TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 gaofei323 第二十二次作业

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to finish a
project and then start another than to finish two projects at the same time. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.（06/24/07）

Have you ever heard of the old adage” concentrate on one thing, and tell others waiting”? Some people auger that this discipline is outdated in such rapid developing society where everyone would face the complex situation everyday. In my opinion, however, finishing work one by one still works and will be beneficial to nearly every aspects of our life.

In the first, concentrating on one assignment at one moment ensures the quality of your work, which is the most important factor whatever you do. Take the AUSA, for example. As a young corporation in the IT industry, it took the first rank among PC mainboard providers around the whole world within 14 years, which definitely should be called a miracle. How could it achieve this grand success? Absolutely concentration is the answer. When other IT companies start to manufacturing LCD, CUP and other products, AUSA insisted its research on mainboard. Finally it captured the global market by most advanced technology. In short, concentrating makes perfect.

Additionally, finishing work one by one allows you understand your work clearly and learn more information from this process. But when you dropped into the situation that confused by several tasks simultaneously, learning is not the major aim any more and the mind of finishing them instead. Take me for example, last semester my teacher assigned 3 project designs for us in summer vacation. It order to spend the holiday without any homework pressure, I finished them within the former 10 days rashly. Obvious, there is no quality at all and let alone learning skill through that. Since that, I would not take tasks together any more because it brings nothing but wasting time.

Last but not the least, to undertake several tasks brings you less pressure which leaves you enough time to enjoy life with family. Work is not the only content in life and not the most important one either. As for me, family member deserved more attention than any other things did. If you spend majority of your energy to deal with endless work, what would you parents feel if they prepare delicious dinner every night but always receive your message that work stop you from eating with them? And how do you feel if you always lose the promise to your little son to play ball game with him? They are all not what wise man should do. Taking work one by one and enjoying the pleasure of staying with your family means a lot for everyone.

To sum up, project would be listed on the schedule one after another without any doubts because it guarantees the quality, enjoy a leisure life. So why don’t you choose this right way in your life?

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    Have you ever heard of the old adage” concentrate on one thing, and tell others waiting”? Some people auger(打错了吧...) that this discipline is outdated in such a rapid developing society where everyone would face the complex situation everyday. In my opinion, however, finishing work one by one still works and will be beneficial to nearly every aspect of our lives. * d* v, c8 W/ Z- s% ?* s5 J( G
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    In the first, concentrating on one assignment at one moment ensures the quality of your work, which is the most important factor whatever you do. Take the AUSA for example，as（这是一句话，前面一个没有必要用逗号） a young corporation in the IT industry, it took the first rank among PC mainboard providers around the whole world within 14 years, which definitely should be called a miracle. How could it achieve this grand success? Absolutely concentration is the answer. When other IT companies start to manufacturing LCD, CUP and other products, AUSA insisted its research on mainboard. Finally it captured the global market by most advanced technology. In short, concentrating makes perfect.; T4 i# P4 r. n9 ]( H0 @
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    Additionally, finishing work one by one allows you understand your work clearly and learn more information from this process. But when you dropped into the situation that confused by several tasks simultaneously, learning is not the major aim any more and the mind of finishing them instead. Take me for example, last semester my teacher assigned 3 project designs for us in summer vacation. It order to spend the holiday without any homework pressure, I finished them within the former 10 days rashly. Obvious, there is no quality at all and let alone learning skill through that. Since that, I would not take tasks together any more because it brings nothing but wasting time.

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    Last but not the least, to undertake several tasks brings you less pressure which leaves you enough time to enjoy life with family. Work is not the only content in life and not the most important one either. As for me, family member deserved more attention than any other things did. If you spend majority of your energy to deal with endless work, what would you parents feel if they prepare delicious dinner every night but always receive your message that work stop you from eating with them? And how do you feel if you always lose the promise to your little son to play ball game with him? They are all not what wise man should do. Taking work one by one and enjoying the pleasure of staying with your family means a lot for everyone.
   
    To sum up, project would be listed on the schedule one after another without any doubts because it guarantees the quality, enjoy a leisure life. So why don’t you choose this right way in your life? （结尾还不错）


总的来说还可以，有些小地方还是要注意~！
继续加油哈~！