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0910G SPECTACULAR 备考日记 by 米丽水[So What] 自己的宣言 [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-6-21 16:56:41 |只看该作者
转眼过去了十天,而我什么都没有干,总结过去的一个月,我作文只勉强写了6篇,还不是好好写的。单词马马虎虎背了一遍,再看时还是陌生;下个月就要考试了,难道我真的很不可惜花的一大笔钱,就让它飘走吗?
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好愧疚啊 看到同组同学的坚持,我太丢人了
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发表于 2009-6-26 00:31:59 |只看该作者

Avoiding catastrophes

Jun 22nd 2009
From Economist.com

It is easy to destroy an ecosystem but difficult to rebuild it

WHEN John Cabot dropped anchor off the coast of Newfoundland in 1497, his crew reported that they needed only to dip a bucket into the water to catch cod. For centuries the fish of the Grand Banks that he had discovered remained in plentiful supply. Even the introduction of modern fishing techniques from the 1950s onwards did not seem to be doing too much harm. 渔场从发现到历经百年到现在捕鱼技术这三个句子就纵横了这么几百年鱼类都很好。

Then, in 1992, the cod population of the Grand Banks suddenly collapsed, throwing 40,000 people out of work. (看看鱼群量减少这个collapse
用得多好,让多少多少人失业这个
throw用得多好,说明人是多么不愿意失业,是失业抛弃了人们)Fisheries ecologists had long(早就) warned that the species was threatened by overfishing(过渡捕鱼) but their words fell on deaf ears(但是没人听这个表达到位得
落到了聋子的耳朵里)—in part because earlier predictions of doom (不幸)had proved incorrect(不正确的预测). Now their successors(这个是生态学家的后人) are trying to develop ways of telling when a collapse is imminent(看这个显著), in order to avoid crying “wolf” when no wolf is at the door(狼来了的故事
说明开始吓唬等真的有灾难时无可挽回).

AP

To do this in the ocean itself is tricky—the sea is vast and there are lots of variables(变量) to contend with. What is required, then, is a model to aid understanding.模型预测 Steven Carpenter and his colleagues at the University of Wisconsin, Madison, have found one: lakes. A lake is a good place to study ecological changes because it is small, as ecosystems go(随着生态变化), and has clear boundaries(明显的界限). Since mid-2008, therefore, Dr Carpenter’s team have been monitoring the health(检测健康)
of six lakes in Missouri in order to try to understand how ecosystems suddenly flip(看这个变化表达) from one state to another.

They have found, as they hoped they would, that these lakes do indeed switch(变化)—usually quickly—from a clear-water state to an algal bloom(藻花), in response to fertiliser being added to themin response to 表达。。。的结果 as a result of. When they are clear, they tend to be full of big fish and smaller creatures that filter water to make it clean. But when the water is cloudy(混水的表达) both the fish and the smaller creatures are absent(没有的表达there are no….. What might signal that such a switch is imminent(big的同义词)? So far Dr Carpenter’s team think that looking for an increase in several statistical characteristics of a lake’s fish and plankton populations (“variability”, “skewness” and “autocorrelation”, to give their technical names), can predict whether or not an algal bloom will flourish(藻花爆发的词).

On its own, that is interesting. Unfortunately it is not terribly (这个quite的同义词怎么也没想到)useful for environmental managers on small budgets, because they cannot afford to monitor entire ecosystems continuously. Work by Marten Scheffer of Wageningen University in the Netherlands, however, suggests they might not need to. Dr Sceffer’s laboratory is full of bottles containing samples of lake water brimming(充满filled with with plankton. Applying appropriate(proper的同义词) statistical techniques to such samples seems to do a reasonable job of indicating the stability of the lake from which they came.

What is particularly intriguing(看这个感兴趣的表达
没有用be interested in is the way that the lakes change. They exhibit(表现) what is known as hysteresis (磁带?). That means you can “drip feed” them with fertiliser without causing much visible change until, suddenly, the whole system crashes and a new stable state, dominated by lake algae, emerges. To “uncrash” things it is not enough to push the lake’s chemistry back to where it was just before the flip. You have to go quite a long way past that point to bring back the clear-water ecosystem.你还要走相当长的路通过那个返回生态系统的点。

This helps explain why, despite(用一用这个词表达尽管)
15 years of conservation efforts, the cod of the Grand Banks have failed to recover.这个说明什么? Though it was trawlnets rather than chemistry that caused the system to flip in the first place, the banks have now settled into 处于 a new, stable state. They will not easily be forced out of it.

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发表于 2009-6-26 00:33:08 |只看该作者
今天就写了两篇a 总算完成了一次作业 还要不断借鉴官方范文 和评分标准

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发表于 2009-6-26 21:58:33 |只看该作者

Security in Iraq

Is it getting worse again?

Jun 25th 2009 | BAGHDAD
From The Economist print edition

As American troops prepare to leave all the towns, Iraqis are getting nervous

BARACK OBAMA’s administration has promised(承诺) to withdraw all American troops from all of Iraq’s towns by the end of this month. As the deadline looms(朦胧出现,begins 要确切), people are again asking whether Iraq’s forces will be able to cope (deal with)on their own. On cue, a fresh bout (新一轮,看看这个词用的)of violence has erupted. On June 20th, a huge(big) lorry bomb exploded in Taza, a Turkmen town just south of the disputed city of Kirkuk, killing at least 70 people. Two days later at least seven bombs went off(exploded) in and around Baghdad, including a roadside blast(bomb), a car bomb and a suicide attack, killing some 30 people altogether(all). And on June 24th another big bomb killed at least 70 people in Baghdad, perhaps the single (only) deadliest attack in Iraq this year. The insurgents, knowing that the Americans are poised (看这个准备表达,be ready/prepared to)to pull out(withdraw), are aiming to( 看这个意图表达,intending to) make Iraq as unstable as ever.

They have also stagedplaned some spectacular assassinations(暗杀行动)that have threatened to restart a cycle of sectarian reprisals(宗派报复). Earlier this month the head of the main Sunni bloc in parliament, Harith al-Obeidi, a noted campaigner for human rights, was gunned down by a teenager in a Baghdad mosque after he had led Friday prayers.(星期五做礼拜) In Mosul, the biggest city of the north, where the coach of Iraq’s karate team was recently shot dead, bombings are still going on, though at a reduced rate.

Yet, despite this nerve-racking spasm, the recorded figures suggest that the violence is still in retreat. Fewer civilians were killed in May than in any month since 2003. Both Iraqi and American officials had predicted a surge( a sudden increase,看看这个比单纯的increase 要内涵丰富)in attacks as the deadline(最后期限) for withdrawal neared(越来越近,这个词我习惯,close?不能替).

The prime minister, Nuri al-Maliki, told Iraqis not to be dismayeddisappointed, desperate by violence here and there(这个词我也喜欢,到处). The country’s own forces, he insisted, could maintain security, as they already were. Besidesin additionmoreover, American tanks and armies were no useuseless in what had become a counter-insurgency intelligence game, which the Iraqis were better equipped to play than were the Americans(看这个倒装). “We’re absolutely certain(看这个完全保证,比quite sure好吧) the withdrawal will not make our security worse,” said Mr Maliki. In any eventanyhow, he said, the withdrawal of American troops from the towns would be a “great victory” for Iraq.

In fact American troops have already withdrawn from nearly all the towns—and have rarely been seen in them of late. Many joint American-Iraqi security posts(驻地) have been dismantled. There will be no more routine American patrols, rare though they have already become. The Americans will, however, remain in bases(基地跟posts nearby, on call in case(除非。。待命) Iraqi forces hit trouble(遇到麻烦). And in some places, especially in Mosul, where efforts to suppress(加强镇压力度,看别人侧重的是哪里)
the insurgency have been intensifying, the definition of city limits is being elastically interpreted, to let the main American base stay where it is, on the city’s edge.

But the Iraqis are slowly realising that Mr Obama really does(这是我一贯用的强调手法) intend to remove the bulk of his troops before 2011. So they may at last be starting to focus on passing long-delayed bits of important nation-building legislation, such as an oil-and-gas law, constitutional amendments, and even a law governing(规范) elections. Without a modicum of cohesion at the heart of government, how can Iraq’s security forces stick together(团结起来) in the face of sectarian or ethnic tension? Iraqis know that establishing a more cohesive and broader-based government is at least as important as beefing complainingup the Iraqi security forces.

A crucial general election is due (expected to happen)in January—and everybody knows that the Americans want to witness a peaceful poll leading to a stable government before they can withdraw completely. So there is a fresh ferment of political horse-trading and alliance-testing. Mr Maliki is trying to buff up(polish) his image as the strongman who can provide law and order. He is exploring (looking for) the possibility of new ties across sectarian divisions as well as sounding out possible partners for a grand Shia coalition similar to the one that won last time.(难道前面是horse-trading shady businessman image? Even the “Bands of the Righteous”, an offshoot of the Shia militia movement led by a radical cleric, Muqtada al-Sadr, may want to take part in peaceful politics. As a gesture of goodwill, it released the bodies of two long-dead British hostages who had been kidnapped two years ago. (这个事alliance-testing?)

Yet, whether the Americans stay or leave, Iraq still suffers from its worst failing. There is still no party or leader that can reach across the country’s divisions and appeal to Iraqis of every ethnic and sectarian hue. 伊拉克仍然没有伟大的领袖来实现统一。

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发表于 2009-6-27 23:27:00 |只看该作者
不想练习 但是又得抓紧练习 到现在还没有分析范文 分析评分标准 只是练习 也没有总结 写完了也没有修改过 这不是自己不给自己机会吗?
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发表于 2009-6-27 23:59:51 |只看该作者
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发表于 2009-6-29 17:59:47 |只看该作者
今天跟老板挑明要准备g作文,还有three weeks,终于没有实验at any time and every minutes tangles me了,先放松一下。开始准备。
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发表于 2009-6-29 23:27:18 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 米丽水 于 2009-6-29 23:29 编辑

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-968840-1-1.html 明天看这个
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-974375-1-1.html issue 221

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发表于 2009-7-7 18:58:50 |只看该作者
不知道是幸还是不幸,快要考试了还得连着几天去采样,白天做,晚上才有时间看。也许考坏了还可以找个台阶下?这是怎样变态的一种荣幸啊!不幸的是我没有时间了,也浪费了大把银子,自讨苦吃,赔本!
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发表于 2009-7-7 19:04:15 |只看该作者
很郁闷的是,没有准备前还是会表达思想的,词还是会用准确的,句子之间还是会衔接地很好的,为什么天天看,反而不会写了,写出的句子都是颠三倒四,指代不明,语言贫乏,逻辑脱节,单词错误,一系列问题都堆在一块,严重打击了我的信心哪,以前背的文章一个好词都不会用,以前也没少看文章啊,怎么写的时候都用不上,难道看文章都是在装模做样?我觉得像,从来没想过有朝一日它会用到考卷上?

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发表于 2009-7-7 19:07:44 |只看该作者
楼主不要太着急了 欲速则不达 静下心来想一想 可能会写得更流畅些

我也才做完试验 知道同时准备的痛苦 只有4周不到 单词还没有背呢 好歹现在毕业了可以全心准备了 呵呵

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发表于 2009-7-13 12:46:37 |只看该作者
最后一个星期,静心练习总结
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发表于 2009-7-20 12:57:17 |只看该作者
终于考完作文,松了一口气,不是很坏,一般吧。不过这次G准备让我收获不小,以后要再接再励
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