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The chief benefit of the study of history is to break down the illusion that people in one period of time are significantly different from people who lived at any other time in history.
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素材:1. History, then, provides the only extensive materials available to study the human condition. It also focuses attention on the complex processes of social change, including the factors that are causing change around us today.

History as art and entertainment serves a real purpose, on aesthetic grounds but also on the level of human understanding.

In The Prince, 16th-century Italian philosopher Machiavelli wrote, “Whoever wishes to foresee the future must consult the past; for human events ever resemble those of preceding times.hey are guideposts to a better understanding of our own future.
历史对未来
Three major types of predictive modes, or history-to-future thinking, exist. The first mode to arise, and one that is still widely used today, is based on assumptions about the recurrence of historical events and patterns.
The second predictive mode to develop, and by far the most dramatic, involves assumptions about a phenomenon called historical disruption
The third predictive mode, not necessarily the newest but certainly the one developed most systematically during the past century, involves looking to recent history for the trends that are likely to continue in the future.

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发表于 2009-6-30 19:15:56 |只看该作者
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首段, 各个朝代  各个国家 都在研究历史,都会记录这个国家的历史,社会的历史 但是 研究历史 记录历史带给我们什么  真的是为了打破一种幻想  过去的人与现在的人 有显著的不同,
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不时代的人 由于经济的发展  经济水平的提高,科学技术的进步,生活方式 饮食,穿衣,交流等方式 存在明显的不同,经济水平的提高 推动了生活水平的提高,饮食上,人们以健康的饮食理念代替了只追求吃饱的想法,以穿着 时尚,漂亮 为中心 代替了只注重保暖的追求。科技的进步,手机,网络的盛行使得人们由于距离所带来的不便 而是交流受阻的状态被颠覆,同时也打破了距离带来的信息阻塞。
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但是无论 社会如和发展,经济如何进步,人的一些人性是不会变的,资本主义社会和社会主义社会 人们贪婪, 武断,好奇 自私的性格并没有改变,科技的进步可以带来医学的进步 使人们的医疗技术飞速发展,过去的很多顽疾可以得到快速,有效治疗,但是人们仍然并且永远要面对最终生命的终结。所以在这一点上,每一个时代的人 没有什么区别。
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很明显 研究历史可以 看到不同时代人的相同与不同,每一个国家,每一个朝代的历史都可以看到这些,如果研究历史的目的是为了打破这个幻想,那么其实我们的历史学家只需要 研究一部历史 或者一个国家的历史 ,历史的记录就没有继续下去的必要了。然而事实是相反的。
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事实是 历史记录在继续,一代又一代的历史学家热情的投入到历史研究中,历史的研究 马不停蹄。面对这样的情况,我们不得不深入的思考 历史研究的价值,历史研究的主要目的。 从唯物主义的角度看,历史的主要目的是 以史为镜 明辨现在和未来。 历史上的事件有极大的重复性,借鉴历史可以防止类似事件的发生。例如,经济危机,政治暴动。其次。历史研究社会的发展趋势,通过社会的发展趋势 可预见未来,防患于未来。

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发表于 2009-6-30 19:16:26 |只看该作者
Every dynasty has its own history, every country has its own history, in addition, every country and every society have still been recording their history. Does it really for breaking down the illusion that there is a significant difference between people recently and the people in the past? Furthermore, is it the chief benefit of the study of history? If so, is there a need for all of the society in different period to record their society?
There is no doubt that no matter how the society develops, humanity is constant such as selfish, greed and curiosity. People share a belief, for example, that throughout the human society, it is the greed that incent the development of society for people no matter in which society who always want to get more, want live a better life although they are already living out a relative good life so that they have to work harder and harder leading to a rapid develop of society. In a no dissimilar way, the curiosity is the murder to unknown for scientists who explore the mystery in and out universe. In any history book, it is common to find the above on the people in different time.
However, at the same time, we also can’t pay a suspicion attitude to these person having liven in different periods that there are countless differences whether on clothing, diet or on thinking pattern due to the develop of technology and economy. Because of the improving economical level, people are concerned to clothing not only on warming but on fashion which, of course, must attribute to the development of technology. It is the technology that makes the material of clothing various. Similarly, on diet, today people pay attention to healthy diet in place of repletion. On these aspect, different people in different time hold a unlike opinion.
Obviously, history provides a abound material to know of the dissimilar and similar in different time. But if the purpose just is that, historian needn’t take pains to study the history in different time. a series of history is full. The fact is contrast. And what is the truth of studying history is the major benefit
It is because of the predicting future and then bringing benefit to modern society that one generation and the next generation goes on having a research on history. Firstly , from the history events, we can prevent the similar calamity from happening again. Lessons from economic crisis, for example, can prevent the occurrence of it again in future. Secondly, if we can search the trend that how the society develop, we can predict what will happen next, and what we shall do to reply. Not only we but also our generation can gain great benefit from it.
To sum up, there are both similarity and dissimilarity between people recently and people in the past, and at the time breaking down the illusion is not our chief benefit of the study of history. It is the chief benefit that gaining lessons from calamity in history and then exerting it to modern society bringing benefits to us and next generation.

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Every dynasty has its own history, every country has its own history, in addition, every country and every society have still been recording their history. Does it really for breaking down the illusion that there is a significant difference between people recently and the people in the past? Furthermore, is it the chief benefit of the study of history? If so, is there a need for all of the society in different period to record their society?
There is no doubt that no matter how the society develops,(个人觉得 no matter to what extent the society 社会发展到何种程度 会不会好一些) humanity is constant such as selfish, greed and curiosity. People share a belief, for example, that throughout the human society, it is the greed that incent the development of society for people no matter in which society who always want to get more, want live a better life although they are already living out a relative good life so that they have to work harder and harder leading to a rapid develop of society. In a no dissimilar way, the curiosity is the murder to unknown for scientists who explore the mystery in and out universe. In any history book, it is common to find the above on the people in different time.(我似乎知道我的问题了,我写的那篇少了一个反驳的过程,先说人们确实不同,然后再去叙述人们存在相似,我少了这一步骤,···恩,我那里确实有问题)However, at the same time, we also can’t pay a suspicion attitude to these person having liven(为什么用这个时态?没见过这种用法) in different periods that there are countless differences whether on clothing, diet or on thinking pattern due to the develop of technology and economy. Because of the improving economical level(以前我有位老师讲过,经济水平,科技水平 直接用economy,technology, 后面千万不要跟level 非常的platitude), people are concerned to(be concerned about  关心) clothing not only on warming but on fashion which, of course, must attribute to the development of technology. (这句话有问题,你的表述是:前面说因为经济,所以人们关心衣服,而这些东西都源于科技发展。矛盾了··)It is the technology that makes the material of clothing various. Similarly, on diet, today people pay attention to healthy diet in place of repletion. On these aspect, different people in different time hold a(n) unlike opinion.
Obviously, history provides a abound material to know of the dissimilar and similar in different time. But if the purpose just is that, historian needn’t take pains to study the history in different time. a series of history is full. The fact is contrast. And what is the truth of studying history is the major benefit
It is because of (because of 频繁出现,可换换别的啊·例如:due to, as a result of, owing to,)the predicting future and then bringing benefit to modern society that one generation and the next generation goes on having a research on history. Firstly , from the history events, we can prevent the similar calamity from happening again. Lessons from economic crisis, for example, can prevent the occurrence of it again in future. Secondly, if we can search the trend that how the society develop, we can predict what will happen next, and what we shall do to reply. Not only we but also our generation can gain great benefit from it.
To sum up, there are both similarity and dissimilarity between people recently and people in the past, and at the time breaking down the illusion is not our chief benefit of the study of history. It is the chief benefit that gaining lessons from calamity in history and then exerting it to modern society bringing benefits to us and next generation.
To sum up, from what mentioned above, I can confidentially draw the conclusion that the chief benefit of history is far more than just break an alleged "illusion", the function of history lies in imparting lessons to present people and assisting our offsprings to construct a better future. 根据你的意思改写了下最后一段,因为我觉得benefit这个词 一直在出现。 当然不是说你的结尾有问题,一时兴起,随便写写···o(∩_∩)o... )

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