0910AW同主题第一期-ISSUE13 -[WDI]组员-okusa

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来晚了，但是是自己的第一篇！希望大家帮忙改，狂拍狠批的那种。谢谢~~ 我也去找童鞋们的文章去改。

【0910AWSPECTACULAR 同主题写作第一期】 ISSUE13
题目：
Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost asfewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which theselanguages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct.
我认为题目的第一句只是陈述了一个事实，第二句的重点是：whether it is the government’s duty。

第一篇习作，观点和语言都有模仿范文原文。希望自己第一步能看猫画咪，请前辈们海涵~

提纲：1.提出观点：
政府should保护，但更应该务实。

2．
因为：
语言的诸重要性列举

-是文化的传承

- 是表达一种特定的对世界的认识

- 对人们思维thinking mode的塑造，使世界人类思维多样性。

3. 总结观点：政府有能力则多加保护，无能力（如有亟待解决的其他问题时），应该申请联合国相关组织(UNESCO?) 来寻求帮助。而本国政府应更求务实发展。

（P.S. 引自UNESCO官网-各会员国重申：坚信文化多样性是发展的源泉之一，其对于人类的重要性就如同生物多样性对于大自然的重要性一样……是不同个性的人创造了文化表达方式多种多样的丰富多彩的文化和自然遗产，尤其是在发展中国家。这一文化遗产大都表现为非物质遗产的形式：节日、歌曲、语言和激发创造性和团结精神的集会地点。）


The speaker makes a claim that the governments of countries where lesser known languages are spoken should prevent these languages from being extinct. I agree insofar as the importance of a language should never be ignored, and should be always emphasized within its culture. However, I think whether it is the duty of the local government to protect the languages should be decided as situation requires.

On the one hand, it is never too late to cherish the value of a language. As we all known, languages represent cultural heritages. No matter how popular a language is, the essence of its culture was recorded and developed by that language. We understand our culture naturally if we know that language well.For example, we never have a formal course called “Culture study” in elementary school or middle school, but we understand our own culture even if we are teenagers. The concept of a culture was always delivered by the language learning process. We naturally are the culture heir when we learn a language.

A native language is also a culture heritage per se. This specific culture heritage gives us a sense of identity every time when we use it. For instance,when I speak Chinese, I always describe things by way of what Chinese culture shapes the thing, which makes me feel I am a Chinese.

Moreover,an indigenous language shapes distinct mode of thinking. It represents a special way to understand the world and categorize things of the people who are speaking it. To some extent, some lesser-known language may have the unique ways to describe things reflecting the observation of their speakers. For instance, Eskimo has nearly one thousand ways to describe snow in their language. We have to say that they are experts on knowing snow. I think if someone has the ability to categorize one thing into such multiple ways, he is likely good at probing questions and focusing on details. Another example is that the characters of Chinese language are like drawing pictures; therefore,it is well-known that Chinese people are good at imaginal thinking.

As discussed above, preserving indigenous languages will definitely keep the diversity of the world. Thus it is the diversity that makes the permanent development of human society.

In sum, in terms of the value of an indigenous language, I assert that governments of developed countries that the social resources are guaranteed and the usage would not influence their living should do their utmost to protect languages from being extinct. But if it is the underdeveloped countries that should use resources on more practical developments would best resort to UNESCO or other related organizations to seek help to protect those languages in danger of extinction.

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The speaker makes a claim that the governments of countries where lesser known languages are spoken should prevent these languages from being extinct. I agree in so far as the importance of a language should never be ignored, and should be always emphasized within its culture. However, I think whether it is the duty of the local government to protect the languages should be decided as situation requires.





第一意群段：

On the one hand, it is never too late to cherish the value of a language. As we all known, languages represent cultural heritages. No matter how popular a language is, the essence of its culture was recorded and developed by that language.我不明白你这句的意思是强调什么。这个No matter what 的潜台词是 popular languages 更代表the essence of the culture还是 less popular ones更代表？另外，提出论点就结束了这一段，虽然这几乎是一个人所共识的事实，但最好有一些必要的话来点一下。比如，诗歌，戏剧。 We understand our culture naturally if we know that

Language，well，for example, we never have a formal course called “Culture study” in elementary school or middle school, but we understand our own culture even if we are teenagers. The concept of a culture was always delivered by the language learning process. We naturally are the culture heir when we learn a language标志一下论点句.

A native language is also a culture heritage per se没看懂这是什么意思-_-. This specific culture heritage gives us a sense of identity every time when这个when去掉貌似更舒服一点 we use it. For instance, when I speak Chinese, I always describe things by way of what Chinese culture shapes the thing, shape用得好！which makes me feel I am a Chinese.


第一意群段结束，论证观点：语言是文化的传承。


Moreover, an indigenous language shapes distinct mode of thinking. It represents a special way to understand the world and categorize things of the people who are speaking it.继续标志论点句 To some extent, some lesser-known language may have the unique ways to describe things reflecting the observation of their speakers. For instance, Eskimo has nearly one thousand ways to describe snow in their language很简单但是很生动，对很多人来说却很难想到. We have to say that they are experts on knowing snow. I think if someone has the ability to categorize one thing into such multiple ways, he is likely good at probing questions and focusing on details. Another example is that the characters of Chinese language are like drawing pictures; therefore, it is well-known that Chinese people are good at imaginable thinking.

第二意群结束：这里说的都是不同语种的人对世界的理解不同。




As discussed above, preserving indigenous languages我不知道这里用这样的表达来形容这些语言是不是合适，总之感觉表意不清 will definitely keep the diversity of the world. Thus it is the diversity that makes the permanent development of human society.这一段可以充分发展一点再。我举出了如果文化没有多样性，诗人艺术家的创意将消失殆尽，不过这一点被寄托上的同学批的体无完肤，算是给你提供点灵感吧哈~

第三意群段，多样性。单薄



In sum, in terms of the value of an indigenous language, I assert that governments of developed countries that the social resources are guaranteed and the usage would not influence their living should do their utmost赞，是我绝对用try/ their best-_- to protect languages from being extinct. But if it is the underdeveloped countries that should use resources on more practical developments would best resort to UNESCO or other related organizations to seek help to protect those languages in danger of extinction.



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