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本帖最后由 二月蓝 于 2009-6-2 23:38 编辑
It’s well known that an education system will be effective if it take into account of the needs of the individuals' interests. In this way, students could fully develop their potential and have more energy in their study. However, many educational organizations still can't find any effect way to make it possible to be taken, for some conflict in profit will be inescapable, and to balance both sides well is too difficult. 末句点明观点
As we all know, it's really an effective way to meet the individual’s needs to manage our educational plans. In the past, many rich family and nobles employed some excellent or special teacher for their kids to study some subjects important for them. Still at present, there exists some special schools for those who are disability, and we can see all of these methods contribute a long-term influence on these kids ‘future life.个人觉得对残疾儿童的特殊教育其实是属于基础教育类,他们学习的都是生活最基本的技能,不知道是不是算在MEET INDIVIDUAL NEEDS,楼主再考虑下
However, if we consider it in real earnest, many disadvantages can be found. First of all, this process can be really long and the society must offer enough money and manpower在这学习一个词,原来人力的英文真的就是MANPOWER to supply this educational plans. For instance, parents are the first teachers for almost everyone, but you can also notice how much they spend during your growing progress. What's worse, we may find it usually can’t reach the goal we made, and we should consider it seriously whether it's worth doing like this. For instance, if we manage special classes for every student‘s interest and keep up with their own intellect. I can't image how much money and how many social resources must be spent. So, compared with the effect, the cost seems too hugeness.
Additionally, not every student knows his or her interests clearly. For most of us, it will take a long time to know your interests and develop it, since we always say that the younger you are, the more confused you are. Otherwise, ons’ interests kept changing throughout their whole study, for what you find interesting now and you determine to do it, but after a while, you may feel it so boring. And yet, as the rapid development of new technology, of course more subjects and new things will be created, such as some majors like software engineering, electronic engineering and it becomes so wide for us to choose what we like, and you must change your interests to keep up with the variety society. So to meet each student’s interest is difficult and the effect always is not satisfying.
Children are very curious and willing to explore the unknown world. They have their rights to see every aspect of the world. We should encourage them to explore the whole world. So, for the foundational education, to make students know variety knowledge is essential and only in this way, can they realize the world and themselves clearly.这句赞 Absolutely, the combination of fundamental education with individual is necessary. For we can design some required courses and elective course, and allows students themselves to select what they are interested. Students can learn the thing interested them and at the same time, know more about the world.
Though humans keep searching an effective way for education all the time, to balance other important aspects still can’t be ignored. We can’t assert it will be a long term, but we can affirm it must be a difficult one.
整体思路很清晰,开始谈MEET NEEDS的优点,然后给出了几个缺点,最后谈到了未来KEEP SEARCHING AN EFFECTIVE WAY
希望改进一些小的语法错误。有个倒装句用的很好,赞一个
多练习表达,未来肯定可以写的更好 |
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