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Topic: teacher should be paid according to their students' performs

Attitute: Although teachers play an important role in children's education, but there are still a lot of factors can influence students' perform, so it is unreasonable to pay teachers only according students' perform.

V1: Teachers play an replaceable position in students' education. Bla Bla 一大堆。

V2：However, family, children themselves also play crucial role, even the central role.

V3: In addition, teachers should try their best to cultivate stus, stus' perform can become a factor to judge teachers' work.

Summing up, teacher should not be paid just according to their stus' perform