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143"Artists should pay little attention to their critics.* riticism tends to undermine and constrain the artist's creativity."

*those who evaluate works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.


Artists should keep a balance between considering the criticism from the critics and holding on their independence and creativity. Rejecting the dross and assimilating the essence is their best choice.

An art critic, a person who specializes in evaluating art, to some extent, to represent the opinions of the authority, always has a significant influence on society and even the history of art. The responsibility and missions on critics’ shoulder is to interpret the cultural connotation in art in order to lead the public’s spiritual growth and thus they can enable the development of art to flourish.

Profound criticism from critics can have positive effect on art , rather than tends to undermine and constrain the artist's creativity. On one hand , critics with abundant accumulation of knowledge of art and history, who experience deeper in the general law of social development, cultural change, the impact of civilization, can promote the artists’ understanding of the characteristics and the inner discipline in their works ,with the result that artists absorb the quintessence of the comments in their creation for right direction and greater achievement. On the other hand, insight criticism directly impact on the exertion of the social function of art by the objective analysis to enhance public’s appreciation and understanding of art. The criticism reaching the advanced level of its time not only can support, encourage and guide some contemporary artists, but also have an great effect on other contemporary artists’ thought tendency and creation tendency, even change a generational art style and contribute to the constitution of new aesthetic ideal in some time. For example, the unprecedented prosperity in critical realism literature in Russia in 19th century democratism was closely linked to the literary critics like Belinsky,Chernyshevsky NG, and Dobralubov .Here I want to introduce one thing Belinsky did to support my opinion above. Nikolai Vasilievich Gogol, a Russian writer who presented his work as a satire on the venality of Russian bureaucracy, was sieged by reactionism critics and thus was on tenterhooks . However, just at this time, Belinsky fully recognized Gogol’s thought and art value by a article in which he pointed out the important and urgent meaning of the coming of critical realism ,with great passion and eloquent words. It gave Gogol great encouragement and motives to stick to his creation so that he produced his immoral works, such as his novel Dead Souls. Moreover, this case also encourage many contemporary writers, such as Turgenev, Nikolai Nekrasov and so on. As a consequence, it boosted the development of Russian critical realism.

Moreover, criticism from a historical height can help point out and correct the misleading developing direction of art. A century ago, there were numbers of different schools of art in Western, however, few could stand over time and exist today. Among them, Dadaism, a cultural movement which primarily involved visual arts,literaturepoetry, art manifestoes, art theorytheatre, and graphic design and  concentrated on its anti-war politics through a rejection of the prevailing standards in art through anti-art cultural works, originated from 1919 and collapsed in 1923.Its short-lived existence is attributed to its barren spiritual connotation and its neglect of criticism that pointed to its wrong developmental direction. Dadaism refused to admit its limitation and inevitable extinction if it didn’t change its direction and emotional emptiness pointed by critics. In the end,the regardless of insightful remarks caused it to become quickly immersed in a vast sea of time. From above, we can see the importance of critics to indicate the shortcomings for artists. If artists don’t accept it humbly, their achievements are temporary and may be forgotten by history quickly.



Admittedly, not all critics can guarantee the objective without his favor or have enough insight in the history and the art tendency so that it causes some regret in the history of art.Unfortunately, Van Gogh, famous for his paintings as a post-impressionist artist in the world now, is one of the great artists ahead of time. In his time, no appreciation from critics and public led to his tragedy of life. However, he chose tomaintain his creativity and independence no matter what negative criticism was pointed to him and whether someone could understand his advance thought. It was his confidence to support him to continue to create the masterpieces we can marvel at today. Thus, sometimes criticism tend to undermine artists’ creativity. At this time, whether to drift with the current depends on whether artists persist to their ideas.



Moreover, criticism from a historical height can help point out and correct the misleading developing direction of art. A century ago, there were numbers of different schools of art in Western, however, few could stand over time and exist today. Among them, Dadaism, a cultural movement which primarily involved visual arts,literaturepoetry, art manifestoes, art theorytheatre, and graphic design, and concentrated its anti-war politics through a rejection of the prevailing standards in art through anti-art cultural works, originated from 1919 and collapsed in 1923.Its short-lived existence is attributed to its barren spiritual connotation and its neglect of criticism that pointed to its wrong developmental direction. Dadaism refused to admit its limitation and inevitable extinction if it didn’t change its direction and emotional emptiness pointed by critics. In the end,
the regardless of insightful remarks caused it to become quickly immersed in a vast sea of time. From above, we can see the importance of critics to indicate the shortcomings for artists. If artists don’t accept it humbly, their achievements are temporary and may be forgotten by history quickly.



In sum, artists should pay attention to profound and insightful criticism from outstanding critics with abundant accumulation of knowledge of art and history, for it may enhance artists’ confidence and determination to go further in art when the artists ahead of their time can’t be accepted by a majority or lead their art back to right direction. However, faced with worldly points of view which may prevent them from progress and treat their epoch-making ideas as worthless, artists should stick to their principles if only they believe that their art moves towards the right way and it actually does. Thus, artists should make a sensible choice accordingly.






写得要多烂有多烂。。。。没看过任何人的范例或思想,纯自编。。。其实觉得偏了。。。

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发表于 2009-3-25 01:37:22 |只看该作者
Artists should keep a balance between considering the criticism from the critics and holding on their independence and creativity. Rejecting the dross and assimilating the essence is their best choice.(首段观点提出明确,不过还可以扩展一下,另外best这种字眼会不会不太好我不确定哈,个人感觉用个比较级要好一点)
An art critic, a person who specializes in evaluating art, to some extent, to represent the opinions of the authority, always has a significant influence on society and even the history of art. The responsibility and missions on critics’ shoulder is to interpret the cultural connotation in art in order to lead the public’s spiritual growth and thus they can enable the development of art to flourish. (还可以扩展,critics除了interpret cultural essence,还具备很多内容,例如,judge, indentify, appreciate artworks 等等)
Profound criticism from critics can have positive effect on art, rather than tends(tend) to undermine and constrain the artist's creativity.(我觉得这观点有点问题哈,何为profound criticism呢,你怎么定义呢?) On one hand, critics with abundant accumulation of knowledge of art and history, who experience deeper(这里有比较级的含义么?) in the general law of social development, cultural change, the impact of civilization, can promote the artists’ understanding of the characteristics and the inner discipline in their works, with the result that artists absorb the quintessence of the comments in their creation for right direction and greater achievement. On the other hand, insight criticism
(insightful)directly impact on the exertion of the social function of art by the objective analysis to enhance public’s appreciation and understanding of art. The criticism reaching the advanced level of its time not only can support, encourage and guide some contemporary artists, but also have an great effect on other contemporary artists’ thought tendency and creation tendency, even change a generational art style and contribute to the constitution of new aesthetic ideal in some time. For example, the unprecedented prosperity in critical realism literature in Russia in 19th century democratism was closely linked to the literary critics like Belinsky, Chernyshevsky NG, and Dobralubov. Here I want to introduce one thing Belinsky did to support my opinion above. Nikolai Vasilievich Gogol, a Russian writer who presented his work as a satire on the venality of Russian bureaucracy, was sieged by reactionism critics and thus was on tenterhooks. However, just at this time, Belinsky fully recognized Gogol’s thought and art value by a article in which he pointed out the important and urgent meaning of the coming of critical realism ,with great passion and eloquent words. It gave Gogol great encouragement and motives to stick to his creation so that he produced his immoral works, such as his novel Dead Souls. Moreover, this case also encourage many contemporary writers, such as Turgenev, Nikolai Nekrasov and so on. As a consequence, it boosted the development of Russian critical realism.


Moreover, criticism from a historical height can help point out and correct the misleading developing direction of art. A century ago, there were numbers of different schools of art in Western, however, few could stand over time and exist today. Among them, Dadaism, a cultural movement which primarily involved visual arts, literaturepoetry, art manifestoes, art theorytheatre, and graphic design and concentrated on its anti-war politics through a rejection of the prevailing standards in art through anti-art cultural works, originated from 1919 and collapsed in 1923. (看不懂。。。)Its short-lived existence is attributed to its barren spiritual connotation and its neglect of criticism that pointed to its wrong developmental direction. Dadaism refused to admit its limitation and inevitable extinction if it didn’t change its direction and emotional emptiness pointed by critics. In the end,the regardless of insightful remarks caused it to become quickly immersed in a vast sea of time. From above, we can see the importance of critics to indicate the shortcomings for artists. If artists don’t accept it humbly, their achievements are temporary and may be forgotten by history quickly.


Admittedly, not all critics can guarantee the objective without his favor or have enough insight in the history and the art tendency so that it causes some regret in the history of art. Unfortunately, Van Gogh, famous for his paintings as a post- impressionist artist in the world now, is one of the great artists ahead of time. In his time, no appreciation from critics and public led to his tragedy of life. However, he chose to maintain his creativity and independence no matter what negative criticism was pointed to him and whether someone could understand his advance thought. It was his confidence to support him to continue to create the masterpieces we can marvel at today. Thus, sometimes criticism tend to undermine artists’ creativity. At this time, whether to drift with the current depends on whether artists persist to their ideas.(这一段的论证不甚充分,可以重点写一下,为什么critics常常undermine artists,要揭示产生这一现象的原因,而非阐述这一现象。可以再思考一下哈。)

In sum, artists should pay attention to profound and insightful criticism from outstanding critics with abundant accumulation of knowledge of art and history, for it may enhance artists’ confidence and determination to go further in art when the artists ahead of their time can’t be accepted by a majority or lead their art back to right direction. However, faced with worldly points of view which may prevent them from progress and treat their epoch-making ideas as worthless, artists should stick to their principles if only they believe that their art moves towards the right way and it actually does. Thus, artists should make a sensible choice accordingly.

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1、
artists面对criticism时应当取其精华,去其糟粕

2、
critics是谁,他们有啥作用

3、
profound criticism
的正面意义:第一艺术家可以吸取良好的评论,指导自身;第二增加public的艺术鉴赏力;第三影响艺术家这个群体,甚至改变一个时代的审美观。

4、
criticism
纠正art扭曲的发展路线

5、
有些criticis限制了artists

提几个建议哈:

1、格式要注意,标点符号前不要空格,标点符号后空一格噢。因为这个,我的word上出现了好多小红线小绿线呢。

2、亲啊,我是觉得这个逻辑上喃,有点问题哈。比如你的末段,你说artists对于比较好的意见而且觉得自己是因为超前于时代别个不能理解的时候喃应该接受critics的意见,对于比较差的意见自己觉得自己对的那就不接受。这个,这个,你觉得有没有问题喃?我觉得你如果坚持这样写,就一定要写出来啥样的算是好评论,啥样的算是不好的评论。好与不好你自个是怎么定义的。话说,你是一个艺术家,别个评论了你的作品,批得一文不值,你咋个判断到底是因为自己是个天才他们都不懂你喃还是自己的东西确实垃圾应该接受意见呢?至少我觉得你的文中没有讲太清楚哈。另外亲的例子还是选得蛮丰富的,俺收了几个走哈。呵呵~

我动作又慢又健忘,原谅我哈!

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lulu的质量一向高,态度又认真~(*^__^*)
我最后一段是说,如果艺术家坚信自己的作品是有着正确的方向的,那么不管世人如何评论,那么要选择坚持(当然我觉得我没有解释艺术家怎么判断自己的作品是有价值的,只是被世人误解而已,这是我要扩充的);另一方面,如果当评论是对其作品有积极作用的,那么应该听取(我似乎也没有区分,怎么判断评论的有价值与否)。Lulu的意见很有价值,但纠结的地方要怎么写好呢?能不能帮忙想想?
至于lulu一直说我对profound critic没有下定义,我想说明下。有没有注意到我对做出评论的评论家做出了很多的定义,critics with abundant accumulation of knowledge of art and history, who experience deeper in the general law of social development, cultural change, the impact of civilization,我的想法就是,我文章中所指的评论是来自这些评论家的。(请不要说这些评论家的评论也不一定都是profond的啊。。。)大多时候他们的评论是profond的,我是通过对评论家下定义,进而对profound的评论下定义的。lulu怎么看?

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