0910G SPECTACULAR 备考日记 by 大洋彼岸之风 [风]--不累啊，我真的不累啊~

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A173
In this argument, the author recommends that in order to reduce cost the magazine should decrease emphasis on international news and refrain from displaying such stories on magazine covers. To support the conclusion, the arguer points out that our competing news-magazines have significantly decreased the number of cover stories that they devote to international news.The author also reasons that the cost of maintaining our foreign bureaus to report on international news is increasing.One several grounds, this evidence lends little credible support for the memo’s conclusion.

First of all, the obvious flaw with this argument is that no evidence is provided indicating that the international news on covers is not welcomed by consumers. It is true that the magazine N has a poor selling over the past years. However, it may not because of the international news covers leading to this poor situation, but other possible factors. For examlpe. it is entirely possible that during the past three years the quality of the content of N magazine has been decreasing, and it is no longer attractive. In short, without ruling out other possible explanations for the relatively poor sales of those particular issues the publisher cannot justifiably conclude that international cover stories were the cause of the relatively poor sales.

Secondly, from the argument we can hardly find any evidence to explain why other competing news-magazines have significantly decreased the number of cover stories that they devote the international news. It is possible, for instance, that the other magazines experienced declining sales even for issues focusing only on domestic news. If so, then the publisher’s recommendation would make little sense.From auger's description, we can hardly find out the actual reasons of the decreasing in international news.

Last but not the least, the conclusion that N magazine should decrease emphasis on international news is reliable. It’s foreign bureas ' increasing cost for maintaining cannot help people to draw a conclusion like the argument suggests.It could be the case that the cost rise up along with the global boom of economics or an inflation .It would be hasty to implement the publisher’s suggestion without acknowledging and exploring this possible scenario.

As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that more evidence concerning the other problems occurring in foreign bureaus except for the cost of maintaining it. We would have to give more sufficient evidence to guarantee the assumptions given above paragraphs so as to validate the conclusion.

大洋彼岸之风UID: 2644427

现在把多余的小组活动都取消了
以寄托为主
我觉得作文的模板和套话基本也掌握了
考前背一背应该不会低于3分了。。饿。。。;P
但是想拿到一个好的分数还需要漂亮的句子
加强论证 而不是套话 空话
所以觉得 还需要多多阅读好的文章
ECO TIME 什么的。。。
我的邮箱已经被ECO的文章推荐塞满了
一天好几封。。饿 好好吸收把。。
在机考之前能学到多是是多少。。。。。

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32# 大洋彼岸之风
a哎哟。。。怕怕 就算我现在的水平是1分吧。。。。。
+U。。。
刚刚复习了以前的单词 停了Nj久 果然有点前功尽弃的感觉 。。。
用XDF5背的 效率高

dacongfanUID: 2644717

组长，我们两个试着互相改吧

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In this argument, the author recommends that in order to reduce cost the magazine should decrease emphasis on international news and refrain from displaying such stories on magazine covers. To support the conclusion, the arguer points out that our competing news-magazines have significantly decreased the number of cover stories that they devote to international news.The author also reasons that the cost of maintaining our foreign bureaus to report on international news is increasing.One several grounds, this evidence lends little credible support for the memo’s conclusion.个人觉得是否可以稍微对文中的语言做些改动
First of all, the obvious flaw with this argument is that no evidence is provided indicating that the international news on covers is not welcomed by consumers. It is true that the magazine N has a poor selling over the past years. However, it may not because of the international news covers leading to this poor situation, 这句话里leading to this poor situation 和前面的那句话有重复的嫌疑but other possible factors. For examlpe. it is entirely possible that during the past three years the quality of the content of N magazine has been decreasing, and it is no longer attractive同样两句话重复. In short, without ruling out other possible explanations for the relatively poor sales of those particular issues the publisher cannot justifiably conclude that international cover stories 我觉得应该为international stories on the cover were the cause of the relatively poor sales.

Secondly, from the argument we can hardly find any evidence to explain why other competing news-magazines have significantly decreased the number of cover stories that they devote to the international news. It is possible, for instance, that the other magazines experienced declining sales even for issues focusing only on domestic news. If so, then the publisher’s recommendation would make little sense.From auger's 拼写错误description, we can hardly find out the actual reasons of the decreasing in international news.

Last but not the least, the conclusion that N magazine should decrease emphasis on international news is reliable估计是笔误，觉得应该为unreliable. It’s foreign bureas ' increasing cost for maintaining cannot help people to draw a conclusion like like应该改为as,因为后面加的是句子 the argument suggests.It could be the case that the cost rise up along with the global boom of economics or an inflation .中间缺少过渡It would be hasty to implement the publisher’s suggestion without acknowledging and exploring this possible scenario.

As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that个人觉得that可以去掉 more evidence concerning the other problems occurring in foreign bureaus except for the cost of maintaining it. We would have to give more sufficient evidence to guarantee the assumptions given above paragraphs so as to validate the conclusion.

dacongfanUID: 2644717

呵呵，我改的I8，你看看吧

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备考目标：7月31日结束作文

个人格言：大牛直接给ETS一刀，不是牛的就像我这样，痛快点把脖子伸过去让ETS砍一刀！

理想分数：550+780+3.5（别无所求…… ）

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牺牲睡眠熟悉题库
对了
关于糖丸和抗生素我用红字标出来的应该没错吧？

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1．        国家的重要责任就是提高人民的生活水平,使人民的福利有保障，比如公共医疗，公共安全，军队保证人民的安全，个人的自由，丰富的文化，因此，人民的整体福利是一个很重要的方面
2．        一个国家人民的general welfare与其统治者，艺术家，科学家的成就是密不可分的，科技改变生活，艺术陶冶情操。-贝多芬，爱因斯坦。
3．        然而成就是一个国家是否伟大的重要标志，中东等国家石油十分丰富，但是不能算伟大，真正的伟大是对全人类都有所贡献，能对世界产生影响 。

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1.    法律的公正与不公正难以定义，每个人所处的环境不同，对法律是否“公正”也会有不同的看法，任何一条法律都有可能对一部分人公正一部分人不公正。
1．        如果法律违背了大多数人的利益，我们就应该进行抵制。
2．        我们不应轻易违抗，如果法律得不到良好的贯彻，很容易造成社会秩序的混乱，应该通过合法的手段进行意愿的表达。

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随着科技的发展，社会的进步，各种法律也在不断完善和发展，以保护人民的利益随着科技发展和社会进步，法律也在不断发展和完善，以保护人民的利益。-互联网的出现，黑客，版权等
1．        在不同的地方，法律应根据当地习俗习惯而有所改变。-一夫多妻，一夫一妻。
2．        社会在发展，法律也应该尽量做到灵活多样化，但基本原则和精神不能轻易改变。

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1．        许多社会问题通过法律和司法系统很难解决，它受到多方面影响。-吸烟有害健康，但不能草率禁止吸烟，它会影响经济和社会稳定。只能通过教育方式来提高人们的相关意识。
2．        在某些方面，对道德行为进行立法是有必要。-对于一个善于游泳的人在见到溺水情况发生时应当用于挺身而出。
3. 法律和司法系统难以解决的应该通过教育的方式，对道德进行立法是可行的，但必须要求有一个度。

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1．        具有极高的伦理和道德修养无疑会为成为一个成功的领导者加足砝码.
2．        政治领域的道德标准和一般意义的道德标准不同，两者不可混为一谈。
3．        仅仅具有伦理和道德修养对于一名领导者是远远不够的。-组织协调能力等。

147.
1.喜欢这类游戏不代表一定买W的产品，设计水平是否达到他们的要求。
2.10-25的购买能力可能不足，价格定位不可高
4.游戏的开发需要时间，同行竞争也没有考虑

17.
1.收1次和2次的结果如何，有可能收1次就足够
2.费用提高可能是采用更先进的技术，更加环保，长远角度应该考虑
3.增加车辆可能是给其他城市拓展业务

51.
1.没有证据证明第二次感染一定会发生
2.病人具体资料不足，身体状况可能不同
3.医生的经验水平可能不同，如不同的治疗方法
4.服用糖丸既然也和服用抗生素恢复时间差不多那么很可能是病人心理原因导致，反而证明了可以不服用抗生素，抗生素会带来副作用

2.
1.地域不同，交通，环卫，户主
2.低价升值不一定由统一外观导致
3.统一外观的局限性

47.
1.历史记录没有提到可能是还未发现，即使没有提到也不代表没有发生
2.历史记录是记录何时的，何种形式的
3.巨响不一定是火山喷发导致

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4.服用糖丸既然也和服用抗生素恢复时间差不多那么很可能是病人心理原因导致，反而证明了可以不服用抗生素，抗生素会带来副作用

嗯?奇怪，题目里明明说是Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced.

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嗯?奇怪，题目里明明说是Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced.
米饭袜子 发表于 2009-6-2 02:29

看错题了哎呀
你还没睡啊

米饭袜子UID: 2532172

嘿嘿嘿，刚补完实验报告。。。。。。。怨念。。。。。。。

大洋彼岸之风UID: 2644427

我学建筑的 你呢

米饭袜子UID: 2532172

嗯，生物医学~

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米饭
早点睡

米饭袜子UID: 2532172

:loveliness:你也早睡昂~通宵对身体不好，嗯