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There are some people holding the opinion that high schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. However this plan has a good opportunity to be followed by students’ not learning other subjects which are still quite necessary. As far as I am concerned I can not agree with this statement at all. In the following passage I will discuss this problem and give my evidence for my point of view.

First of all, I would like to talk about the knowledge system, an organic whole which is made up with components from many subjects. When we name a person knowledgeable we often mean that the person has broad horizon and deep thought about the world. Students in school are not taught in a random way; instead, there is always a syllabus that the teachers must follow. It is the syllabus that makes the knowledge input the students combined and organic. If we allow high school students study what they want to study the whole teaching plan will be messed up. Thus the students get the information separately and disorderly. Just like the old saying that before you learn running, learn walking first. Teaching in the stage of high school should be held under control.

Combined with the statement above, I have a live example in my life on this problem. Actually life abounds such examples, I just picked one of them. My friend Maggie, who is famous for playing piano in our country now, had contributed herself so much on piano that she hardly went to school since she was a little girl. People often say she is successful. However as her best friend, she used to tell me that she often feels frustrated when she has a conversation with others, because she often makes herself embarrassed for her ignorance. Don’t you think it is a very persuasive example on this issue?

Nevertheless, we should still encourage students in high school learn what they want to learn in their part time. The period that people in high school is the most creative time of a life. Many famous people showed their great ability in certain field when they were in high school such as Li Xiang in China and Bill Guets in America.

Base on the analysis above, we can safely come to the conclusion that people should never break the teaching system in high schools, however, it is really necessary to encourage students learn what they want to learn in their part time.