TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 holding 第24次作业

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Friends are one of the most important part of our life, which could not be replaced by any other aspect. When our friends make mistakes, whether we should rectify their mistakes or not is becoming a big issue influencing our friendship. If we point out that they are wrong, it is possible that our friend feel anxious or even angry, which could destroy our friendship. But if we are pretending to be blind to their mistakes, our friendship will not make any sense. From my perspective, as their frankly friends, we should clarify our view of their mistakes as soon as possible.

In the very beginning, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Friendship is based on frankness and honest. We, as friends, should face each other without any disguise. A true friend will point out other's mistakes immediately. It is possible that they may not accept friends' suggestion and warning at once because of shame and anxious. But after the effort made by everyone, the one, who makes mistakes, will realize the mistakes and remove them. Consequently, to avoid our friends plunging into a more serious one, we should point out our friends' mistakes and help them get rid of it instead of being blind to mistakes.

What is more, helping friends to realize mistakes is a good way to improve friendship. One significant result of having friends is helping each other to artificial success. After we speak out with our friends about their mistakes, they may not accept our advice at once, but I believe, they will finally recognize that these advices benefit their study and life. At that time, they will really appreciate us and feel more cherish about our friendship. Therefore, we ought to help each other and enhance our friendship.

Last but not least, figuring out friends’ mistake also benefit to ourselves. On one side, we will learn lessons from their mistakes and avoid ourselves away from plunging into that mess. And on the other side, people will treat you in the way which you treat them. So if you are honest to your friends and help them frankly, they will give you a hand when you need them.

To sum up, we should not be blind to our friends' mistake, which will influence their entire life. It is sagacious for us to correct friends’ mistakes, which benefit our friends, our friendship and ourselves.

jenniferwyyUID: 2534935

Friends are one of the most important part (parts)of our life, which could not be replaced by any other aspect(aspects). When our friends make mistakes, whether we should rectify their mistakes or not is becoming a big issue influencing our friendship. If we point out that they are wrong, it is possible that our friend feel anxious or even angry, which could destroy our friendship. But if we are pretending to be blind to their mistakes, our friendship will not make any sense. From my perspective, as their frankly friends, we should clarify our view of their mistakes as soon as possible. (开头段太多了哦 尽量少点)
In the very beginning, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Friendship is based on frankness and honest. We, as friends, should face each other without any disguise. A true friend will point out other's mistakes immediately. It is possible that they may not accept friends' suggestion and warning at once because of shame and anxious. But after the effort made by everyone, the one, who makes mistakes, will realize the mistakes and remove them. Consequently, to avoid our friends plunging into a more serious one, we should point out our friends' mistakes and help them get rid of it instead of being blind to mistakes.
what is more, helping friends to realize mistakes is a good way to improve friendship. One significant result of having friends is helping each other to artificial success（人为成功？？不明白啊）. After we speak out （point out）our friends about their mistakes, they may not accept our advice at once, but I believe, they will finally recognize that these advices benefit their study and life. At that time, they will really appreciate us and feel more cherish about our friendship. Therefore, we ought to help each other and enhance our friendship.

last but not least, figuring out friends’ mistake also benefit to ourselves. On one side, we will learn lessons from their mistakes and avoid ourselves away from plunging into that mess. And on the other side, people will treat you in the way which you treat them. So if you are honest to your friends and help them frankly, they will give you a hand when you need them.
To sum up, we should not be blind to our friends' mistake, which will influence their entire life. It is sagacious for us to correct friends’ mistakes, which benefit our friends, our friendship and ourselves.

个人意见哈 我总觉得LZ有点跑题了  题目是说让朋友犯错还是破坏友谊