work, the foundation of one of the most great dynasty in chinese history. And Bang Liu is not a exception, such as Bei Liu, Yuanzhang Zhu, etc, who are both interesting and famous for their unusual experience. It is the special attraction that make historian pay much attention on history people.

The real creator of history, groups of people, is ordinarily forgotten by historians. The creation of Han dynasty is not the personal achievement of Bang Liu, but the suffering people under the oppression of Qin dynasty. It is the aspiration of freedom from the suffering people that motivate people to fight with the Qin dynasty. And then the defiance groups appear and grow dramatically, they fight with Qin for freedom and fight with each other for the final authority, until they overthow the Qin dynasty and only one group be left. There are many failed revolutionary movements during the Bang Liu's working for Qin dynasty period, and Bang Liu is just the fortuitous leader of the final group. If we invite Bang Liu come to our time, he can do nothing, so he is just a lucky dog of the specific history time. The process of majority dynasty recreations in chinese history is quite similar to this one. Therefore, the originate is the suffering people, and that is the group who made the history events and trends.

For closing,the true creator of history is the groups of people, who it is made the significant events and trends. That do not influence our appreciation and approval for a specific person, the point is what we can learn from the typical individuals and groups to guide our people and society.

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History researchers universally pay much attention on the famous individuals in the history, because the majority likes their unusual experiences, so as to enjoy the story and learn a lot from them. Though, I think, the most significant events and trends in history are originally created by groups of people, who is（are） the true creator of history. The famous individuals are just the typical ones in the groups.

The study of specific history people is usually an alternative phrase for the study of history, as history people is more attractive for their unusual experiences. For example, a very interesting and famous history people in China, Bang Liu, the originator of four hundred Han dynasty, draw many historians' attention in modern times. For his interesting（interests）, he can not read book, even do not know how to write down his name, and he could not fight and will run away if he is fail in the war, which is the most shameless thing in Chinese history.（这句话写的不好  可以说due to his own interests..,..） But he know(knew) how to use people who can read and fight to win the final war just because he know he can do nothing.(因为自己什么都不会就能指挥别人吗？ 逻辑上说不过去) For his famous, every younger generations will appreciate his creation work, the foundation of one of the most great dynasty in Chinese history. And Bang Liu is not a(an) exception, such as Bei Liu, Yuanzhang Zhu, etc, who are both interesting and famous for their unusual experience(这里是不是该加s ？ 我们可以聊下). It is the special attraction that make historian pay much attention on history people.

The real creator of history, groups of people, is ordinarily forgotten by historians. The creation of Han dynasty is not the personal achievement of Bang Liu, but the suffering people under the oppression of Qin dynasty. It is the aspiration of freedom from the suffering people that motivate people to fight with the Qin dynasty. And then the defiance groups appear and grow dramatically, they fight with Qin for freedom and fight with each other for the final authority, until they overthrow the Qin dynasty and only one group be（were） left. There are many failed revolutionary movements during the Bang Liu's working for Qin dynasty period, and Bang Liu is just the fortuitous leader of the final group. If we invite Bang Liu come to our time, he can do nothing, so he is just a lucky dog of the specific history time. （这个 说得有点过了吧）The process of majority dynasty recreations in Chinese history is quite similar to this one. Therefore, the originate is the suffering people, and that is the group who made the history events and trends.

For closing, the true creator of history is the groups of people（the direct creators of history are the groups of people）, who it is(可以去掉) made the significant events and trends. That do not influence our appreciation and approval for a specific person, the point is what we can learn from the typical individuals and groups to guide our people and society.

感觉作者有些语言表达的不是很好  逻辑上有时说得太过了