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It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?

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With the rapid development of the society, to be success, the competition among people is more drastic than ever before. Additionally, new technology is developed every minute to make our life more convenient. All these are leading our life to a dilemma with much more questions. We are facing different kinds of questions all day. There are two common ways to solve problems: one is to use our own knowledge and experience, the other is to ask other people for advice. In my opinion, they both have advantage which could not be replaced by each other, so we should use these two ways depending on various situations.

To begin with, to solve questions using our own knowledge and experience is the most natural way when we are questioned. We spend a large amount of money and time in learning knowledge in order to solve living problems independently. Everyday's life could also help us to collect experience. After achieving rich experience of life, we can naturally solve problems all by ourselves.

In addition, to ask for advice may be the first way we come to when facing difficulties. On one hand, according to different experiences of life, the knowledge structures of people are different. Some people will be good at history questions, while others could be excellent with geography problems. The questions we have could be common sense to others, so asking advices could save our lots of time to search answers. On the other hand, some old people who have a lot experience in both life and science could give us vital suggestions which could greatly help us to be away from mistakes. Their own life experience for years can give us good lesson to avoid missing direction in life.

What is more, to solve question by other's advice is not the final aim of life. We should learn others' particular method in the process of conquer problems. Only in this way could we gain more experience and knowledge which is significant for our future. After asking advices once and again, we could eventually overcome jam all by ourselves.

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It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice? d1 d6 r, m" r( Z' N( M 限时成功, 371 word& d! e5 n; t. G; L5 F. j# c% \9 ? With the rapid development of the society, to be success, the competition among people is more drastic than ever before. Additionally, new technology is developed every minute to make our life more convenient. All these are leading our life to a dilemma with much more questions. We are facing different kinds of questions all day.（这个背景真的很大，后面突然过渡到个人 觉得有点唐突）There are two common ways to solve problems: one is to use our own knowledge and experience, the other is to ask other people for advice. In my opinion, they both have advantage which could not be replaced by each other, so we should use these two ways depending on various situations.# ?: y0 {  K' k* G1 G To begin with, to solve questions using our own knowledge and experience is the most natural way when we are questioned. We spend a large amount of money and time in learning knowledge in order to solve living problems independently. Everyday's life could also help us to collect experience. After achieving rich experience of life, we can naturally solve problems all by ourselves。（如果有具体例子就好了） .6 s& l" I# r. B) s& C 2 X* v3 E1 Z, t8 {$ K7 z In addition, to ask for advice may be the first way we come to when facing difficulties. On one hand, according to different experiences of life, the knowledge structures of people are different. Some people will be good at history questions, while others could be excellent with geography problems. The questions we have could be common sense to others, so asking advices could save our lots of time to search answers. On the other hand, some old people who have a lot experience in both life and science could give us vital suggestions which could greatly help us to be away from mistakes. Their own life experience for years can give us good lesson to avoid missing direction in life. 5 o! @/ n& u: xWhat is more, to solve question by other's advice is not the final aim of life. We should learn others' particular method in the process of conquer problems. Only in this way could we gain more experience and knowledge which is significant for our future. After asking advices once and again, we could eventually overcome jam all by ourselves. 文章还不错，就是缺少具体例子，说理的很多

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With the rapid development of the society, to be success, the competition among people is more drastic than ever before. Additionally, new technology is developed every minute to make our life more convenient. All these are leading our life to a dilemma with much more questions. We are facing different kinds of questions all day. There are two common ways to solve problems: one is to use our own knowledge and experience, the other is to ask other people for advice. In my opinion, they both have advantage which could not be replaced by each other, so we should use these two ways depending on various situations.(似乎过长了,个人觉得第一段简单明了说明观点就好)

To begin with, to solve questions using our own knowledge and experience is the most natural way when we are questioned. We spend a large amount of money and time in learning knowledge in order to solve living problems independently. Everyday's life could also help us to collect experience. After achieving rich experience of life, we can naturally solve problems all by ourselves.

In addition, to ask for advice may be the first way we come to when facing difficulties. On one hand, according to different experiences of life, the knowledge structures of people are different. Some people will be good at history questions, while others could be excellent with geography problems. The questions we have could be common sense to others, so asking advices could save our lots of time to search answers. On the other hand, some old people who have a lot experience in both life and science could give us vital suggestions which could greatly help us to be away from mistakes. Their own life experience for years can give us good lesson to avoid missing direction in life.(最自然的和第一个的差别在哪儿?结构有点不明确哦)

What is more, to solve question by other's advice is not the final aim of life. We should learn others' particular method in the process of conquer problems. Only in this way could we gain more experience and knowledge which is significant for our future. After asking advices once and again, we could eventually overcome jam all by ourselves.
(如果这样结束的话结构可能不大好的)